aiight no dickridding votes, no hate votes..
and you spit first
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aiight no dickridding votes, no hate votes..
and you spit first
check in though..........................................
Checkin in...................I'll drop ASAP
Ok....goodluck
How do I begin.........You dont beat anyone viewed as ill
Look at your win list, score is, herbs - 15, dope Mc's - nil
I got a line to fill...blah blah blah blah...blah blah blah
^^^Thats pointless, but still spittin better than you are
Your lines aint up to par, just like a fake Tiger Woods
Your lines are average, mediocre, not even rated good
And you should give up this rap, do it now, immediatly
Coz I Pm'd you, and you made excuses not to battle me
And rb knows you crumble against any half good vet
We pack you up, put you in a cage, use you as a pet
But dont let this make you think you'll never be dope
Stay dreamin.....just keep tellin yourself you got hope
Your a joke, a pussy, a cissy, a faggott, a bitch, a fart
And you know that your wack, deep down in your heart
You just play the part of a dope MC....really you a ho
Like in the movies, when a gangsta's really Al Pacino
Done....
ill verse LM....
Vote on these battles,and i'll come back and vote on urz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111747
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111608
^^Don't you know better than that...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111735
LOL drop an honest vote - but I'll be back to vote regardless
lol..aiight man
check ,
Lm it should be obvious to you that your the wackest BITCH IN TOWN
cuz all you do is take DICKS IN POUNDS
the image in your avatar sums up your battles perfectly.. their always WRITTEN DOWN
you better quit talkin shit.. before i call out them CRIPS AN HOUNDS
to start SPITTIN ROUNDS and leave your whole family buried in a DITCH IN GROUND
i mean damn read your rhymes.. how much more stupidness can your LINES TAKE
kid you RHYME FAKE
half of your words are spoken with the intelligence of a PRIME APE
and all everyone does is read your VERSE AN LAUGH
cuz you rhyme like all your brain cells just BURST AN CRACKED,
its easy to find mcs smarter than you just listen to a retarted PERSON RAP
WHY SHOULD I BATTLE WITH YOU AND WASTE MY TIME
ILL PUT A GUN IN YOUR 'MOUTH' AND LITERALLY MAKE YOU TASTE MY NINE
even if you was an FBI AGENT and this battle was held over the ~PHONE~ you still couldnt TRACE MY LINES!!(their above his head)
so hey you fuck this fake vet.. he DICK LICKS
get put on my HIT LIST,
AIR your corny battle on MTV at 4:00 cuz your DIS'S' MISSED
ripped!
LOL........we'll see bout that. Goodluck anyway!!!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by :)
waiting for lms.. dickridding votes..............................
primeates are actually quite smart....
strucuture-LM
flow- Smiley
punches- smiley
creativity- smiley
entertainment-smiley
meta4& multis- smiley
vote/ smiley
it wasnt a complete merkin, he won by a lil, his punches seemed wittier and creative, but he did go a lil off towards the end, smiley wasnt strong all the way through like LM, LM was consistent but smiley had sum good lines that won it for him....
plees hit up links in my sig..... thanx
1 to 0 uppin.......................................
Punches: Smiley, just overall humor, LM's were alright, but Smiley's were funny.
Wordplay: Neither, didn't see any
Multis: Smiley, used all 2-4 syllable multis
Personals: LM, both had a good amount, LM had his share
Vote - Smiley
Lm's verse was a little weak, so this battle goes to Smiley. LM, flip some multis, but I see you got the punches and personals down pretty well, Smiley, you gotta use less filler, but overall good verses.
half of your words are spoken with the intelligence of a PRIME APE
Best line from Smiley
And rb knows you crumble against any half good vet
LM's best line
Return te favor in my sig, thanks.
I cant believe this.....I still think I killed him
lm.. everyone thinks that they win in their battles.. and stop swaying votes man
What was ya sayin bout swayin votesQuote:
Originally Posted by :)
How do I begin.........You dont beat anyone viewed as ill
Look at your win list, score is, herbs - 15, dope Mc's - nil
^bahahh so true so true nice personal......
I got a line to fill...blah blah blah blah...blah blah blah
^^^Thats pointless, but still spittin better than you are
^meh this has really been done ......you know....
Your lines aint up to par, just like a fake Tiger Woods
Your lines are average, mediocre, not even rated good
^ this was an Ok punch come harder make it sting a bit more....
And you should give up this rap, do it now, immediatly
Coz I Pm'd you, and you made excuses not to battle me
^bahahahh i bet he did........
And rb knows you crumble against any half good vet
We pack you up, put you in a cage, use you as a pet
^ehehe OH my goodness good punch.........
But dont let this make you think you'll never be dope
Stay dreamin.....just keep tellin yourself you got hope
^what ...no this was weak dog........
Your a joke, a pussy, a cissy, a faggott, a bitch, a fart
And you know that your wack, deep down in your heart
^damn nice name calling the first line......
You just play the part of a dope MC....really you a ho
Like in the movies, when a gangsta's really Al Pacino
^nice nice....godo punch way to finish strong.....
Lm it should be obvious to you that your the wackest BITCH IN TOWN
cuz all you do is take DICKS IN POUNDS
^this is dumb seriously how long have u been here now andu still use sex lines..
the image in your avatar sums up your battles perfectly.. their always WRITTEN DOWN
you better quit talkin shit.. before i call out them CRIPS AN HOUNDS
^good punch on the first line filler on the second......
to start SPITTIN ROUNDS and leave your whole family buried in a DITCH IN GROUND
^stupid line..........
i mean damn read your rhymes.. how much more stupidness can your LINES TAKE
kid you RHYME FAKE
half of your words are spoken with the intelligence of a PRIME APE
^Good punch only herbs cap their multis son .............
and all everyone does is read your VERSE AN LAUGH
cuz you rhyme like all your brain cells just BURST AN CRACKED,
^meh.....this an Ok punch.........
its easy to find mcs smarter than you just listen to a retarted PERSON RAP
WHY SHOULD I BATTLE WITH YOU AND WASTE MY TIME
ILL PUT A GUN IN YOUR 'MOUTH' AND LITERALLY MAKE YOU TASTE MY NINE
^Blah dude no....make it creative this line is so played ..........
even if you was an FBI AGENT and this battle was held over the ~PHONE~ you still couldnt TRACE MY LINES!!(their above his head)
so hey you fuck this fake vet.. he DICK LICKS
get put on my HIT LIST,
AIR your corny battle on MTV at 4:00 cuz your DIS'S' MISSED
good last line with the Dissmissed the Fbi thing was ok.......
Word i think LM took this because his shit was more personal so it hit harder in my mind....:) no capps for your multis...some of your lines were stretched work on that...Lm if you coming with a punch that isn't a personal you need to make it harder than most of yours were peace out.........
strucuture-LM
flow- LM
punches- smiley
creativity- smiley
multis- smiley
metas-smiley
personals-Tie
LM- Your shit had good flow. Your opener an closer were both pretty creative. Sub par Tiger Woods line was played. Its just your punches in between the opener an closer were kinda weak. They didnt really connect with any force.
:) Your verse was desent, nothing too special. First of all ya structure could use some work, it was all over the place. Punches were pretty good. I liked the opener, nice personal. Mulis were killin it. Prime ape line was pretty good. Some lines were kinda wack tho like - "WHY SHOULD I BATTLE WITH YOU AND WASTE MY TIME
ILL PUT A GUN IN YOUR 'MOUTH' AND LITERALLY MAKE YOU TASTE MY NINE" Not a good punch.
OVERALL- :) gets my vote because his verse was just more creative and had harder punches. I was still pretty close
Return the favor an vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111886
Thanks
aiight so thats 3 to 1.. uppin 2 more votes and i get the win
damn man uppin again.................................
This battle was damn nice..
It was really hard to decide who won this one, I can't criticize either one of you. Or give any advice.. but the way I see it is that LM even though ur punches were real personal and ur punches hit him hard. I think smiley's punches and lines just hit you harder, his creativity was surpassing everything else, and in my opinion he got you. Maybe would be different if u battled again.
vote- smiley
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111802
Hit this up ^^^^ Return favor.
Also if anyone can check out the battle in my sig on page.... 11?? I can't find it. I got 8 votes but up 4-1 and need it over with.
ite ite ite.....
punches- smiley
structure-lm
flow- tie
creativity- smiley
humour- :)
vote- :)
great battle by both.......nice punch lines.....nice flow......but i think smiley took dis one.....
:)- very nice punches......werk on ya structure....nice flow....n humour...lol
lm- nice verse.......kinda 2 serious....nice structure....nice punches....but :)'s hit harder.......nice flow.....but i think smiley takes it for the punches and humour....and creativity....good battle......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358