Ok I'll go first. the usual 10 lines thing
Printable View
Ok I'll go first. the usual 10 lines thing
So some say i need to elevate/ ok, now i've gotta chance, so let me playa hate.
I'll kick this guys ass worse than Slider's/ He's too young to be a serious fighter.
he says he's a savage so I gotta watch out/ One time He pulled down his pants/
but no dick fell out/ He thinks he's gotta punch like Mike Tyson/ I'll bite off his ears
and say i'll eat his son/ Quit trying to battle you stupid kid/ There's only room for one/
So don't try to kid/ I gotta throw a punch/ open your paper bag and find a knuckle sandwich in your lunch. i'll stop this rhyme scheme pretty soon/ It'll only end with me eatin dinner and you in the spoon/ can't u see stop tryin to rap/ go sing some R & B.
You not serious...ok mabye you are if thats ya spit....LET THA PAIN BEGIN...!!!
Kats who say yo need to elevate "Ain't Lyin", niggas who read ya shit hope you "Ain't Tryin"/
Should i spit hot for this wack emcee?...i don't even know why i'm replyin/
*Turn Up Tha Heat*
"Blazed-Wit-Smoke" just a "GAG" or a "PRANK" cuz "DNUFO2's-a-JOKE"/
Got a "Gage-n-Colt cuz ya punches like "Injured Athletes", just "PLAYED-n-BROKE"/
I'll take advice from ya "Sig" and "Rock 9 in Ya Dome" with the "Trigga-I-Stroke"/
This is a "Lyrical Beatin" my bars leave you like "62 Year Old Smokers"..."Coughin-n-Weezin" you know "Hardly Breathin"/
Since I already won this battle i'll give ya a rematch once your rhymes "Done Teethin"/
The flows sick *AACCHOO* look its got me "Sneezin"/
*A Simple Finisher For This Wack Emcee*
I "Called-Ya-Bluff" your below "Light Weight" your just a "Powder Puff"/
Your what rap used ta be "Plain-n-Simple"...you spit antique...ya belong in the "Attic" with the "Christmas Stuff"/
best battle ive seen so far, im suprised.
ima give this here to savage.
savage, you had some good punches, i liked your opener
it was dope, you had better structure, and good flow,
heres a tip, you need some more personals dawg.
dnufo2, pretty good too, decent punches, could of done better,
you had pretty much the same as him but his lines were better.
sorry, but i cant vote yet, since i took my time sayin what i tought,
hit up any of my battles.
Polled. -Token
u obviously aint read any of my battles both was weak. first dude's rymes were way too white. and the others too black, shit dont make much since ta read too many ""/ shit. if savage had a finisher he woulda easily won, my votes still for him but only cus u goin agianst whitey, chummon son... if u want a real battle call me out
vote savage
vote..............................................
i'm say it like this
if this is the Dopest Battle youve ever read ----then your fuckin wack ya self
complete merkin by young savage'''''''''''str8 up
he had better personals punches ---his shit flowed like pussy juice------and it was better worded with a much better vocab
Vote--savage
Shitty vote = Gone -Token
I would but I don't have 100 posts................
If I could vote it would be on savage..good disses and nice structure and this is no d/r vote because i voted for dn on another battle...ne wayz peace..and if u guyz have time check this battle out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934
savage killed this guy clearly better punches he actually flowed ufo you should stick to rock and drop the hole rap thing playa it aint workin for ya and pictureperfect two's rhymes are week ass shit
moderators piss me off............................
ok....were still uppin for votes please...........!!!!
vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107921
Vote:savage
he had it taken from the start with punches, dnufo2 you neede to aim more shit to him not at yea self
svage your wordplay and strucutre took this
from begining to end, work on yea flow and yu should be aight
probably 1 of the worst battles ive ever cum across i think savage had a couple of attempts at punches but hey ull both get there in the end keep tryin
^^^ sure this was one of the worst battles you ever seen...but i look under ya name and it says "NEW TO RB" so who tha fuck are ta me???...ok....were still uppin for votes please...........!!!!
ok....were still uppin for votes please...........!!!!
ya up them votesQuote:
Originally Posted by Young Savage
this was a weak battle
dnfous punches were shit so was his flow and structure
savage took this one his metas and flow was much better
vote-savage
vs dizzy hommel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195
vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371
yo savag u honestly beat the living shyt out of dnufo2 his shyt didnt even rhyme and most of his shyt was random weak punches
vote=savage
can u hit up mah battle against raighn man its still on first page of front lines.....
^ nice come back. i gotta go with everybody else here, savage won this one easy. dnuf02 didn't have any real punch lines or flow. savage had better flow, rhymes punches and just about nething. my vote goes to him.