You know the rules.
Consider this my check in.
Good luck, homie.
-W1
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You know the rules.
Consider this my check in.
Good luck, homie.
-W1
No poll? Any particular reason?
Check in..
Ummm...
This is polled...
-W1
Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
*his sig says “Comedic writer”
**Look at his costom title
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
-W1
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Edited for spelling
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-w1
i will edit in a vote....
but untill then you forgot to poll on mine Wicked
Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
aight...solid punch...7/10
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
hmmm..didnt like this...worded bad...3/10
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
ok..not too much..6/10
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
not really a punch..pretty weak...3/10
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
shoulda come much harder for the closer...3/10
overall ...for illtalic....22/50....44%
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
coo punch....liked this...8/10
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
weak...3/10
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
played concept...average...5/10
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
nice personal....8/10
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
lmao!!....8/10
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
like the wordplay....8/10..strong final lines...
overall for wicked...40/60...wicked wins....
please vote here....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110950
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. You can't use a number rating system to vote. - Axiom
wtf?? i cant do it by breakind down bars??.......thats weak..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111506
help a nigg out and vote on this battle, ill return the favor peace
^ No..
-uppn-
iight...
illtalic
Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Hmm... not bad really... 6/10
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
haha... nice one... hit hard... 8/10
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Hmm... wasnt feelin this line... 5/10
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
dope... 9/10
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
not a bad closer... 7/10
overall... 35/50... decent verse flow was off at one point but you got it back... structure was decent... good... keep it up... pz
W1CKED
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
very nice opener there... good... 8/10
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
hmm... concept wasnt that good... a didnt like it neway... didnt really hit... 5/10
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
maybe its the way that a pronounce 'folk'... but it dont sound like window... but the last line of this bar was decent... played... but decent... 6/10
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Hmm... played out gun lines... but t was a decent bar... decent personal... 7/10
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
flow was terrible in this bar... a didnt like it neway... lol... 5/10
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
decent closer... 6/10
overall... 37/60... not a bad verse... had some good personals in there... keep it up... pz
v/ illtalic...
honestly thought he took this... on the points^... and as his verse was more consistant... ive broke it down and the points were about even... even thought an extra bar was dropped by W1CKED... pz
OUT
Lets get some honest votes in here...
-W1
V/ Wicked, .. due having harder punches and a more enjoyabler verse, italic came iite, .. but he had some fillers in my opinion , .. wicked had a straight verse, .. & took this due punches..
v/ w1cked...
His punches were stronger and he hit harder with personals....illtalic had too many fillers and lacked the creativity which w1cked had.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
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-w1
umm...i cant vote i dont believe..if i can i'll replace this with a vote...but why my name gotta be with wack rejects?...not a wack reject...
smh @ filler.. practically each line was personal.. but w/e..
-uppn-
Ok
illtalic - some played punches there, opener wasn't really hittin, nothin really there as far as substance, and personals were not really there. overall looks like you rushed through it (fuck it we all done that though sometimes) just come harder
W1cked - consistant, witty punches and personals were OK, a well-rounded verse, nothin to complain about, you held this one down.
vote = w1cked
pz
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-w1
Wicked's was just better overall with punches and personals.
Illtalic's was not as enjoyable, or consistent.
The punches were just not hitting hard enough Illt.
V/Wicked
Peep my battle with GameTime please.
Honest.
^Voted on that one days ago...
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Edit:
C'mon man, this battle should be closed by now. Do you think people are dickriding me? Or is it that you think they are hating you? I don't get the point of dqing these votes, seriously. Whatever though, man, but we both know this is lame.Quote:
Originally Posted by illtalic
-W1
Iv had several of my votes disqualified in other battles for a breakdown more comprehensive than the above two..
-fuppn uppn-
W1CKED..............POLL YA SHIT ON MY BATTLE BITCH
-fukkity uppitty-
Quote:
illtalic
Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
Eh...
ok verse.. punches could use work
Personals were decent.. didn't hit hard
Wordplay was eh... flow was pretty good
Structure was good....
some played lines tho
Overall.......12/20
Eh.....Quote:
W1CKED
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
A few played lines..
Punches were decently hitting
Personals were.. blah..
Flow was good
structure was good...
Wordplay was.... eh.. dont kn what to say.
Overall............13/20
V/W1CKED
he edged this one barely
His punches hit a bit harder
v/wicked
illatic-u had a solid verse.....your verse was real good in the beginning but u fell off toward the end.....u had a couple hard hitting punches/personals but your consistancy just fell off at the end
wicked-u had a good verse.....u just edged out illatic cuz your verse had more consistancy....it was a real close battle but u just edged this one out wit some harder punches and more consistancy
vote/wicked
by the way....i was gonna vote on this battle when i got some time so there was no need to post in my thread again wicked