Till Eye Die vs CAMROK

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Cam Rok.. ?? Hold On Lemmie Waste This Line
Laughed So Hard I Nearly Forgot To Rhyme
What The Hell You Sucha Biter You Bit Ya Name
Wait It's CamRon Your Just That Close To Fame
I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey
Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby
Wait You Don't Even Speak That.. It's Worse
You Talk Shit That Is Lookin Lyrically Cursed
Bitch More Predicted Then Volcanoes To Burst
And Ya So Dispicable That Ya Need To B Dispursed
Destroyed.... Bitch Ya Out Of This System
You Swinging Strikes Faster Then You Could Miss'em
Yeah Im Asian To Let You Know Me Idol Is Jin
This Bitch Has To Be White He Has Em In His Sig

Little Asian, straight out the alleys of the Hong Kong hood
Zero chance of winning, same chance any Dynasty Soldier could
If this cat gets a vote, I'm sorry, it's been rided
Keepin pride, this guided missile, make this battle lop-sided
Better open ur Eye-lids, cause I'm straight merkin you son
Each line, like a 200 ton bomb dropin on you as you run
This rhymes a pile of quick sand, better keep your feet up
Can't get away, same way ur wife wants a pre-nup
You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this
I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids
Listen to this shit, ever hear a japanese crack whore rap?
He doesn't make sense, not consistent, talking backwards laps
Till-Eye-Die, what the hell is that supposed to mean
I'm shittin on ur azn pride, time to die, oops just made ur eyes bleed

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til eye u had ok flow, the punches were kinda bland though, didn't really hit hard, and u didn't have many personals, u gotta use more personals. cam u had weak flow, punches were a lil more creative, and u had more personals. cuz of that..vote-cam

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I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey
Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby

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..this was ok, good flow, diss culda been better though
-cam

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You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this
I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids

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..flow is a lil off, but the punch is ok.

you kno my vote, so i'm just gonna say both ya'll need to elevate. cuz these verse weren't that good.

peace

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Yo, Vote this! drop links.... i'll check them

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WHAT CAN I SAY CAM ROK TAKES IT IN EVERY CATEGORY.
LIL ADVICE TO TILEYEDIE: GET OFF THE ASIAN PRIDE IT ONLY WORKZ ONCE AND JIN GOT IT.

HIT THIS UP:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

camrok took everything ted was preety weak overall
like the person above said cut the asian pride shit
alot of ur lines were corny as fuck
both could work on vocab

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Lets see some votes

I definitely think Camrok should win this one. The fact that he referenced an atom bomb destroying an Asian was a kicker because it alluded to Hiroshima really well. Can't vote yet, but would vote for camrok.

Vote on this please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280

Yo, lets see 2 more votes... forgot to put a KO rule.. This is Up^in< #>4

Cam Rok.. ?? Hold On Lemmie Waste This Line
Laughed So Hard I Nearly Forgot To Rhyme
What The Hell You Sucha Biter You Bit Ya Name
Wait It's CamRon Your Just That Close To Fame
weak 2 bars, no real good punches or personals
I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey
Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby
Wait You Don't Even Speak That.. It's Worse
You Talk Shit That Is Lookin Lyrically Cursed
whack....you mentioned a furby in a battll...tsk..tsk
Bitch More Predicted Then Volcanoes To Burst
And Ya So Dispicable That Ya Need To B Dispursed
Destroyed.... Bitch Ya Out Of This System
You Swinging Strikes Faster Then You Could Miss'em
weak
Yeah Im Asian To Let You Know Me Idol Is Jin
This Bitch Has To Be White He Has Em In His Sig
weak closer. Check Whackness Emergency Center man for battle tips



Little Asian, straight out the alleys of the Hong Kong hood
Zero chance of winning, same chance any Dynasty Soldier could
Blah...played
If this cat gets a vote, I'm sorry, it's been rided
Keepin pride, this guided missile, make this battle lop-sided
Better open ur Eye-lids, cause I'm straight merkin you son
Each line, like a 200 ton bomb dropin on you as you run
kinda weak, but ok
This rhymes a pile of quick sand, better keep your feet up
Can't get away, same way ur wife wants a pre-nup
You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this
I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids
weak
Listen to this shit, ever hear a japanese crack whore rap?
He doesn't make sense, not consistent, talking backwards laps
Till-Eye-Die, what the hell is that supposed to mean
I'm shittin on ur azn pride, time to die, oops just made ur eyes bleed
decent

Camrock took this battle, TED didn't really come with anything creative, no real good punches or personals. Cam cam alright, some played Asian jokes..but he did slip a few good punches in there. Both could work on being more original and creative in their punches/personals/metas. Vote- Cam

Honest votes here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337

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cam took this battle easly....eryones lines where either weak or played...but yeah

vote-CAM

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. dont post twice, and your vote was crappy. read voting rules. - Feeble Minded

hit these battles up so i can start battling again and i will return an honest vote..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111925

Very good personal punches by Camrok. For example, the atomic bomb reference was very fitting for someone who claims japanese pride, and Camroks closer about making Till eye die's eyes bleed was pretty good word play.
On the whole, I feel like TED is totally overplaying the asian pride shit, and he need s to spend less time glorifying himself and more time attacking his opponent.
MY VOTE IS FOR CAMROK

Hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315

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I need one more vote, all my votes keep getting knocked off.
Leave links people

TILL EYE DIE =

Cam Rok.. ?? Hold On Lemmie Waste This Line
Laughed So Hard I Nearly Forgot To Rhyme
OK OPENER
What The Hell You Sucha Biter You Bit Ya Name
Wait It's CamRon Your Just That Close To Fame
NAH
I'll Beat Ya Ass From Japan Back To New Jersey
Ya Spit More Jibberish Then That Talking Furby
LOL, GOOD LINE
Wait You Don't Even Speak That.. It's Worse
You Talk Shit That Is Lookin Lyrically Cursed
RUBBISH LINE
Bitch More Predicted Then Volcanoes To Burst
And Ya So Dispicable That Ya Need To B Dispursed
OK , NOT REALLY THAT GOOD THO
Destroyed.... Bitch Ya Out Of This System
You Swinging Strikes Faster Then You Could Miss'em
OK, CONTRAST.
Yeah Im Asian To Let You Know Me Idol Is Jin
This Bitch Has To Be White He Has Em In His Sig
JIN AND SIG DIDNT REALLY RHYME. BUT I GOT WHAT YOU MENT

CAMROK =

Little Asian, straight out the alleys of the Hong Kong hood
Zero chance of winning, same chance any Dynasty Soldier could
NICE OPENER
If this cat gets a vote, I'm sorry, it's been rided
Keepin pride, this guided missile, make this battle lop-sided
OK
Better open ur Eye-lids, cause I'm straight merkin you son
Each line, like a 200 ton bomb dropin on you as you run
OK, NOT THE BEST LINE THO
This rhymes a pile of quick sand, better keep your feet up
Can't get away, same way ur wife wants a pre-nup
LOL, NICE LINE
You'll be losing out in the end, just like you're losin this
I feel sorry for those future people, who might become ur kids
LOL,LOL
Listen to this shit, ever hear a japanese crack whore rap?
He doesn't make sense, not consistent, talking backwards laps
BLA
Till-Eye-Die, what the hell is that supposed to mean
I'm shittin on ur azn pride, time to die, oops just made ur eyes bleed
BAD CLOSER :(

CLOSE BATTLE BUT I THOUGHT CAMROK JUST HAD IT WITH BETTER LINES, HES MADE ME LAUGH AS WELL, TILL NICE TRY, THIS BATTLE WAS REALLY CLOSE.

VOTE = CAMROK < BETTER PUNCHES. NICE BATTLE