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blind spit
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no crew d/r bull votes
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ok this is my check in. blind spit so whoever drops first, drops first. good luck
... umm another one murked jeez they sorta jipped me wit ice but.. wha eva
Son .. yeah, son, is what they call you after this
Ima destroy ya this verse hit ya make Real not Exist
But Maybe the D will remain.... hmm i dont think so
Like Bottling water getting dehydrating during el Nino
Boy !'ll d!ss ya just to get ya Angered and P!ssed Off
Don't Matta !ll h!t em from both angles...
................. get his i's all up-side down and cr!ss-crossed
Trust me.. before ya verse a lesson... im hard to follow
Call me Pills because Im fuckin way to hard to swallow
But after if your verse is descent to mine ull be elevated
elevated.. shit u'll be more then that ull be a 'vet' and 'educated'
When ya elevated come back to get schooled then uve been Graduated
This bitch actualy started rapping at the end of 03'
Ima barry this bitch, ended his life.. and he didnt even know me
This bitch will get murked soo fast he'll go from a newb to old news
This Bitch reps a Crew that doesnt even appear in the wannabe crews
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Dint know how to make the swiggly N for El Nino
You'll feel like Hercules swung and hit you, when I verbally kick you
they'll all laugh, not just giggle, when i verbally stick you
using hyperboles* to diss you
i'll curtle your "pimp juice", make girls not want to kiss you
after this you'll always be looked at funny, TiLL-EyE-DiE
you try to elevate after this, that shit wont fly
there's a million ways to kill you, dont know how to begin
I dont blame you for your false confidence, i blame Jin**
I'm sorry to do this to you cause you're only 13
peoples' eyes dont have to die for you to be unseen
but be warned if you have beef, i wont just fight you,
i'll eat you, pussy, just like dykes do
for those that dont know:
*hyperbole- is another word for an extreme.
**Jin- the ruff ryders asian rapper. (tilleyedie is asian)
Till Eye Die's verse..fairly good..not the greatest..some punches..none too great..none that really shined..you need to put more creativity in them and try to get some personals..the flow was good..that was average also..opener wasnt the greatest..but not to bad to come into a battle..closer was ehhh..I give your verse a 6/10
D Realist's verse...kind of weak..hercules punches are played..and "verbally kick you"?..that was weak..verse had alot of weak punches and failed attempts of personals..flow was messed,but not horrible..need to work on that..structure was like *swoosh*<--not a good thing..opener was garbage..the closer was the best line..keep elevating ..I give this verse a 4/10
till eye die gets my vote..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t=dirtyendzone
^^ hit that up..
flow-D
style-tilleye
punches-d
personals-tie
wordplay-tilleye
creativity-d
overall-d
Close battle, both ya'll had ok flows, but the punches could of been better. till eye your flow got choppy near the end, while D's was consistent all the way through, you had sum personals till eye but they wasn't too good or creative. vote-D
fav lines till-it's a played punch, but it flowed well.Quote:
Trust me.. before ya verse a lesson... im hard to follow
Call me Pills because Im fuckin way to hard to swallow
D-good personal,again not very creative, but flow was ok.Quote:
there's a million ways to kill you, dont know how to begin
I dont blame you for your false confidence, i blame Jin**
i voted honestly
can ya'll do the same on my shit with ghostie
thanxx
ok ^^^^^^^^UPPING for the first time^^^^^^^^^^
come on people, the quicker the voting the quicker the closing
Originality - Both
Punches - Till.. more consistant.. connected better.. less filler.. new concepts
Personals - Both
Flow - Both
VoTe = TillEyeDie
Close battle.. but i felt D Realist had too much filler.. Till was more consistant an didnt fall off..
Drop a vote here plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping numero dos^^^^^^^^^^^^
lets get some votes on this shit
uppin
Tileyedie was the better rapper in this battle.
d realists style was much more immature than tileyedie.
jus by looking at tileyedies structure the format was put together completely perfect
so my vote goes to TILEYEDIE
uppin
up
jeez this bitch is sleepin
poll poll poll p[leez
last up... pleez vote.......................................
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin for votes again^^^^^^^^^
upping #4
please vote for real. 2 of the votes shouldn't count but i'm not too mad about it.
the people on this site obviously know how to get votes in their favor, but its ok. i dont feel like going around beggin for votes. I'm too old for that. Please finish this thread. I want to start a new one.