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no hate
no d/r
no crew votes
drop by tomorrow 4 pm eastern time
no feedin
blind spit
must check in
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15-25 lines
no hate
no d/r
no crew votes
drop by tomorrow 4 pm eastern time
no feedin
blind spit
must check in
checkin in
i might juss spit tonight..
if thats okay with ya?
im gonna spit tonite prolly, but if not, early tomorrow mornin
checkin in,............
im almost done myne though, so i dont know, i still gotta edit, add bout 12 more lines so well see....
aight ill drop by 11:30.................................
aight here it is, not my best but still hot, said id drop by 11:30 so here it is
Yo fuck tilleyedie, wack ass “asian prince”
Lay him out qwik,,stealth style,no prints
He said “asian till eye die”, well now ya dead
Ill drop first so peep it, and leave the thread
Dogg Just leave voice, before I expose you
They say I cant trust you as far as I can throw u
Shit, I had fiorz make this thread, so I can show u
bitch putting Jin in his sig,as close to rap as he’ll ever be
dazasta and 007 both said I was in, so cant you see
dogg your not hot, so stop, “Damn Str8”, your not me
shit, bitch your nothing to ice, just a crumb on the plate
see I already ate the rest, now you no longer wait
Ill disgrace you at a steady rate, merked plenty to date
So ill add you to the list, Tilleyedie, is just a bitch
Throwin lyrical punches, like my mic got fists
And this is just the jist, make you vanish to the mist
Only way youll be hot, is if ya flow was fresh piss
Im always Burnin you up, like I pack acid in my diss
After you lose this battle, it will be as if you didn’t exist
Cus any crew that will want you must be lead by “ditched”
You can’t fuck wit ice, my flow is raw, like ground beef
I’ll put shells in yo jaw, like tacos, and shatter your teeth
Ill sever your style,have you standin devasted, in disbelief
They say “Only the Strong Survive”,but dogg your too weak
with respect i will merk you...
in the end at least we know we are on the same team...
doo doo da.....
right here i go:
i started getting frustrated with all the p.m.s and i.m.s ...
that i said 'fuck it' and and wrote back and replied him ...
im tired of this shit.. r u my stalker pleez say no man ...
ive never been stalked by somthing i can melt, ice?, yo, man ...
illa philly, bitch i'll carolina ya ass, beat ya bye 5 votes ...
i've been waiting for this so when u step up don't choke ...
settle down, or should i say cool off, looks like your leaking ...
didnt you know ice turns to water, so stop trying to beat me ...
mc hammer, 'u cant touch this' im hot, and u might juss melt ...
ill whoop ya ass, stapped wit leather, ill beat you with a belt ...
call me the po-po because when u see me u'll start stashin ...
ill steal da win, slap you dark to light as if u was micheal jackson ...
stop talkin bout guns, your thirteen, u barley have a dick to ride ...
im quick to lie, but still true and im too sick to die your shit to mine ...
im juss ill... u used to roll wit dynasty and still u rep them in ya bio ...
fuck dynasty its the voice from the streetz you can hear for miles ...
the only time you heard the term hustlin was on a video and from coach ...
hell the only time u hear rap is if you get aids talk to bet and boast ...*
deuce one cinco, bitch thinks hes gangsta, but hes just a kid that spits ...
hell how is that original i spit when i was 9.. spoke like yoda 'merked kids i did'...
this bitch has my respect but it doesnt mean hes better cause plainly hes not
after this battle i sed 'good match but i won' and he said lets rematch 'faintly i fought'
too bad at least you did what you could and wishin ya would but it still a loss ...
a win is only great if it was respected and respect is what i muh- fuckin got ...
* on bet it says rap it up and its always bout aids
1st upppin
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Tilly got this with a better verse. Why? Ice came played, he started off alright, but ended up jus comin kinda whack, he lost his floand momentum after the first few bars. Till had some nice personals, he incorporated the PMs which was cool. Nice punches and personals, good metas too.
Please hit this up. Me v. .snap. Honest votes please. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110310
this shit is too long to be this damn wack..smh..Im sorry to say it but it's true..
Throwin lyrical punches, like my mic got fists
And this is just the jist, make you vanish to the mist
Only way youll be hot, is if ya flow was fresh piss
Im always Burnin you up, like I pack acid in my diss
that was said by iceman187
it was the best shit in this battle..there was no real disses from tilleyedie and iceman your punches was garbage as hell..so I figured it like this..weak punches are better than no punches..so Iceman187 gets my vote..
uppin this..........................................
This was some close shit. Battle overall was weak tho. You both were really about even in punches an metas. The only thing that desided this battle in my eyes was the personal aspect of Tilley. That just made his shit tip the scale.
Vote = Tilley
Keep elevating
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i agree this battle was a little lengthy for me, but i think Tilley took it. No hard hitting punches on either side, but it seems as Iceman just started running out of shit to say and was using filler lines. my vote: TiLLEyEDiE
Hey guys please drop an honest vote on either or both of these:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109787
this battle was pretty weak, ice u had good structure, and aight flow, but the punches were wack...tilleye u had a fucked up structure, ok flow, probly a lil betta punches then ice...so i think u got this vote-tilleye thank god that's over..lol both weren't too enjoyable to read..LOL
hit up my sig holla
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damn...this battle was long....wasn't bad but there were a lot of played punches throughout on both sides...till you seemed to have the better punches and flow so my vote goes to you................
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battle was pretty good but long as fuck and da winner of my vote is tilleyedie.
Iceman was decent and was real good but punches, metas, and multis jus wern't strong enough, but structure was cool.
Tilleyedie had decent punches, metas, and jus needed to work on his structure and he'll be straight if he shortens da lines but no big deal still good.
I personally enjoyed dis battle and laughing at both of ya'll diss each other out loud.
Vote=Tilleyedie
vote on my battle below and thanks if you have
AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
uppin this..... i understand feeble....
ok open for votes...
uppin again............
jeez ppl vote
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Yo fuck tilleyedie, wack ass “asian prince”
Lay him out qwik,,stealth style,no prints
He said “asian till eye die”, well now ya dead
Ill drop first so peep it, and leave the thread
Dogg Just leave voice, before I expose you
They say I cant trust you as far as I can throw u
Shit, I had fiorz make this thread, so I can show u
bitch putting Jin in his sig,as close to rap as he’ll ever be
dazasta and 007 both said I was in, so cant you see
dogg your not hot, so stop, “Damn Str8”, your not me
shit, bitch your nothing to ice, just a crumb on the plate
see I already ate the rest, now you no longer wait
Ill disgrace you at a steady rate, merked plenty to date
So ill add you to the list, Tilleyedie, is just a bitch
Throwin lyrical punches, like my mic got fists
And this is just the jist, make you vanish to the mist
Only way youll be hot, is if ya flow was fresh piss
Im always Burnin you up, like I pack acid in my diss
After you lose this battle, it will be as if you didn’t exist
Cus any crew that will want you must be lead by “ditched”
You can’t fuck wit ice, my flow is raw, like ground beef
I’ll put shells in yo jaw, like tacos, and shatter your teeth
Ill sever your style,have you standin devasted, in disbelief
They say “Only the Strong Survive”,but dogg your too weak
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this had some thought into it but didnt really have to much creativity
i give this a 7/10 and you had some good personals but lacked flow
and you also lacked hard hitting punches in a sense of mind k
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i started getting frustrated with all the p.m.s and i.m.s ...
that i said 'fuck it' and and wrote back and replied him ...
im tired of this shit.. r u my stalker pleez say no man ...
ive never been stalked by somthing i can melt, ice?, yo, man ...
illa philly, bitch i'll carolina ya ass, beat ya bye 5 votes ...
i've been waiting for this so when u step up don't choke ...
settle down, or should i say cool off, looks like your leaking ...
didnt you know ice turns to water, so stop trying to beat me ...
mc hammer, 'u cant touch this' im hot, and u might juss melt ...
ill whoop ya ass, stapped wit leather, ill beat you with a belt ...
call me the po-po because when u see me u'll start stashin ...
ill steal da win, slap you dark to light as if u was micheal jackson ...
stop talkin bout guns, your thirteen, u barley have a dick to ride ...
im quick to lie, but still true and im too sick to die your shit to mine ...
im juss ill... u used to roll wit dynasty and still u rep them in ya bio ...
fuck dynasty its the voice from the streetz you can hear for miles ...
the only time you heard the term hustlin was on a video and from coach ...
hell the only time u hear rap is if you get aids talk to bet and boast ...*
deuce one cinco, bitch thinks hes gangsta, but hes just a kid that spits ...
hell how is that original i spit when i was 9.. spoke like yoda 'merked kids i did'...
this bitch has my respect but it doesnt mean hes better cause plainly hes not
after this battle i sed 'good match but i won' and he said lets rematch 'faintly i fought'
too bad at least you did what you could and wishin ya would but it still a loss ...
a win is only great if it was respected and respect is what i muh- fuckin got ...
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this was preetty good ill say 8/10 just barely and nice werdplay
decent overall punches and personals but lacked consistant flow
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vote/tilleye...
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hit this up
in my sig
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Punches: Till
Wordplay: Till
Multis: Till
Personals: Ice
Opener: Ice
Closer: Till
Vote - TillEyeDie
Overall pretty weak battle, Tilleyedie had a better flowing verse, more and better punches.
hell how is that original i spit when i was 9.. spoke like yoda 'merked kids i did'...
Best line
Hit up one of my battles honestly, in my sig
yall forgot hit up the poll both of yall.......
then this shit is over
then i got tru braggin rights
It's closed, get it re-opened, then PM when you do
I got to go with IceMan...He had a structure that left a lot to be desired...i don;t like the three lined stanza's...He ahd some cool punches though...I believe Kryo may have quoted them already...A couple of punches made me laugh.
Till Eye Die...You just came out to simple....You had some good personals going but it was mad basic.....I felt the scenario you tried to put out there but they never ended in anything catchy...Be more creative in your thinking...don't just come out and say it...make it funny. Make it hard.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110795
Your shit is closed but you know who my vote goes to so someone poll it please.
^^ tilleyedie, have this str8tened out, A.S.A.P, good lookin feeble, i knew some votes wasnt right
uppin......................
votes polled. -feeble
uppin............................................. ........
uppin
come vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111229
uppin............................................. .
ice got this he had better structure made his easier to read ..he had good punches...and his flow was nice....till u was ight but ur structure made u kinda hard to read w/o losin ya place but you had some decent punches and flow but his punches hit harder thats why he get mey vote..good battle ya'lll
Vote :ICE
return tha honest vote here
Rappin master VS Potent
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Till and Iceman how many times.............have you and Iceman did these vs. battles? Wel Till came down over all blow for blow with punches and his metaphors were hot enough to melt da Iceman..........it seemed to me.Till had some wordplay in his structure and flow dat Iceman was somewhat you could say lacking. Iceman had some tight punches that I thought won da battle win I first read it.......but when I read Till's it was a different story. Com'n ice I saw you do better than dis merking niggas....what happened..like you ain't flowed in a while. Ice was really starting out with basic rhymes and then used complex rhymes dat all was gravy....Ice's structure could of been better because I rather read it all together. Ice's punches and metaphors about TillEyeDie were not direct therefore TillEyeDie gets my vote and not Iceman because hiswere directed.
vote=TillEyeDie
vote here on mine, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
Oh..............my bad i've already voted so I didn't poll it my bad.......well check my other shit, thanks
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I'ma go wit IceMan on dis one. He had a structure which is somethin till really needs to work on. try to put more in ya stanzas though fa real. but i gotta say you had some nice punches. some of them i found to be quite amusing...
Till u just too elementary. your personals at da beginnin were aight, but they seemed forced and too basic. so thats one thing you need to work on. anotha is ya overall punches. don't just say shit to say it. make sure it makes some typa sense that the reada can follow, and make sure it still pertains to what you talkin bout...wit a lil elevation you be straight do'.
vote-iceman
even though iceman voted for set-ignorance over me, i have to go with iceman on this one, his verse seemed to flow alot better, and his rhymes worked well, his punches were also very hard hittin, with tilleyi's punches, while still there, not as hard hitting.
v/iceman
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