10-15 LINES
ok blind spit
drop in 30
ill set up 3-0 votes = win or first to 5
do hate or dr votes
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10-15 LINES
ok blind spit
drop in 30
ill set up 3-0 votes = win or first to 5
do hate or dr votes
checkin in waiting for timeles
we drop in 30 mins
i'm ready checkin in..............................
i made damn sure i added no d.r votes to da battle rules
coz before timeless gets banned all his votes are from dick riding fools
hes already pm'd me 3 times asking me to vote on his crap
if u think this ho can rap check ya eyes, ya visions blurred by cattaracts
with lethal prescision i spit metaphores by da milion
killing more people den a jumbo jet collision
sweat drips from rivals pores and drowns mc's gallore
while timeless spits his crap like its horse manure
fuck these last 2 lines peeps uve heard enough to decide
token just add the win straight to my record u know its certified
Since Time didn't know not to use recycled lines I deleted all posts but check ins and Codes verse. Timeless can write a new verse now.
Handled
fucking hell code you fuckin chump, i'm starting to get over worked
i've already beat you 5-1 in this battle, So now ya gonna get merked
ya went cryin to token makein excuses, so now were battlein new
you complained i reycycled,which i did. so now i'm recycleing you
I left the shitty crew your still in, to join the voice of the streets
before i see ya tryin to battle elite again, you'll prob get 187 defeats
you didnt *throw* any decent personals, cause I grappled ya fists
and i know ya Verses Are all *Bruised Up* caz bitch I Tackled Ya Spits
and what the fuck was that hourse manure line, its so played and wack
you could of at least sed that when code-187 spits ya know hes talkin crap
so thats the end of this bitch, you should lose coz dawg you've sinned
and even with this really shit verse against you i know its gonna win.
I'M REALLY SORRY TO THE PEOPLE WHO TOOK TIME TO VOTE ON THE BATTLE BEFORE FOR WASTIN THERE TIME, BUT CODE JUST SEEMS NOT TO LIKE LOSEING SO HE DECIDED TO CRY INSTED.
uppin this battle.............................will return the favour
Yo, Timeless got this.. he has nicer flow, his punches were more personal then what was thrown at him. the punches were better overall I think too. creativity, both had some of it. Only difference though was that it didn't seem like codes were really aimed at anything, just wordplay. timeless had nice creative punches aimed at code. not really hard one to decide on. although, code ur verse wasn't bad.
vote- time
PLEASE, hit up my battle vs tilleyedie.. i'm tired of votes getting thrown out and i'm up 4-0.. please check it out. been up way too long.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...55#post1157955
Punches: eh, Time took this, this was a weak battle with no real punches
Multies: Time, I'm not even sure he had that many, but he had more than code
Personals: Time, but he also got to re-write his so I'm not gunna hold this category against code
Wordplay: Code, the two lines Time had wordplay it was crap, I mean man you had to asterix it
Flow:Time, just straight up better
Structure:eh, tie
vote, Time, not by much though, good battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112648 You guys know what to do...
thanks but you didnt poll vote, just the way my lucks goin in this battle, anyway uppin.......
Weak Battle. Timeless you fed off his verse and then swayed...after but meh...still came harder
Code...good punches but played...try and get some personals...they help build up a battle...but overall pretty weak...maybe next time
Time...you fed for a bar...but eventhough...the others were hard enough to win...they were more personal and over all more creative even though most were also played
Vote Time.
Code-187- Your verse was pretty damn good, the flow was a little weak, and the vocab was good but they didn't always excatly fit in kind of seems like they were just thrown in there to make the verse look pretty...
Timeless- This was a real nice verse i always like readin yours cause you know how to battle, your vocab on this one was pretty simple but i still liked the punches, you really got it goin on man, you definitely got this one..
Vote Timeless
Gah can't edit for some reason, but please return the fav..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113239
ya yo both ya flows weak, now my vote gona be based on who came harder and all, im go withg timeless only becuz code had sume idiotic shyt in there, kept it reppin peeps.
vote: timeless
Uppin............................................. .....
i made damn sure i added no d.r votes to da battle rules
coz before timeless gets banned all his votes are from dick riding fools
eh... The openign could have been more. Over all the punchs were weak
hes already pm'd me 3 times asking me to vote on his crap
if u think this ho can rap check ya eyes, ya visions blurred by cattaracts
eh.. i want proof.. f true ya makes this line pretty dope, but i dont see any so that ish ish eh. follow through could have been spit better
with lethal prescision i spit metaphores by da milion
killing more people den a jumbo jet collision
The bar is alright.. it had a weak metaphor though and could have been spit better alogn with harder punchs
sweat drips from rivals pores and drowns mc's gallore
while timeless spits his crap like its horse manure
the set metaphor was dope o thought, but you fell off with the follow through bar, it could have been alot better
fuck these last 2 lines peeps uve heard enough to decide
token just add the win straight to my record u know its certified
Play concept, i throw a line like the first one a few weeks back. Sort of self boasting wit the follow through.
You could have used alot better punchs, somethign more directed as well as metaphors that were a little better. Over all you should work on those then try for multis and a better flow
fucking hell code you fuckin chump, i'm starting to get over worked
i've already beat you 5-1 in this battle, So now ya gonna get merked
eh, the openign could have spit a punch a little betetr
ya went cryin to token makein excuses, so now were battlein new
you complained i reycycled,which i did. so now i'm recycleing you
feeling the anger in the bar which is helping you a little bit. although your lacking on punchs that are really directed
I left the shitty crew your still in, to join the voice of the streets
before i see ya tryin to battle elite again, you'll prob get 187 defeats
alrgith play off his name. good personal shots i suppose
you didnt *throw* any decent personals, cause I grappled ya fists
and i know ya Verses Are all *Bruised Up* caz bitch I Tackled Ya Spits
alright set, but ive heard the concept before. your follow through could have hit with more of a punch
and what the fuck was that hourse manure line, its so played and wack
you could of at least sed that when code-187 spits ya know hes talkin crap
heh, you fed off his line, but it was a nice flip over all
so thats the end of this bitch, you should lose coz dawg you've sinned
and even with this really shit verse against you i know its gonna win
you could have tryed harder on the ending, the punchs werent much
Over all you had a decent verse, the punchs were alright along with the metaphors but you culd have bumped them up a little.
Vote- Timless
He just came with more punchs i thought, along with a few less played shit in his bars.
Return the honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112998
Thanks, but you forgot to poll vote, thats the secound person whos dun that in this battle!! am i eva going to win :-) uppin.....1 more
Timeless...
Youve already won... Its 3-0 to you... And in the rules... It says 3-0 = win OR first to 5 votes...
I'll post this in IR...
ohhh yea good spot, lol, i didnt even realize, thanks freeman!!
Timeless - its not recommended that u confesss to recyclin in a battle.. that line almost killed ya.. but u picked it up from there an stayed consistant to the end.. harder punches an a few nice personals chucked in there made for an ok read.. nicer concepts made for better meta4s.
Code - too much 'self-glorification' an not enough punches im afraid.. looked like u packed a load of filler in to complete the verse.. personals werent connecting an the flow was choppy.. not a nice read.. but uv come stronger before so keep elevatin.
VoTe = timeless
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120
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