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you first
i set
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5 bars
you first
i set
no c h dr votes
ight...check it...
graphix like whoa, someone just shit on my fuckin page...
get this fag off the stage, the way i collapse gays...
this kid is like catholic, on his knees but he dont sin...
i kick this kid offa this site, so you wont have to ban him again...*
this is a straight K.O., not no round for round fight...
next time you have diarreah, let me know what his audio sounds like...(uh-oh)
he thinks he only loses cause of dickrides at thugzmansion(.net)...
this bitch doesnt touch reality, even with the sims expansion...
ill leave you left for dead writin your death with your doomed...
he hasn't 'spread blood' since he left his mothers womb...
*he is formally know as GBPusha22
Aight check it
Level these cats like surfacing kittens in spits, I slit, Fresh wrists, quick//
To put your tongue in a dumpster like I trashed your spits, Ills not sick//
Glove dont fit, your not a Ill head like penis tips, not infected with syphilis//
Tying Ills stomach skin and bleaching his organs like his body is tie dyed//
Autograph your death certificate like your certified dead, shot in the head//
Ya bled, to death thats why your skin tones the color red, kilt in a thread//
Fresh dangerous, I want you to breath, so I put a knife in your air socket//
Like Yao, quick to Rocket, carry rhymes like Doctor Seuss in my pocket//
Leave Fresh below a threesome, hes under a train, your not gonna gain//
A win, like Viagra actors, so stop acting hard, Fresh suck, simple and plain//
ill fresh - structure was ok.........flow was pretty good............vocab was pretty weak.........wordplay was ok..........some of the punches were aight...........ok personals........
pysik - structure was good.......flow was on target.........vocab was pretty good.......wordplay was nice.........some of the punches hit hard.........pretty good personals....
conclusion - pysik takes this in flow, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote......
VOTE - PYSIK
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Punchlines - Py
Personals - Ill
Metas - Ill
Wordplay - Ill
Complexity - Py
Vocab - Py
Enjoyment - Ill
Mullti's - None
Vote - Ill
Whack vote. Gone.
-Anon
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ok well this wus a close/weak battle...
Ill-i say you took the personals since i saw none from physik....
your punches were eh... flow wus good strcuture good...
enjoyment(snore)... yeah well pretty weak verse form you...
Physik-no personals from you... and most of your punches were
played... the viagra line always used... also the doctor suess line
is used alot to... im giving u punches just becauz im nice...(nah
becauz other guys were whack) and you had the multis your flow wusnt
very good tho... structure ok...
OverAll-Physik... yall hit up battles n open mic in my sig...
Ill-Fresh
graphix like whoa, someone just shit on my fuckin page...
get this fag off the stage, the way i collapse gays...
not a direct hard hit, really just made u look good
this kid is like catholic, on his knees but he dont sin...
i kick this kid offa this site, so you wont have to ban him again...*
lol...good personal
this is a straight K.O., not no round for round fight...
next time you have diarreah, let me know what his audio sounds like...(uh-oh)
not feelin it....wack punch
he thinks he only loses cause of dickrides at thugzmansion(.net)...
this bitch doesnt touch reality, even with the sims expansion...
blah.. another wack punch wit spamming..lmao
ill leave you left for dead writin your death with your doomed...
he hasn't 'spread blood' since he left his mothers womb...
ok closer...made me laugh actually
Physik
Level these cats like surfacing kittens in spits, I slit, Fresh wrists, quick//
To put your tongue in a dumpster like I trashed your spits, Ills not sick//
wow...really streatched lines... lay of the multis and the punch was ok
Glove dont fit, your not a Ill head like penis tips, not infected with syphilis//
Tying Ills stomach skin and bleaching his organs like his body is tie dyed//
not feelin it, not a good punch at all
Autograph your death certificate like your certified dead, shot in the head//
Ya bled, to death thats why your skin tones the color red, kilt in a thread//
not feelin it again
Fresh dangerous, I want you to breath, so I put a knife in your air socket//
Like Yao, quick to Rocket, carry rhymes like Doctor Seuss in my pocket//
no punch, try to make him shit in his pants, throw something at em
Leave Fresh below a threesome, hes under a train, your not gonna gain//
A win, like Viagra actors, so stop acting hard, Fresh suck, simple and plain//
decent cloer
overall - even though both verses were xtremely weak and wack ima have to go wit Ill-Fresh becuase he actually had 2 decent punches
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it was a decent battle i suppose...Punches obviously go to Physik. His were stronger+more complex. Personals...yes they go to ill-fresh...but they were just statements...not much creativity or wittyness. Structure...goes to Physik. Flow...Kinda close, but I give it to ill..psy...kinda seems like your lines are stretched. Overall, imma give it to psy...his punches outclassed ill-fresh...and I enjoyed his verse more.
v/ - Physik
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Both were ok.......and both coulda done better but for this one imma vote for Physik because I thought his verse was better with punches and all that shit
Vote- Physik
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Imma have to go with Physik cuz his structure was perfect and btoh didnt have many punches, but Physik had more.........and Ill wasnt really makin sense to me but yea it wasnt that good
Vote- Physik
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ima have to vote for physik...i didnt really like ill's punches or anything...seemed to me like it was a whole lot of senseless babble about nothing in particular...feel as though both shoulda came alot harder than this to this battle...or else..dont waste thread...overall though ill have to say physik's verse was just a lil. better...barely made it
v/physil
ima break it down:
punches - physik: came harder and were more complex or w/e...
structure - physik: <-PERFECT! very nice...
multis - physik: both had multis, but ill's were weak...
opener / closer - tie: both were weak...
nice job guys, obviously ill needs to elevate, but nice job both...
vote - physik
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The battle was reopend aight thats coo...dizzle
Ill-Fresh
graphix like whoa, someone just shit on my fuckin page...
get this fag off the stage, the way i collapse gays...
blah
this kid is like catholic, on his knees but he dont sin...
i kick this kid offa this site, so you wont have to ban him again...*
nice
this is a straight K.O., not no round for round fight...
next time you have diarreah, let me know what his audio sounds like...(uh-oh)
lol, its so wack its funny
he thinks he only loses cause of dickrides at thugzmansion(.net)...
this bitch doesnt touch reality, even with the sims expansion...
rofl@the spamming, not too bad
ill leave you left for dead writin your death with your doomed...
he hasn't 'spread blood' since he left his mothers womb...
also not too bad
Physik
Level these cats like surfacing kittens in spits, I slit, Fresh wrists, quick//
To put your tongue in a dumpster like I trashed your spits, Ills not sick//
ok, notthing special
Glove dont fit, your not a Ill head like penis tips, not infected with syphilis//
Tying Ills stomach skin and bleaching his organs like his body is tie dyed//
nice concepts could of been worded better
Autograph your death certificate like your certified dead, shot in the head//
Ya bled, to death thats why your skin tones the color red, kilt in a thread//
lol, started off good, first 4 words, then blah
Fresh dangerous, I want you to breath, so I put a knife in your air socket//
Like Yao, quick to Rocket, carry rhymes like Doctor Seuss in my pocket//
im hearing too man dr, seuss puns, not too bad or good
Leave Fresh below a threesome, hes under a train, your not gonna gain//
A win, like Viagra actors, so stop acting hard, Fresh suck, simple and plain//
nice, all your verse should of been like this
vote-physik, he came slightly harder in my opinion, but this was a very wack battle!!
both elevate!!
physik, plz poll ya vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111180
graphix like whoa, someone just shit on my fuckin page...
get this fag off the stage, the way i collapse gays...
^meh.....ok making fun of his graphix....ok punch
this kid is like catholic, on his knees but he dont sin...
i kick this kid offa this site, so you wont have to ban him again...*
^hehe exposin an alias....cold....
this is a straight K.O., not no round for round fight...
next time you have diarreah, let me know what his audio sounds like...(uh-oh)
^this is an ok punch........i like how you put the uh oh at the end lol
he thinks he only loses cause of dickrides at thugzmansion(.net)...
this bitch doesnt touch reality, even with the sims expansion...
^hmmmmmmmm this made little sense......
ill leave you left for dead writin your death with your doomed...
he hasn't 'spread blood' since he left his mothers womb...
^ewwwww........alright not bad.......
Level these cats like surfacing kittens in spits, I slit, Fresh wrists, quick//
To put your tongue in a dumpster like I trashed your spits, Ills not sick//
^lots of multis....an ok punch....ok opener overeall....
Glove dont fit, your not a Ill head like penis tips, not infected with syphilis//
^you got that three line rhyme scheme going.......ok meta4.....
Tying Ills stomach skin and bleaching his organs like his body is tie dyed//
Autograph your death certificate like your certified dead, shot in the head//
Ya bled, to death thats why your skin tones the color red, kilt in a thread//
^wtf was that......were on crack for these three bars........
Fresh dangerous, I want you to breath, so I put a knife in your air socket//
Like Yao, quick to Rocket, carry rhymes like Doctor Seuss in my pocket//
^hmm he thinks he has dr.suess..in his pocket.....crack
Leave Fresh below a threesome, hes under a train, your not gonna gain//
A win, like Viagra actors, so stop acting hard, Fresh suck, simple and plain//
^this is an ok meta4 and a weak punch.......
this is close but i think i have to give it to physik......although the crack doesn't help you man stay off that shit hit up one of these....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111150
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111163