10-12 lines
Check in then spit
sorry for the lag
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10-12 lines
Check in then spit
sorry for the lag
YoMama tries to step at me thinking hes tough,
Im sick of those 3rd grade jokes, they're just not enough,
Threatening me on private message, kid what were you thinking,
you should have been prepping for this battle, but your already sinking
damn if you were my momma, i would have commited suicide,
thinking your hard on RB for what? foolish pride?
You think you can flow, you can't even come correct,
like your limp ass dick that is yet to cum erect,
You think your flows are real, if you ask me their just fake,
Battling a sleepy ass herb that is yet to come awake,
You won't show your record publicly, embarassed of the past,
Get used to the word LOSS, cuz this won't be your last
it was supposed to be a half hour but i forgot to write it for the rules, so i guess just get it up when you can, but at least by today or something
aright, checkin in.. ill try to have mine posted in 30 mins
wassup Flowdro you think u got the skill?
nope, your name dont rhyme yo game, your an easy kill
why they call you flowdro if you dont have flow?
niggas read your shit and say: "dam you blow"
you passed out cuz u said you were too tired
yah, it must have been that man-hoe that you hired
you stuck yo dick up his ass an it slid right in
no need for oil, cuz yo shit is short an thin
im yo momma an u commit suicide?
no u didnt, i got ya first before you could hide
used a knife, slit yo thraot with tha surated side
you were desperate fo verses, tried to make a good punch, that's why ya lied
man yo rhymes are sad, you should get a new name
im a newbie but you still had no chance with my game
probly my weakest verse, but itll win against you
you should of stayed a sleep, you now regret it foo.
dude i didnt see that it said 10-12 lines on top- i just went by the rules you agreed with before: 12-16 lines. uppin....
uppin again, cmon guys, post an honest vote on this battle
hey no problem its chill, hey guys please help by voting on this battle
Uppin X2, come on guys please help us settle this shit
i wish i could vote but i cant
that was a close but i think flowdro's puches hit harder
winner:flowdro
hey please vote guys, I really want to hear your criticisms/comments, and see who you thought was better over all UPPIN X3, just leave a link to your battle ill get you back
flow dro had a nice flow, good scheme, and structure, couple punches were solid. YOmamma structure was aight, flow was kinda wack. wordplay was ok, no punches though really just dissin, but u a newbie so u still learnin. I think flow dro just outclassed you in this battle, you have to throw punches if you wanna win yomamma. vote-flowdro
fav line only from flow's verse-
haha good use of words, not a bad punchQuote:
Threatening me on private message, kid what were you thinking,
you should have been prepping for this battle, but your already sinking
yomama just use more punches and try to stick to the battle a lil more the gay shit is mad played.
peace
YoMama. . Your Flow Was Bad. . Punches Were Weak. . Nothing Hit. . Your Line Was Right And Wrong. . This Is A Weak Verse. . But It Didn't Beat Flow Dro. . Like Cutstraphe Said. . You'll Learn Over Time And Elevate. . Mainly Work On Punches. . FlowDro, The Flow Was There, Punches Actually Hit. . You Didn't Swing And Miss. . Wordplay Was Good Too. .
damn if you were my momma, i would have commited suicide,
thinking your hard on RB for what? foolish pride?
^ ^ Nice Way To Play His Name. . Good Punch Too. .
Overall, Flow Just Had The Punches, And That's What Matters In A Battle. . So Vote = Flow
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...88#post1137288
^ ^ Hit that up with a honest vote.
This was an okay battle, but...
YOMAMA: Ur verse wasn't all that great. Played lines in it. Ur flow was wack cause it wasn't consistent. U tried to play on his verse but it didn't really work for you. Keep elevatin'.
FlowDro: I liked ur verse. God personals and punches, but what did it for me the most was ur flow. I guess there's somethin' to ur name after all. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: FlowDro
Upping for the last time, please drop a vote i want this one to get resolved, leave links to your battles, peace UPPIN X4
fuck I thought i was on my user name, but my friends was saved on there, fuck my bad sorry guys
FlowDro took this battle wit hard hittin punches, I mean hard. I actually laughed at some of them. Good shit bro. YoMomma your verse was full of crappy punches and a wacked out structure. You definetly need to elevate bro. Good battle FlowDro.
Vote - Flowdro
If you could hit me backId appreciate it. Thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...10#post1126910
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Wrong Link sorry
Here ya go:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109706
Yo momma - ya verse wasnt that good...it had alot of played lines and the punches just werent hitting. you flow was alright but then at the end you had this very streatched line... in ya verse try to add metas and personals to make it more complex
FlowDro - ya had some decent personals and punches. your flow was ok, alot of variation in the line length but not big enough to really effect it. you had 1 or 2 punches that were solid and got threw to Momma...thats what really took this battle. you too could also use some wordplay and metas..
my vote - Flow
both of you keep battlin and elevatin.... Stay Up
I don't get what happened? i won the battle 5 to 0 votes and now its back to 4? im just curious about whats going on if someone could explain
I liked how yomama kept coming back to flodrows apparent narcolepsy issues. my vote would go to flodrow if i could vote. hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110315