10 lines max
no crew
no ryclycling
no dick ridin
AAAIIIGHT
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10 lines max
no crew
no ryclycling
no dick ridin
AAAIIIGHT
yo ill checkin i about a hour im already battling some1 eles so hold up
ill burn you up wid vouls that will disablise,
ur rhymes are like water they only vapourise//
u dispatch good lyrics like water through a damm,
coz u can't beat me up 4 lyrics,like u did to ur old age gran//
coz like a boxer i roll wid da punch, and life is my task,
u so damm ugly and dats wen u wen u wear a mask//
my rhymes are da origin of hip-hops elte,
theres more chance of having 3 feet,then u aving a good chance to compete//
life was Gods consept, and he filled it wid love and hate,
il put lyrical cap in LUST'S rep bfore it to late, coz he is classing himself..and its overate//
ur life is been lived as a cheep scate,dont complain tho,
coz atfer u've read dis you will be renewing ur flow..i gota find a real challenge,gota go....//
yo check in lust......drop ur verse soon dawg, i bin waitin for ages!!!!!!
aaaaiiight!!!!!
I think he got scared and went into a different web site
yo im back im checkign in now give me 30 mins to write my verse
lmao lyrical mc should win by default cos lust is prewritin and just blatantly admitted to it...
i was misled i finnally found away to convince lyrical mc to drop dead
im here now dont pretend i didnt warn u ,bring it if you want
lyrical mc all you do is bitch and scream and shout, but then you ran ya mouth, and dissed the king out clout
oh shit Lust is here , whats this bout ? is lyrical mc gunna fuckign pout
i got 10 lines to finish u and i aint close to done yet
a english rapper wtf is that , do me a favor quit and go have some tea and crumpets
i got u hung with my lines like ur a fuckign puppet
u dont deserve to battle me ... u should quit
ur lines are whack, my lines are better then any lines u ever spit
you only get one chance to live u might as well die now
uppin for votes....................
Yo, dis was a weak battle, but lyrikal MC takes it purely because his verse had structure and flow. His verse wasnt the best that I have seen him produce but it was still enough to beat Lust. Both of them didnt contain any real hard hittin punches.
Lust obviously pre written as well.
but keep it up both you you. PZ
vote lyrikal MC
uppin 4 votes.....LUST YOUR SHIT IS PREWRITEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lyrical.. a few relatively ok punches.. opener wasnt terrible.. u got the rite idea wiv metas i guess.. jus make em more personal an wittier..
Lust.. dawg u gotta sort it out.. there is nothin even like a flow.. each punch is old and stand alone.. an both ya opener an closer didnt rhyme, let alone make sense.
Vote = Lyrical
Drop a vote here if uv got enuff posts:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120
... tsk tsk stk.
oi do u wana be instead? il mash u upQuote:
Originally Posted by Lyrical MC
^^^^dnt free post on dis tread.....vote ppl vote plz.....!!!!aaaiiiggghhtt
uhh..this battle was ok I guess. In my opinion you both need help when starting and ending your raps. I think lyrical MC had much better punches because I couldnt find many from Lust. Lyrical MC's rap at least had flow and structure. Lust's didn't. That's why Lyrical MC receives my vote.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
aiight not da best battle i've ever seen but it was aiight....lyrical mc takes dis one because he had punches and better flow/structure....lust could've one only if he had taken da time to fix his structure cuz his shyt wasnt dat bad, sorry i can poll vote but id say lyrical mc takes dis one no doubt
Both Ov Yall Suck! I Never Seen Such A Shity Battle. Those Rymz Were Cheaper Than Both Ov Ya Mammaz. Stick To Wut Ever Else It Iz That Yoo Guyz Do Cuz Rappin Aint It.
Ya Bitchdizzles.
^^^^^^yo get off dis tread....ur jst upin ur posts^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
This battle was weak, i think both of you need to practice alot!! I'm only battling on noob battles because i remember what it was like never getting any votes, this sin't really voting on. . .But
Lyrical Mc takes structure even though their was very little of it, his verse flowed slightly better, but both catergories are taken marginly, also his punches hit a bit harder and he attempted punchlines but the concepts didn't get worded properly therefore didn't follow through. Keep practicing Lust and Lyrical.
V/Lyrical MC
Lyrical MC check your PM's.
..............yo peeps lets get dis battle finshed.........................
please vote on dis battle (honest votes please)......leave links....aaaaaiiiiggghhhttt
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yes real weak battle but the NEWB lust gets this battle because of his structuer was just alittle better...............
v/LUST
well, lyrical mc had a much better verse i thought, ok punches, you had a couple of nice meta's...the opener would of been better if that typo wasnt there..i couldnt really tell what you were trying to say....that last word on the first line.....(distabalize??? or disablize???) your flow was alright, went a little long in a couple of spots, but it went well.....structure was ok...the content was mleh....alright i guess, still enough to get him the win..
Lust-your flow and structure are a little off, makes it a bit hard to read, your closer was weak and didnt rhyme...try to work on those closers...and lots of your words dont rhyme very well, some vocab would prolly help....your punches were kinda weak...try being a little more creative....i've seen better from both of you...keep at it guys....
drop a vote on one of my battles!.......thanx
oops...sorry vote: Lyrical MC
1 more vote 2 finish dis up....please vote................!!!aaaiiiggghhhttt!!
dis was a close battle...lyrical mc takes it tho coz his punches hit harder and he had flow.....lust was ok but he jst wasnt as good as lyrical mc...
v/lyrical mc
Lyrical MC: you had a great flow going on; your punches came thru real hard and you had sum nice multis; I would like to see more of your personals tho cuz you had only a few; your structure was aight
Lust: You din't have anything called a flow; your punches were just played with no real interesting words; you barely had personals and your verse din't make any sense; your structure was aight I suppose
Overall vote : Lyrical MC