ite man,
12 lines max,
30 mins max,
no d/r
no hate
no crew
no feeding
no freeposting......................
.good luck AGAIN....................pz
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ite man,
12 lines max,
30 mins max,
no d/r
no hate
no crew
no feeding
no freeposting......................
.good luck AGAIN....................pz
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Dangling by his wackness..tryed getting away..but he's hooked
K's Sporting a false win in his sig...
......................................theres no loss for Wise..even look!
Got dickrode to tha max last time..But tha fucker lost it upping
Wanted to acually drop shit for once..I caught his ass dumping
& u got no mass kid..I eat this bitch all day..During every meal
Punches got ya head spinning faster than movie theater reels
Man..you got no hope..what? this'll be tha third time ya a loser?
& I didn't give you shit for ya birthday..
.....................................especially no present for tha future!
Basically didn't even need to diss you son..You do it by posting
K wouldn't have massive flows..if he spit right out of the ocean
You even know it! spitting ya own shit..just makes u nauscious
U must feel real big K..
................Wise has 17 straight wins..& u got 17 straight losses!
Blah keyed fast.....don't change anything In ya shit
To get punches peep tha obvious stuff...his sayings in his sig...etc..
Again lmfa,
Fuck a structure, when ive got lyrics to rupture...and burning bars,
already merked his alias 1's this week.so like a virgin he ent gna cum hard,
so why you asking for a rematch...or do you like being beat twice,
cause face it bitch you got as much chance of winning,
......as Evolve seeking advice........
exchanged wise for kaos...like rupee's you simply not worth it,
fucking hyperkrit saying records dont meen shit..
.......so why you desperate to get yours perfect?....
simular to the earth's crust kaos is under the weather,
leave him like a demented dwarf...not big or clever....
if you don't stay wise in this game then you'll end up fucked,
take a loss under both names...cause you won't have the chance,
.....to do me for upp(ing).......................
...............quick merk again bitch..............pz
So can one of you battle me now?
And K won. Wise came with some corny ass disses, and though K's were half assed as well, his were a bit better, like the Evolve one.
So I go with K.
But I still wanna battle you both.
I agree with P..
Nothin real great by both..
Pretty equal but K takes this..barely but still.
A little more creative with the punches i felt.
So..for a slightly overall battle verse.
Vote K
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
k took this...
his punches were by far better and kaos' were corny and playd...
khad sum gd werdplay and came eith originality.......
neither came great tho
neither used many multis, if any...
structure wasn't brill.......both used the same...
but ma vote goes to
.:K:.
peace
vote fairly plz...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110097
Dangling by his wackness..tryed getting away..but he's hooked
K's Sporting a false win in his sig...
......................................theres no loss for Wise..even look!
ok, could have been better
Got dickrode to tha max last time..But tha fucker lost it upping
Wanted to acually drop shit for once..I caught his ass dumping
Played
& u got no mass kid..I eat this bitch all day..During every meal
Punches got ya head spinning faster than movie theater reels
this one was cool
Man..you got no hope..what? this'll be tha third time ya a loser?
& I didn't give you shit for ya birthday..
.....................................especially no present for tha future!
ok
Basically didn't even need to diss you son..You do it by posting
K wouldn't have massive flows..if he spit right out of the ocean
played
You even know it! spitting ya own shit..just makes u nauscious
U must feel real big K..
................Wise has 17 straight wins..& u got 17 straight losses!
Blah
I've seen you come alot better...Wasnt really feeling this verse
Fuck a structure, when ive got lyrics to rupture...and burning bars,
already merked his alias 1's this week.so like a virgin he ent gna cum hard,
blah, not feelin this one
so why you asking for a rematch...or do you like being beat twice,
cause face it bitch you got as much chance of winning,
......as Evolve seeking advice........
cool
exchanged wise for kaos...like rupee's you simply not worth it,
fucking hyperkrit saying records dont meen shit..
.......so why you desperate to get yours perfect?....
ok
simular to the earth's crust kaos is under the weather,
leave him like a demented dwarf...not big or clever....
the first line was iller than the second...decent
if you don't stay wise in this game then you'll end up fucked,
take a loss under both names...cause you won't have the chance,
.....to do me for upp(ing).......................
this one was cool
Verse was cool, had some decent punches in it
V/K for better punches and more creativity...
Please return the favor in my battle with GaZeebo
-W1
uppin............................................. .....................coo.......................... ................................................pz
OK, Here it is:
Kaos - Nice opener, a lot of personals, couple of played punches but overall a good verse. Consistant punching and witty personals, I felt this was the better verse by far. Don't know why you ain't getting the votes. nice drop
K - Like the "evolve seeking advice" punch - true and hilarious. But I felt that your verse was under par, you should have focused on better personal punches, better wordplay and the structure was lacking. I have seen much better from you. Not bad, just not good enough to take the win in my opinion. no beef honest vote
vote - kaos
pz
Dangling by his wackness..tryed getting away..but he's hooked
K's Sporting a false win in his sig...
......................................theres no loss for Wise..even look!
damn..coulda been good..wording meh...4/10
Got dickrode to tha max last time..But tha fucker lost it upping
Wanted to acually drop shit for once..I caught his ass dumping
meh...4/10
& u got no mass kid..I eat this bitch all day..During every meal
Punches got ya head spinning faster than movie theater reels
ok..not too good...5/10
Man..you got no hope..what? this'll be tha third time ya a loser?
& I didn't give you shit for ya birthday..
.....................................especially no present for tha future!
good personal...solid ....7/10
Basically didn't even need to diss you son..You do it by posting
K wouldn't have massive flows..if he spit right out of the ocean
played...4/10
You even know it! spitting ya own shit..just makes u nauscious
U must feel real big K..
................Wise has 17 straight wins..& u got 17 straight losses!
hmm..needa harder closer....3/10
overall for Kaos Theory...27/60....45%..i think....
Fuck a structure, when ive got lyrics to rupture...and burning bars,
already merked his alias 1's this week.so like a virgin he ent gna cum hard,
balh..horrid wording....3/10
so why you asking for a rematch...or do you like being beat twice,
cause face it bitch you got as much chance of winning,
......as Evolve seeking advice........
meh...didnt like the use of other dude...3/10
exchanged wise for kaos...like rupee's you simply not worth it,
fucking hyperkrit saying records dont meen shit..
.......so why you desperate to get yours perfect?....
decent...5/10
simular to the earth's crust kaos is under the weather,
leave him like a demented dwarf...not big or clever....
played...indeed...4/10
if you don't stay wise in this game then you'll end up fucked,
take a loss under both names...cause you won't have the chance,
.....to do me for upp(ing).......................
wording wack again..but decent...5/10
overall for K...20/50....40%
Winner..kaos theory..unless i messed up the math....
can u guys please vote here..thanx...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739
OMG..........................lmfa........i was 4-0 up................but o/well....more votes pl................................................ ........pz
Umm pretty close battle...
Kaos.. structure was on point throughout.. first bar was tight.. as were most.. good personals.. consistant..
There were two played bars in there.. which fucked the verse up more than anything..
I don't take each bar seperately and evaluate 'cos it takes away from the verse as a whole.. the flow, and how bars compliment the next.. both were on point here..
Other than those two played parts.. a tight verse...
K.. structure was wack.. coulda worded some parts better.. again, good use of personals.. some good punches.. although I felt they didn't connect at times.. mostly due to the flow..
Creative touches throughout.. but I wasn't feelin the verse as a whole.. a bar or so stood out as real nice.. but the rest was either worded badly, or just didn't do anything for me..
Therefore..
Vote - Kaos Theory
Props to both.. tight battle..
Breakdown
Kaos' Verse,
Dangling by his wackness..tryed getting away..but he's hooked
K's Sporting a false win in his sig...
......................................theres no loss for Wise..even look!
Nice Opener
Got dickrode to tha max last time..But tha fucker lost it upping
Wanted to acually drop shit for once..I caught his ass dumping
Blah.............
& u got no mass kid..I eat this bitch all day..During every meal
Punches got ya head spinning faster than movie theater reels
That Was A Dope ass line
Man..you got no hope..what? this'll be tha third time ya a loser?
& I didn't give you shit for ya birthday..
.....................................especially no present for tha future!
Another HArd Punchline
Basically didn't even need to diss you son..You do it by posting
K wouldn't have massive flows..if he spit right out of the ocean
That was Wack
You even know it! spitting ya own shit..just makes u nauscious
U must feel real big K..
................Wise has 17 straight wins..& u got 17 straight losses!
Wack
K's Verse,
Fuck a structure, when ive got lyrics to rupture...and burning bars,
already merked his alias 1's this week.so like a virgin he ent gna cum hard,
Wack Opener, could've been better
so why you asking for a rematch...or do you like being beat twice,
cause face it bitch you got as much chance of winning,
......as Evolve seeking advice........
That was A Dope Punch
exchanged wise for kaos...like rupee's you simply not worth it,
fucking hyperkrit saying records dont meen shit..
.......so why you desperate to get yours perfect?....
Back to Back Killer Personals and Punches
simular to the earth's crust kaos is under the weather,
leave him like a demented dwarf...not big or clever....
WAck
if you don't stay wise in this game then you'll end up fucked,
take a loss under both names...cause you won't have the chance,
.....to do me for upp(ing).......................
Nice Closer
Punches: K
Wordplay: Tie
Meta’s: Tie
Creativity: Tie
Personals: K
Flow: Neither
Multi’s: Tie
Vote: K
That was a very evenly matched battle. Both emceees came wit hard verses but K got the edge wit his personals and punchlines.
Fav Lines:
& u got no mass kid..I eat this bitch all day..During every meal
Punches got ya head spinning faster than movie theater reels
exchanged wise for kaos...like rupee's you simply not worth it,
fucking hyperkrit saying records dont meen shit..
.......so why you desperate to get yours perfect?....
Ok sure..Quote:
I agree with P..
Nothin real great by both..
Pretty equal but K takes this..barely but still.
A little more creative with the punches i felt.
So..for a slightly overall battle verse.
Vote K
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
It was a good battle..pretty even at points..i felt.
Punches are the most important thing though & Kaos came corny with them..
Flow & structure was on point by most..
But the decisive factor of this battle where the punches..
& i thought K had the better punches.
The Evolvel line was pretty nice...
But yeah, what it comes down to for a overall better,
Battle verse.. vote K
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739
i voted..here now!!!
uppin(3)......thx alot pps............................................... .................................................. ...................pz
Originality - Both
Punches - Kaos
Personals - Both
Flow - Both
VoTe = Kaos
It comes down to this.. both of u came wiv mad personals.. really creative an witty.. both did ur hwk.. jus felt Kaos had more quotables an some fresher concepts..
"Dangling by his wackness..tryed getting away..but he's hooked
K's Sporting a false win in his sig...
......................................theres no loss for Wise..even look!
Got dickrode to tha max last time..But tha fucker lost it upping
Wanted to acually drop shit for once..I caught his ass dumping"
That was a sikk opener an he neva fell off throughout the verse.. props to both of u..
Drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1146607
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Dam, this was a close battle...lol, but who will win...
v/ - K
Why I vote K? He barely edged Kaos on the punches...and less fillers.
"Basically didn't even need to diss you son..You do it by posting
K wouldn't have massive flows..if he spit right out of the ocean"
^Kaos...Then why are you battling him then and all of the disses lol, don't do that man.
Flow was Kaos tho...His was just a smooth read...But K edged him with the personals.
I don't think I need to explain myself anymore than I already have.
Kaos, your punches weren't hittin.
& I didn't give you shit for ya birthday..
.....................................especially no present for tha future!
Could've been worded better... Not very hard hittin punches tho, I see you were tryin to go for the personals, but they just weren't hitting...
:k: You came better. better punches N wordplay, but still lacking some... cause face it bitch you got as much chance of winning,
......as Evolve seeking advice........
Wasn't really feelin this... Overall your verse was better.
Both y'all continue elevatin N such.
Vote: :K:
And um, for some reason I can't vote in the poll.. so.. whateva
breakin it down....
K - good punches....hit hard as shit....personals....nice.....metas...liked......s tructure was a little wierd......flow was there.....overall i say ..... 8/10
KT - good punches too....didnt come across or as direct as k's.....your shit was straight just elevate your punches and personals......cuz u lost this won......
v- K
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Dangling by his wackness..tryed getting away..but he's hooked
K's Sporting a false win in his sig...
......................................theres no loss for Wise..even look!
^alright but this was an Ok personal and then just filler....
Got dickrode to tha max last time..But tha fucker lost it upping
Wanted to acually drop shit for once..I caught his ass dumping
^ok this is kinda...meh ok......
& u got no mass kid..I eat this bitch all day..During every meal
Punches got ya head spinning faster than movie theater reels
^this is clever a good punch..not personal though....
Man..you got no hope..what? this'll be tha third time ya a loser?
& I didn't give you shit for ya birthday..
.....................................especially no present for tha future!
^ok this was a thoughful punch....not very hard though...
Basically didn't even need to diss you son..You do it by posting
K wouldn't have massive flows..if he spit right out of the ocean
^been done....especially the first line.....
You even know it! spitting ya own shit..just makes u nauscious
U must feel real big K..
................Wise has 17 straight wins..& u got 17 straight losses!
^eheh an Ok personal but you reppin wise to much you are Kaos....
Fuck a structure, when ive got lyrics to rupture...and burning bars,
already merked his alias 1's this week.so like a virgin he ent gna cum hard,
^Virgins cum hard!!!!....what are you talkin about.....bad meta4...
so why you asking for a rematch...or do you like being beat twice,
cause face it bitch you got as much chance of winning,
......as Evolve seeking advice........
^clever used another rapper from the site...nice nice....
exchanged wise for kaos...like rupee's you simply not worth it,
fucking hyperkrit saying records dont meen shit..
.......so why you desperate to get yours perfect?....
^oooo nice personal punch....good play good play....
simular to the earth's crust kaos is under the weather,
leave him like a demented dwarf...not big or clever....
^LOL at this fuckin Meta4......
if you don't stay wise in this game then you'll end up fucked,
take a loss under both names...cause you won't have the chance,
.....to do me for upp(ing).......................
HEheh nice personal closer....even though K doesn't fuck virgins correctly and moslestes dwarves he had a more personal verse which i think hit harder....Kaos worry less about your alias and just get him where it hurts personaly....