blind spit......
due in 30 min afta both chek in.....
no crew .....d/r....
explained votes......
lez do dis.....
o n max 14 linez.....
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blind spit......
due in 30 min afta both chek in.....
no crew .....d/r....
explained votes......
lez do dis.....
o n max 14 linez.....
dis iz mah chek in.......12:04 eastern............
u forgot the poll man.. at least i dont see it.. re-make and dont forget poll..
oops.. very sorry.. the poll wasnt on my screen earlier.. well, count this as my check in.. ima start keyin....................now!
ite ite......watch az I rip dis emcee apart.........
Look at dis "newb challenging" ignominy....."LehtalNJectionz"....**
He got lost somewhere in hiz flow.....n he askin me 4 directionz....
To me....i think that lethal+mic=wwwwwwaaaaaaccccckkkkk!!!!!
Get back on track, he runnin' from me as if he were "Iraq under attack"
You couldnt "flip the script" if u stopped...dropped.......n' rolled ova...
Dis bitch tryin 2 fit in da "hip-hop" nation by tellin peeps he a hova...
Yo....no saint.....and no "lethalNjectionz"...can withold my ballz.....
Like fucken raping priests.......dis fag is just like them all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dis fag steppin in mah way.....thinkin dat he culd with stand my power
But ask da 7 pple dat i merked- anything that comes in my way i devour
So sorry to tell you (lehtalnjections)....but ur "shot"...reflected on you
And now u believa all da legends ur mom told u bou me are true!!!
While I was sittin'...i waz thinkin...y rite 14 linez wen i culd kill em in two?
But den i thought....da min. is 10 linez...so why let dis eazy win go to you!
ignominy- disgrace......for da 1st line if yal dun undastand......
ite ite....lolll......letz up dis battle.......n leave ya linkzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......
u have 2 minutez remainin dawg........................
sorry, my mom had to print something out for my little bros basketball team... im keyin my verse right now..
ur timez up..............................................
duz it really take u an hour 2 prewrite.....dam...............
u SHULD b banned or DQ'D!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....but u lucky im not like dat.....uppin 4 ya verse...................
Mic Check..1..2
Here I Go..
...This Ventriloquist Dummy Got The Support Of His {Crew}, With Their Hands In His Ass..Bringing It To Me? I Had To Jump 10 Levels Down Just To Battle In Your Class...
...This Cunt Needs To Confess, Your{N} {O}ver Your Head, So Ill Rudly {P} On {{E}mcee's} Dress.. Your Mood Shifted From Confident To Soul-Broken Like Fat Bitches With PMS...
...{Killer Emcee} Thinks He Rips Shit, But When He Spits The-Board-Cringes..Ill Bust Your Ass In Like Fags Visiting Your House Busting Down The-Door-Hinges...
...Instigating A Battles Like Massaging A Rabbits Foot, Ya Pressin-Ya-Luck..Ya Essence-Is-Fucked Cuz Ya Couldnt Get Into Gear If It Meant Depressing-The-Clutch...
...Just Take The Beating And Leave Your Dignity And Pride..Wishing You Were #1? Thats More Prayers Then God Can Provide...
...Keeping It Locked, So Rock This In Your Sig Kid, “{Lethal}-Is-The-Best”..Cause Your Chances Are Cut Off, Like Mariah Carey Passin Sobriety-Test...
...UPC Barcodes Got More Quotable Bars Then Your Weak Stats..Beating Me? Like Blind Cubans Reaching For Tampons, Close But No Cigar...
sorry it took so long.. but its there.. uppin {1} for some {POLL votes}.. drop a link and ill hit yours up..
ite ite.......uppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn............. ..n drop ya linkz.......................
killer u forgot to poll vote in this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111221
killer had this..... nice but LI jsut couldn't step up to it....LI u messed up your flow an that structure did duck..my strcuture is off too but hell we jsut gotta work on it an keep it simple........... but KE had me readin past teh first line an drawin to his pucnhes....
vote..... KE
make shore u return the honest favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post1146927
link^^
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Killer takes this in my mind, not because of structure or flow, but because of effectiveness of punches which is what wins battles. Killer Emcee had the better set-ups and overall the better feel to his punches, they had more impact because he spent time with them. The same thing can't be said about Lethal. It happens to all of us, just keep elevating.
Vote-Killer
This one goes ta leathal.I liked tha part about pressin ya luck.It flowed aight and the punches where slightly better,and it had nice metas. vote on this
^^^^^wtff.......wa kind of vote iz dat???!! (hellspawn)....dis iz not a vote sway...but cmon dawg...explain ya vote....i bet he didnt even read da verses.....
2-0.....uppin......2............yo lethal....save ya ups....wen i run out den use em....
killer emcee
ite ite......watch az I rip dis emcee apart.........
Look at dis "newb challenging" ignominy....."LehtalNJectionz"....**
He got lost somewhere in hiz flow.....n he askin me 4 directionz....
^^ ok opener 3/5
To me....i think that lethal+mic=wwwwwwaaaaaaccccckkkkk!!!!!
Get back on track, he runnin' from me as if he were "Iraq under attack"
^^kinda whack 2/5
You couldnt "flip the script" if u stopped...dropped.......n' rolled ova...
Dis bitch tryin 2 fit in da "hip-hop" nation by tellin peeps he a hova...
^^ decent 3/5
Yo....no saint.....and no "lethalNjectionz"...can withold my ballz.....
Like fucken raping priests.......dis fag is just like them all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^^kinda whack 2/5
Dis fag steppin in mah way.....thinkin dat he culd with stand my power
But ask da 7 pple dat i merked- anything that comes in my way i devour
^^whack bad flow 1/5
So sorry to tell you (lehtalnjections)....but ur "shot"...reflected on you
And now u believa all da legends ur mom told u bou me are true!!!
mom jokes are whack 2/5
While I was sittin'...i waz thinkin...y rite 14 linez wen i culd kill em in two?
But den i thought....da min. is 10 linez...so why let dis eazy win go to you!
2/5 a lil streched
killer emcee-- 15/35
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lethal
...This Ventriloquist Dummy Got The Support Of His {Crew}, With Their Hands In His Ass..Bringing It To Me? I Had To Jump 10 Levels Down Just To Battle In Your Class...
good opener 4/5
...This Cunt Needs To Confess, Your{N} {O}ver Your Head, So Ill Rudly {P} On {{E}mcee's} Dress.. Your Mood Shifted From Confident To Soul-Broken Like Fat Bitches With PMS...
no flow at all 0/5
...{Killer Emcee} Thinks He Rips Shit, But When He Spits The-Board-Cringes..Ill Bust Your Ass In Like Fags Visiting Your House Busting Down The-Door-Hinges...
poor flow but still ok 2/5
...Instigating A Battles Like Massaging A Rabbits Foot, Ya Pressin-Ya-Luck..Ya Essence-Is-Fucked Cuz Ya Couldnt Get Into Gear If It Meant Depressing-The-Clutch...
kinda whack 2/5
...Just Take The Beating And Leave Your Dignity And Pride..Wishing You Were #1? Thats More Prayers Then God Can Provide...
nice shit 3/5
...Keeping It Locked, So Rock This In Your Sig Kid, “{Lethal}-Is-The-Best”..Cause Your Chances Are Cut Off, Like Mariah Carey Passin Sobriety-Test...
whack 1/5
...UPC Barcodes Got More Quotable Bars Then Your Weak Stats..Beating Me? Like Blind Cubans Reaching For Tampons, Close But No Cigar...
whack 1/5
lethal 13/35
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it came out as a tie but i have to go wit killer emcee he had more punches and better fllow..i didnt choose lethal cause his shit was a bit streched and most of his lines were whack..and had no flow
vote:killer
ite ite ite uppppinnnnnnnnn numbaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 333333333.........
lez get sum more votez up in here.............444444444.......drop ya linkz...n honest votes..........................
dis iz mah last up........n dun lemme wast it.......lol.......................5555555555555
uppin {2} i think... need some {poll votes}.. hes winning 0-2..
uppin numero {3} for {POLL VOTES}.. drop a link and we'll hit it up..
uppin {4} for some fucking {poll votes}.. drop a link and ill hit up.. now {poll} damnit..
Lethal: Opener: nice
Best Punch: Instigatin a battle like massagin a rabbits foot ya pressin ya luck .. ya essence is fucked ... you couldnt get it in gear if it meant you were depressin tha clutch : A++ for punch and play on words
Closing: Beatin me like blind cubans reachin for tampons, close but no cigar: Almost had it but didnt flow out right
Overall: good
Killer: Opener: Ok
you had a few good punches but had a lot of fillers and structure wasnt fluid - u used way too many ebonics pimp..made it hard to understand what u were sayin... overall : mediocre
vote: lethal
i voted for yall so vote on mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111495
i wish it would count, but unfortunately not.. but we need a few more votes.. uppin {5} my last time..
killer: your verse lacked hard punchlines.. you could also improve on your wordplay.. alot of your shit was off target
killer em: i felt like you improved in this battle alot more from your other battles.. i liked the creativity you threw in your verse
vote: killer emcee for the better disses
HAHAHAHAHAHA...LMAO...LOLOLOL...dont even try lethal..yall no who got dis n who dont..yall both did nice..but killer got dis..try harder next time lethal...killer got betta at everythin n u ppl no it
- :nono: S0ySaUCe
Damn ... pretty weak battle, it was aight.... i thnk Lethal got this
He had better wordplay and metahs... Killer threw punches but they were weak and tats all he had goin for him other than a decent flow... i thought Lethals verse flowed better than Killers also so that's why Lethal gets my vote.
Decent little battle here.
Nice read.
Would have been nicer if it didn't have "Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaackkkkkkkkkk* bullshit in it.
And the other would have been nicer if I hadn't been turned inta Clint Eastwood reading the shit.
And what's with the stretchy ass lines, peeps?
Pretty much better everything by Lethal.
His flow was a touch better, but his wordplay stoodout here.
Resulting in better punches.
The "God/Prayers" and the "Cuban" line were real nice...
And stood out more than anything Killer had.
Peace
Agreed With B2k I Thought Lethal Came Better
Lethal- Nice Structure, And Your Punches Were There Also, Most Of Them Hit With not That Many Fillers. Nice Flow, And Your Vocab Was Nice Too. Creativity Was Ok, And Consistency Was Consistent, Lol
Killer- Ok Verse, Ur Structure Was Ok, And Your Punches, Well, Some Of Them Hit Him, Nice Flow And Ok Vocab. Creativity Was Better, But Consistency Was Worse
Punches- Lethal
Flow- Lethal
Personals- Killer Emcee
Structure- Lethal
Overall- Lethal
Hit This Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113017
breakdown:
in my eyes....killer took this one by a little......he had better and stronger punches.....he put effort into them.....
lethalz were kinda fillers......they werent that decent and thought out.....
punches: killer- he came hard out on it.....with stronger and harder punches
flow: tie i really liked how both of you really kept the rythm
personals: killler.....easily
vocab: lethal......easily
vote: killler.....mainly for punches and flow.....nice battle
but killer took this.....no hatee
yo no doubt killer took dis one how structure was aight but his flow was much better than lethals also his lines seemed kind of stretched...close battle but i think killer took dis one in da line about the rapin priest, also his punches were consistant and hard hitting
OK, here's tha breakdown:
Killer - I can tell you are a real emcee... you rhyme in ya text like you prolly speak in real life (slang). The problem is, unless the reader is intelligent enough to deduce the manner and tone in which you are 'rappin' your words, they may not get what you are trying to say. Most shouldn't have a problem with it but some won't get it. Anyway aside from that, work on your structure and PUNCHES, PUNCHES, PUNCHES. Personals too man. That's what battles are about. Don't rhyme about what YOU do or what YOU are, battlin is about dissin your opponent. Every line should refer to the person you are battlin, nothin about yourself. Also, that whole "wwwaaaaaaaaaaacccccccckkkk" thing needs to go, cuz it's.... wack. Overall your verse lacked anything impressive, was just like freestylin, only not as good...
Lethal - OK, let me get my magnifying glass... c'mon man what is THAT? If I have to strain to read a verse, that's automatically one thing against you. You have a lot of good ideas, but you need to find a practical way of getting your ideas across... that structure is difficult to read and lukewarm at BEST. Nothin hot at all. I do see mad potential with your ability to come up with creative wordplay, and you actually threw a punch or two, which is why you won this battle. You need to fix your structure and method before you can elevate. That is all.
vote = Lethal
Look at dis "newb challenging" ignominy....."LehtalNJectionz"....**
He got lost somewhere in hiz flow.....n he askin me 4 directionz....
ok....
To me....i think that lethal+mic=wwwwwwaaaaaaccccckkkkk!!!!!
Get back on track, he runnin' from me as if he were "Iraq under attack"
i get the "wack" part.....but plse stop.....lol.
You couldnt "flip the script" if u stopped...dropped.......n' rolled ova...
Dis bitch tryin 2 fit in da "hip-hop" nation by tellin peeps he a hova...
niceeeeee
Yo....no saint.....and no "lethalNjectionz"...can withold my ballz.....
Like fucken raping priests.......dis fag is just like them all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alright alright alright pretty good
Dis fag steppin in mah way.....thinkin dat he culd with stand my power
But ask da 7 pple dat i merked- anything that comes in my way i devour
ok could work on it but decent
So sorry to tell you (lehtalnjections)....but ur "shot"...reflected on you
And now u believa all da legends ur mom told u bou me are true!!!
moms jokes are played but not 2 bad 1st line was good
While I was sittin'...i waz thinkin...y rite 14 linez wen i culd kill em in two?
But den i thought....da min. is 10 linez...so why let dis eazy win go to you!
very good closer nice
overall- i give you a ummmmmm 7.5/10
..This Ventriloquist Dummy Got The Support Of His {Crew}, With Their Hands In His Ass..Bringing It To Me? I Had To Jump 10 Levels Down Just To Battle In Your Class...
good nice good opener
...This Cunt Needs To Confess, Your{N} {O}ver Your Head, So Ill Rudly {P} On {{E}mcee's} Dress.. Your Mood Shifted From Confident To Soul-Broken Like Fat Bitches With PMS...
please just lose the " { }" your killing it
...{Killer Emcee} Thinks He Rips Shit, But When He Spits The-Board-Cringes..Ill Bust Your Ass In Like Fags Visiting Your House Busting Down The-Door-Hinges...
ok not bad
...Instigating A Battles Like Massaging A Rabbits Foot, Ya Pressin-Ya-Luck..Ya Essence-Is-Fucked Cuz Ya Couldnt Get Into Gear If It Meant Depressing-The-Clutch..
can work on it but ok sorta played with the gear thing.
...Just Take The Beating And Leave Your Dignity And Pride..Wishing You Were #1? Thats More Prayers Then God Can Provide...
ok could revise that and make it better
...Keeping It Locked, So Rock This In Your Sig Kid, ?{Lethal}-Is-The-Best?..Cause Your Chances Are Cut Off, Like Mariah Carey Passin Sobriety-Test...
no offence but very wack could do better
...UPC Barcodes Got More Quotable Bars Then Your Weak Stats..Beating Me? Like Blind Cubans Reaching For Tampons, Close But No Cigar...
ok decent closer not too bad
total: ummmmmmmmmm about a 6-7/10 i dont know why, but I fealt KILLErEmmcees shit more your was good too both good but killeremcee took this one