10-20 lines
no crew, hate, d/r, or bullshit votes
Blind Spit
1 hour to spit
check in Venom
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10-20 lines
no crew, hate, d/r, or bullshit votes
Blind Spit
1 hour to spit
check in Venom
R U pussy Venom, check in dawg...........
U have 15 minutes or else I am telling the MODs to close this.......check in pussy
yeah im here u fucker..............................
yo reply to me, so i know ur here too.......................
I'm here and I'm dropping in like 10 minutes so don't feel alone i"m dropping soon
(verse)
I’ll leave this guy icy freezin’, like his style has been so recent
This guy hangs his own self, when he throws one punchline that was decent
He only battles old women, so when I spit, I literally bend him
He got a lethal injection of wackness, that’s how come they call him venom
I pinned him, send him a loss quickly, so he will never forget me
This guy got a “little to excited” when the words “work it” came out of Missy
He hit me..........sike...........I got him looking lost in the night
This guys so retarded, he’d get shot, and then claim he saw a bright light
I don’t even have to change, that’s this guys style and his same claims
His rhymes are all history, like old pictures..........wit no frames
I’m disaster, a new hype, yet you couldn’t even be called a real rapper
Venom is another teen kid, who’s only job is to worship Marshall Mathers
Laughter means I’m inocent, so that must mean that comedy is medicine
But this venom kid couldn’t even think bright, if he was Thomas Edison
yo sorry my internet was shut down because of all the snow we have....
Spit dawg hurry up I didn't waste a verse on ya so spit ya shit dawg
Yo imma spit with in the next 30 mins............................
iight damn dawg to much free posting in this bitch damn no more juss spit and if any MODs read this it wasn't my fault
I'ma spit my wackest verse on this wannabe emcee
because obviously this fag has a facination with me
Really don't care if I win or lose against this sick freak
Venom'z A teen, you wish, this pedophile is on his peak
You think I'm lying.....? Well i got all the Evidence
Dude left me 6 private messages all in single sentences
I started to wonder if this fucker was a homosexual
And yes he is,he wanted to fuck not battle me textual
I read his verse, and thought mc's hurt him lyrically
not for this "SORE" loser punchlines hurt him phsically
he had no flow no structure and bad vocabulary
someone take him away get him a constabulary
now imma end this because this shit was a waste
But imma leave you venom's spit a deadly taste
Vote.............................................. .........
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Punches: 7
Flow: tie
Vocab: tie
Multies : 7
Structure: venom
over all i enjoyed 7's rhyme more since it had better punches and thats what wins battles, but u were both aight it wasnt a merkin or anything....but it allmoast could'eve been. VOTE: 7
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damn that was the best review i ever had....lmao.....
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se7en took this easy
vocab=both
flow=se7en
structure=se7en
overall=se7en
mmm vote = 7
no d/r votes u fucking herb........................................
upppin neeeding some votez........................
punches .... .. ..seven takes this because he had a better sense in directing his punches.. .. ..had some clever shit.. ..as for venom had weak punches.. ..
multisi'LL say that seven took this catagory because venom was just rhyming werds at the end and had no multis
personals.. .. ..both had ok personals but i felt that seven had his more creative and better derected toward venom to diss him better
structure.. ... ... ... venom.. ..
werdplay definitly seven.. ...had more rhymescene as well.. .. .. .. ..
overallseven was like 7/10 as for venom was like 5/10 or 6/10.. ..
voteseven
hit my sig please
uppin............................................. .......
weak battle...
venoms flowed better and had better structure, seemed less forced... Seven had better wordplay...
I think venom got it
7 was definately better. venom's lines were tired and self glorifying rather than punches toward 7. working on post numbers so can't post yet, but 7 should win this one.
Vote on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
opener venom 7 wasnt that good
punches venom some of 7 lines were played out
personals venom
closer 7
vote venom pretty close though
u guys should do a rematch
uppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnngggggggggg................ .........
uppin vote people....................../////////////////
I'm reporting this battle to I.R. because there are alot of unexplained votes in here..and I dont want anyone getting cheated out of a win like I did..so anyway..
Se7en..weak verse..very weak punches..some had some slight creativity..some didn't..not at all..flow was on point at some places..others it made the line run-off..alot of played lines..vocab wasn't the greatest..but it wasn't the worst..structure was garbage..yes..opener was butt..closer made me say :wtf:...yeah..thats not a good thing either..keep elevatin..I give it a 6.5/10
Venom...verse was even more wack..you shouldnt have came with your wackest like you said you did in your first line..although you have so vocab..it made your verse worse..loading your verse with words with more than 3 sylabbles really dont improve it ..it enhance it..but it didnt do a real good job..structure was the best category..punches was below average..I've seen better...but I've also seen worse..so..dont feel bad..flow was average..punches was outright weak..I didnt like any..and none of them impressed me..my vote goes to ..se7en....btw..I give this verse a 5/10..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t=dirtyendzone
hit that up ^^
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when reading both verses 7's caught my attention better. his rhymes and were iller while Venom had alot of played punches. im voting for 7 based on the fact he flowed better, had word play, and his punches hit in the face....not in the stomach.
vote - 7
Se7en merked this kid clean...
Better use of wordplay, metas, and shit.
Better punches.
Se7en just mixed it up more, covered all bases with the catagories and the content (topics) of his verse.
Venom got dragged down by his story...
Talkin bout PM's and a bunch of shit that we can't verify happening.
You should have stuck ta dissing, personals are only effective if we can see that they're true. (post ya links, or, use his avy, his name, his sig, or record)
That shit we can see.
Better overall verse, better punches.
7
Holla back right here!
yo come on people vote this battle should be closed just a couple more votes
Upping............................................ ..........
upping for votes...................................
Upin for the last vote..........................................
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se7en wins this... venom shouldnt try to tell a story when battling bechuz no1 really cares..this isnt a topical battle terefore we dont need a story..basically se7en slaughtered in every category..not a very good battle....but se7en won this simply on his half-ass punches...i know he can come better than this bullshit but maybe thats all he felt he needed...w/e though..
v/se7en
Se7en Has 5 More Ups.
Carry on.
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