kautious vs DNV

[Chemarim]

basic rules

no biting
hate votes
recycleying
dick riding



my verse :


Past his prime…
This kids almost double my age but skills don’t get better for him…
your losses show you can’t come close to me on edge, I got you fallen over the brim…
Not one win… DNV should be RL – you –registered loser- go fit a proper ac-ro-nym…
Kid your raps are thin, you probably pre-write on paper you use to wipe your ass in…
Clearly your rhymes is shity, un-witty, call this “monster” bitch cuz it don’t look pretty…

Gritty to grimy, spit to claim ur dignity, faggot go back to swallowing shit that’s slimy…

Riding dick n sucking dick: ur occupation: no 1 wants ur custom cum stained t-shirts…
Pissin his pants,-scared after I left a hole in em claiming that his bladder hurts…

Uncontrollable devastation, contemplation of what this kids face is looking like…
Must be bad, picturing his eyes closed knocked out… what every ones seeing right…

[DNV]

good shit ... but...

my verse:

i'm illmatic, spitting rhymes faster than a baseball bat that's fully automatic
hitting you harder than an 18 wheeler,
I'd grab this bitch by the tits, but i still wouldn't be able to feel her.
so let's set the record straight,
i'm 0 & 7, but i won't be 0 'n' 8

cause once i'm through with you,
you'll be more depressed than that donkey from winnie the pooh.
and i still won't give a shit! i'll bash you harder no matter how long you tell me to quit.
so that's it, go home, i think your mom wants you to baby sit,
but not your younger brother, your mother,
sucking on her tits, like you wuz her Mr. Luva Luva.

This kids a disgrace,
how can you talk shit, with your moms tit still in your face?

[DNV]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping for some votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

[DNV]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^upping for some votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

[Chemarim]

uppin for votes

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[menolin]

kautious took this one, he had harder hitting punches, this was a pretty weak battle,
he also had better wordplay!!!

i'm illmatic, spitting rhymes faster than a baseball bat that's fully automatic
^lines like that are wack^
DNV so dont use them, use disses!!!

plz drop an honest vote on this!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108420

[Chemarim]

uppin for votes again 2

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[DNV]

upping for votes

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[Chemarim]

uppin this shit
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[Chemarim]

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz upppin on this

[Mimesis.]

kautious - ok structure........flow was wack.........vocab was only in one line, the rest was basic..........ok multis........wordplay could have been better..........some of the punches were good, some were wack as hell.........no real good personals.....

dnv - ok structure........flow fell off a lil.........vocab was basic.........some of the multis were ok.........wordplay was weak.........i wasnt feelin ya punches........no good personals.......

conclusion - kautious takes this in vocab, mulits, and punches so he gets my vote.....

VOTE - KAUTIOUS

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108159

thanx.........

[Chemarim]

this is my last uppin can people please help me with this, i'll be sure to vote on yea battles with honest votes



im out, holla

[Cerebral_Killa]

Weak battle....

kautious - Bad structure, punches were Ok...not hard tho, not really creative, choppy flow, no personals

DNV - Again bad structure, bad punches, not creative, choppy flow, no personals....basically same as kautious but worse punches.

v/ Kautious

Hit my battle up.....links in my sig since I took the time here!

[Cerebral_Killa]

shit!....I forgot to say I cant poll coz of my post count but vote on my battle anyway

[Rapping Master]

kautious took this one, he had harder hitting punches also had better wordplay!!!
VOTE KAUTIOUS