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aight bitch.....i dont wanna any dickridin like our last battle..........even though i got dqed for uppin to many times, thats gay as hell, so lets do this.......
10 lines
no dickriding
no hate
no feeding
no recycling
no biting
no crew votes
verses due tuesday night at 12 est
blind spits
CHECKIN IN............
ill prolly start keyin my shit after i see ur check in, but im waitin on u so to start so if u no show i wont waste my shit...........
Checkin' in... Let's do this. Good luck. May the best man win, son.
E-yo, u stupid fucka, you try to sound like ur ass is black//
But the only freakin' quality I see in your ass is wack//
The sufficient skills needed to test me you're ass seriously lacks//
Cause findin' my rhymes is like findin' needles in a black haystack//
Guess who's back? Oh, it's that fuckin' Eminem wannabe//
Soulfire right now is more gangsta than ur ever gonna be//
My rhymes flow like da Nile, drivin' a path straight thru ur verse//
I put this dumb bitch in denial, face the facts, ur rhymes are worse//
You think you are Slim Shady, whitey, no one will stand up for you//
Cause they automatically recognize the winner, and bitch it ain't you.//
Fucka aint even show? He PMed me and everything. Fuckin' typical.
eh i no i aint got enough posts to vote but
can you give this battle an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110053
appreciate it
^^^will be reported to the ir.....and soulfire........what the hell are u smoking??........rules say verses r do in 2 and half hours from now, so lick my nuts......
check it out.......yo, yo..........
dawg its no question im ill-wit-the-mic, 10-1, and nothins gonna stop me from killin-dis-dyke/
no need to stress im just chillin-tonight, u betta question if u up for dis, cause r u really willin-to-die?/
dawg u just a "dull"-emcee, ya punches r "curved", u claim u got it "locked", but u must have forgot the "whole-key"/
u havent battled so long ya souls-covered-in-debris, but in ya "avy" is the only "fire" people-can-see/
this guy acts like hes so-wise, u bring all ya shit, but when u gotta show skils, u just got "no-supplies"/
this dude blows-guys, and when u find out this guy has gotten half of wins from dqs its no-surprise/
im one of the devilish-few, i spit fire, and u act like u tough, like some kind of rebel-but-it-aint-true/
dawg let me put it in perspective, on a keyboard im just like a "2", cause honestly dawg, im just a "level-above-U"/
im leavin ya sittin-pissed, cause u tryed to "catch" my rhymes, but u must have forgot to "get-ya-mit"/
so keep spittin-ya-shit, cause literally thats all it is, so do us all a favor and just start slittin-ya-wrists/
EXPLANATIONS -
1st bar - my record is 10-1
2nd bar - locked - key, get it?, dull - curved.....ya know, and his name is soulfire.......doesnt spit it though
3rd bar - he has 2 wins, and at least one is from a dq
4th bar - look at yo keyboard, 2 is one row above the u
5th bar - in baseball u catch the ball wit a mit
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UPPIN DIS SHIT FO VOTES YALL!!!!!!!!!!!!
~yo had some ill multis and metas. Nice punches and personals, and you were creative in how you threw them too.
Soul you came real basic, no creativity and weak attempts at punches. Keep elevatin.
Vote-~Yo What Up~
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074
Yo What Up,
Good to see ya post. As for the dickridin', I don't know people on this site like that, so you can count on there bein' none again. And as for the time, I just saw it again, but I coulda sworn that u had said Monday. Anyway, good verse by you. Uppin for them votes. #1
This was a semi aite battle..u both are aite..nuthin geat pretty decent but ithink in my eyes..WUTUp took this
hi shsit was just more elevated shit was still aite..but
WAK
BLACK wtf..u cant be rhyin about that shit no more
make sum metaphors make it sic,..add sum wordplay an shit
Vote-WUTUp
Hit the link up dawg ..Pc...Now..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110068
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^^^thanx for the votes..........
UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LETS GET SOME VOTES IN THIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!
i felt soul more on this, both had good spits long enuff to spit too. But anyways yo what up u had a good flow, good scheme, couple aight punches and personals but nuthin too shabby. Soul u had a good flow, good structure and scheme, i think your punches were more witty----no wut i just read back over them and i'm changin my vote i'm goin with yo what up he took the personal punches and i felt this line gave him the W [quoute]this guy acts like hes so-wise, u bring all ya shit, but when u gotta show skils, u just got "no-supplies"/
this dude blows-guys, and when u find out this guy has gotten half of wins from dqs its no-surprise/[/quote] lotta nice wrdplay, it flowed smoothly i felt the punch...so vote-yo what up
good battle ya'll
peace
Uppin #2
Uppin # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cmon Hoes, Peep Dis Show Of Skills!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice battle.....a lot of strong punches.....dis iz not a dr or hate....but yo wat up takez it......
hiz shyt waz outstretched...but nice........had many hard punches.....nice flow....n ok structure....kinda long but dun wrry....ya punches cleared all dat up
soul- good shyt...nice punches....ok flow......n nice structure.....but i gotta give it 2 YO cuz hiz punches were harder n 4 humour.....
nice battle
no ahte
vote: yo what up.....
^^^thanx for the vote.........
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!
CMON HOES, VOTE LIKE MOFOS!!!!!!!!!
Uppin # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dont Sleep On Dis Hoes!!!!!!!!!!
E-yo, u stupid fucka, you try to sound like ur ass is black//
But the only freakin' quality I see in your ass is wack//
^hmmm well thats a missed punch with weak vocab...
The sufficient skills needed to test me you're ass seriously lacks//
Cause findin' my rhymes is like findin' needles in a black haystack//
^ok not a bad meta the haystack is black though lol
Guess who's back? Oh, it's that fuckin' Eminem wannabe//
Soulfire right now is more gangsta than ur ever gonna be//
^well thats not really a punch its more filler
My rhymes flow like da Nile, drivin' a path straight thru ur verse//
I put this dumb bitch in denial, face the facts, ur rhymes are worse//
^well its an Ok meta but the punch fell of drastically
You think you are Slim Shady, whitey, no one will stand up for you//
Cause they automatically recognize the winner, and bitch it ain't you
^this is a simplistic closer work on your vocab.....
dawg its no question im ill-wit-the-mic, 10-1, and nothins gonna stop me from killin-dis-dyke/
no need to stress im just chillin-tonight, u betta question if u up for dis, cause r u really willin-to-die?/
^this is nice multis....the punches are weak though....
dawg u just a "dull"-emcee, ya punches r "curved", u claim u got it "locked", but u must have forgot the "whole-key"/
u havent battled so long ya souls-covered-in-debris, but in ya "avy" is the only "fire" people-can-see/
^ok this is good punchin nice multis.....stop the quotes and the dashes...
this guy acts like hes so-wise, u bring all ya shit, but when u gotta show skils, u just got "no-supplies"/
this dude blows-guys, and when u find out this guy has gotten half of wins from dqs its no-surprise/
^nice punches ...don't talk about him blowin guys....thats just dumb....
im one of the devilish-few, i spit fire, and u act like u tough, like some kind of rebel-but-it-aint-true/
dawg let me put it in perspective, on a keyboard im just like a "2", cause honestly dawg, im just a "level-above-U"/
^well then this is ok ...the punch is missing but its a ok meta.....
im leavin ya sittin-pissed, cause u tryed to "catch" my rhymes, but u must have forgot to "get-ya-mit"/
so keep spittin-ya-shit, cause literally thats all it is, so do us all a favor and just start slittin-ya-wrists/
^well thats not nice...jk fine punch ....FIX YOUR FUCKIN STRUCTURE>>>^^^^^
winner yo what up.....
nice battle but punches go to yo,slow goes to yo and closer goes to yo cuz it rhymed better and didnt use da same words twice like soulfire did in his closer---------------------->You think you are Slim Shady, whitey, no one will stand up for you//
Cause they automatically recognize the winner, and bitch it ain't you.//
dont ever do dat again kills da flow
vote=yo wat up
hit up any of mah open battles ppl.
also yo wat u u should try out for d/s
alright battle a lot of good punches but yo what up takes this one
he had better flow,puches and multis plus he was alot more creative with his vocab
soul work on your flow your rhymes worked but i wasent feeling you flow and structure too basic.....
vote - Yo
sorry i cant poll vote yet all i can do is give my honest opinion
punches yo: dawg its no question im ill-wit-the-mic, 10-1, and nothins gonna stop me from killin-dis-dyke/
no need to stress im just chillin-tonight, u betta question if u up for dis, cause r u really willin-to-die?/
multies yo: im one of the devilish-few, i spit fire, and u act like u tough, like some kind of rebel-but-it-aint-true/
dawg let me put it in perspective, on a keyboard im just like a "2", cause honestly dawg, im just a "level-above-U"/
personals yo: u havent battled so long ya souls-covered-in-debris, but in ya "avy" is the only "fire" people-can-see/
flow soul: his bars wasnt stretched as bad
overall: i gotta go with you what up..no hate just opinion
both vote on my battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386
Uppin # 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!
Cmon Dont Sleep On Dis Now Mothafuckas!!!!!!!!!
Uppin #3
both sucked honestly....
soul had the better structure...
but Yo had the better punches and multi's.....
I can't really say much here, It was a battle to get thru...
other than visually lookin nice....Yo whatup took this easily...
vote Yo
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yo what up wins this one
he had more multis/meta4
and his also hit alot harder
he had good word usage
and his shit followed
i didnt feel that soulfire came that bad but it wasnt too good either
rarely seen a personal from him
battles r all bout personals
v/ yo wat up