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10 lines
Blind spit, due 25 minutes after we both check in
No hate/crew/etc
All votes must be well explained.
200 post minimum to vote
my bad i left somewhere, bain was supposed to post it for me..he forgot my bad man.....
here it is
Lyrics thinks he’s good, this fag is wrong, anyone’s better-then-this-dame
I don’t need to tell his future, cause its told by the first letter-in-his-name
Its funny, This kid claims-I-suck, when all his wins came-from-luck
Sorry to tell u but your sig will remain the same-u-fuck* (free agent, he wont get picked)
I’m new yet u had to test-me-first? U think I suck, jus check-my-verse
Your death is in these 10 lines, I don’t even need my tek-to-burst
U should expect-the-worst, cause lyrics-is-trash, my skill…u should fear-it-u-ass
‘Cause if your lyrics come from the soul,’ you need a ‘spiritual-class’/ (get it?)
Now I’m not aggressive, but u jus felt obligated to open-your-trap
And your friends were only joking when they said you were chosen-to-rap…..
k spittin ASAP.............................................. ..........................
Your sig says you 'consummate', maybe towards imperfection
Multi::Talented? Maybe...but ya goin in the wrong direction
Kid was labeled a cripple just got off the list but still invalid...
He learned to type and think...now we call him multitalented...
This kids at the highest point of perfection?..........................
.................................................W ell i jus threw him down
Your punches were off, ya lines were played,........................
.................................................. ..and I'm jus clownin now
I'm bagging this kid easily, cause he acting fiesty.......kinda funny
Punches penetrate so far in his chest he like a ventriliquist dummy
Battles finished you got merked, ya suck now accept ya loss
Cause like public education...son...I schooled ya at no cost
uppin #1. Drop a vote and leave a link
"Lyrics thinks he’s good, this fag is wrong, anyone’s better-then-this-dame
I don’t need to tell his future, cause its told by the first letter-in-his-name"
pretty tight multi. i gotta give you that...
"Kid was labeled a cripple just got off the list but still invalid...
He learned to type and think...now we call him multitalented"
was very tight, and complex but still came accross.
i liked lyric's punches and connections more in this one.
i gotta give it to him...
vote: lyric
i THINK LYRIC TOOK THIS..CUZ HE PLAYED OFF YA NAME REAL BAD..AN IT KILLED U MT.SHIT THIS WAS ONE OF THE FINER BATTLES IVE PEEPED ALL DAY..BUT I THINK LYRIC TOOK THIS HANDS DOWN GOOD SHIT FROM U BOTH..
SEE U CATS ARE ELEVATINSHIT...
vOTE-LYRIC..
PEEP THE LNIK BOTH U CATS.PLZ.ITS cLOSE..I HIT YA SHIT UP..HIT MINE PC
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110068
uppin #2. PLease hit this up
think lyric took thiz, he had a better structure and vocabulary... he had ok punchez while some of mt were kinda wack...
vote - lyric
return the favour plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110377
uppin #3. Please drop an honest vote here guys.
The slightly better punches where for Lyric..
Good verse, vocabulairy & well structured..
Multi had slight stretched lines & the-shit-is-wack..
So for basically a better battle verse..
Lyric
Punches: Lyric
Wordplay: Lyric
Multis: Multi
Personals: Multi
opener: Lyrics
Closer: Lyrics
Vote - Lyric
Punches penetrate so far in his chest he like a ventriliquist dummy
Best line of the battle.
Multis verse was pretty good too, just use more punches, or just more effective ones.
uppin #4. Please drop a honest vote here
Here we go last uppin, drop a honest vote here guys.
omg...seriously can we get a vet vote...and the - shit is called a multi..learn your elements u fuck.........im sorry this is funny, w/e.......
Lyric Got this..
Punches-Lyric came harder, ( The Multitalented punch did it for ya)Multi u had some ok humerous stuff ,but lric came cleaner and harder
wordplay- Tie, both used creativity, almost flawless.
Personal-Both had some good personal, I call this pretty much a tie cuz the same amount of cretivity was put into the personals.
flow-Lric got flow cuz multi shit was fucked up cuz of his structure
Structure-Both werent great, but lyrics was a lil bit better then multi's only cuz his rhyme was easier to read
V/Lyric
V/ Lyric
Lyric came harder... his punches were more advanced and not as basic and Multis....multi didnt have good rhyme scheme and threw more multis then punches. wordplay wasnt bad in this battle...alot was tried but didnt come out good, i say about even give or take. Personals... again..that fits in with the Punches catagory... i think Lyrics personals were more creative and harder hitting, Multis were just aight...lyrics flow was good and multis was meh.. both structures werent the best but Lyrics was more decent....that is why lyric took this battle, his verse just was overall better and contained more of the catagorys needed to make a good, hard hitting verse.
wow if this aint sum bullshit. . .heh sum1 was slaughtered. . .lyric
well atleast someone knows......he IS a vet...ive been battlen for a year.....plz someone pay attention to elements.......wordplay...multis......metaphors... ...if your looking for simplicity and below average..vote for lyrics...but my shit has elements.......
multi had one good verse, but it wasnt a punch really, and the rest of his stuff was played out-"I’m new yet u had to test-me-first? U think I suck, jus check-my-verse
Your death is in these 10 lines, I don’t even need my tek-to-burst"
lyric good finisher, das wut got my vote, -clever- good vocab, but u ddint rhyme wit any of 'em, u rhymed wit da played ones, das only thang i care ta write u need ta work on
vote-lyric
PUERTORICANELLY VS. CRICKET
sup ma brothas n sistas hook up some votes in this battle the link is on top much thanks to all who vote
lyric merks.
i liked : Kid was labeled a cripple just got off the list but still invalid...
He learned to type and think...now we call him multitalented...
careful with that ....... structure i dont think u really used it right. basically a verse of average punches but it was still effective because M's verse had this real gay choppy jumpy flow to it when i read it and his punches didnt connect/hit. they were just rhymes. not much of a battle verse..
vote lyric