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30min blindspit
no hate d/r
no feeding
no biting
no recycling
no prewritten bull shit
10 lines
must drop within 30 min or get a L
holla set it up with these rules only
holla i'll make it right now
and ppz with 200 posts can vote only
check in this is my check in
are you gonna check in or not?
then 30 min will start k
checking in................................................ ........................
are u gonna spit first............................
Calls herself Ven0m but couldent get no 1 infected if she spit poison gas
falls short of stealth & wuldent be transparent cuz U fake take off yer mask
Battled in this jungle but already gonna be yer second loss,yer not a Lion
wont catch a punch cuz U fumble & let me finish wit the score,so stop cryin
Ya skills add up 2 pregnant women trying to have babies by themselves
but lack equipment to prosper life,so fuckin disinagrate right where U dwells
Sports the number zero in his name to try 2 look more appealing but fails
The only way this ugly ass kid would look cool is wit 100 inbeded rusty nails
so kid youv been flexed like the bowflex cuz yer not complex just anarexsic
skelator looking youv been hexed so dont test this black magic vortexed
YOU FUCKIN IDIOT ASS STUPID MOTHER FUCKER IT WAS BLINDSPIT WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU FUCKIN BLIND OR RETARTED YOU ALIEN WHEN IT COMES TO FOLLOWING SIMPLE RULES OMFG YER SO GAY YOU SHOULD BE DQED FOR BEING A HOMOSEXUAL NOW DROP YOU HAVE 10 MINUTES IM FUCKING COUNTING THEN IMMA REPORT YOUR HERB ASSQuote:
Originally Posted by Ven0m
yo fuck it i'll go first/
Kwench this fuckerz thirst/
check it/ yo, u probally writing some ryhmes down for preparation/
thats y i can sense some hesitation from this kid that only has one skill,masturbation/
im just wastin my time wit this no-show homo/
he callz me out i spit first and my ryhmes are still inferno/
slipknot fan better put a mask on after this/
u gon lose ur girl thatz why she has my dick on her christmas gift list/
yo i wasn't even trying for this but im finish this off quick/
IT U CAN'T SPIT LEGIT SHIT SO ADMIT IT/
CUZ U GETTIN SMOKE LIKE A LIT CANCER STICK/
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yo it was suppose to be 10 lines....but here it shows up like 12..maybe because i was typing it as a quick reply...my bad
ur rythme was shit..................................
and i never lost once u fucking idiot..no one voted for my first battle yet
a venom if you wanna join our cru let me know 2morrow ok its up to u
yo i'll join...for sure...u gonna vote for this battle again it?
yo venom holla at u 2morrow.........................nice knowing ya
punches: venom
structure: venom
intro: venom
outro:venom
flow: venom
other: none
it, your verse had no flow, i think you only had like
2 or 3 things that actually rhymed.
venom, you shit was aight, not the best, but enough to get my vote.
since i took my time to tell you what i think, hit up the theunderRated vs yungthug619
THATS A D/R AND A HATEVOTE GET THE FUCK OUTTA RAPBATTLES FUCKIN HERBQuote:
Originally Posted by yungthug619
Looked like a hate vote to me to IT won this batle and i'd vote for him but i dont have 100 posts yet, people like that shouldnt be aloud on here!!
Poor battle....
It - I've seen you come 10x times better than this. Your punches didnt connect very hard and at times your flow was choppy. And you said in the first line that venom is a she but later on said he....confused me
Venom - You were'nt good at all, your best punch in my opinion was the masterbation one and that is way to played. No personals what so ever
v/ It
this woz always 1 sided
It = decent flow, good vocab and wordplay, punches i thought hit well. also structure was good.
7 1/2 - 10
venom = terrible, you had a sort of a flow, and punches that wouldnt knock my gran over, i'm tryin not to hate but that woz bad.
2 / 10
vote = IT
can you return the favour please and vote on this , thank you.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108879
good battle IT congradz...........................
Lyrical_Sniper really sounds like a d/r vote.....
lol stfu herb uppin2Quote:
Originally Posted by Ven0m
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up3
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this was a weak battle....
ive seen .it. do alot better, and yea .it. your flow was off
but what you had was vocab. structur and some ok but not great punches
venom- your verse was weak and what seemed to have uncorect lines,
you didn't go first/ he didn't write prep lines
*yawn*...... any way, this battle goes to IT
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107921
IT you still suck i would have a rematch ne time..the only reason u won this, is that i was half asleep
up4
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iight cool....when I don't have 2 active battles I'll holla
Punches-It
Flow-It
Structure-It
Peraonls-It
Overal-It
I don't want to go into a lot of detail but venom you suck, you reall do, that was a very bad verse, don't ever use capitals again and don't use /. Also line up your shit and actually make it flow. It, I have seen much better from you, try not to battle shit like this anymore. I will be back in a second to post a link, forgot to copy it.
Alirght here is the link, please vote on this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109090
ightt IT took this battle on the real nice work punches were harder and had better flow.adn had nice structure..........
MY VOTE-IT
return the favor and hit my battle up thanx...............*1*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109269
sorry man i thought i ponly need 100 post to vote but i need 200 but like i is it got it..........sorry for free posteing..........1
Close this battle............................................ ......
punches; venom
structure;venom
intro;venom
outro;none
flow;both
other;none
vote; venom
venom gets my vote coz it was sum tite shit. u both ad good verses, IT u just needed to structure it a bit better. venom was better and had more direct punches, but it weren't all that.
well done anyway to u both.
since i voted on urs can u vote on mine.
mr.w.rite v kurrupt
upin5
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LMFAO......this battle was one sided.........
it - structure was good........flow was on target........vocab was good.........some of the multis were tight.........nice wordplay.........i was feelin most of ya punches.........some of ya personals were tight.......
venom - wack structure........flow fell off.......vocab was ok........multis were ok........no good wordplay.........i thought most of ya punches were wack.......no personals......
conclusion - it takes this in structure, flow, multis, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote.....
VOTE - IT
wow it won hands down....jeese....what an eay W.....
he had much better punches structure etc etc he wiped the floor with venom....
venom elevate.....take on sum noobs b4 challenging a good person
peace
venom had a better flo and better punchlines but not a good structure
it had a good flow and structure but his punches wernt hard enough
vote-venom
hit up my battle
vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371
People are voting for me but it doesn't even count???????
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109453
yo venoms.....chek in dis battle dawg.......u accepted but neva chek in....
****srry 2 freepost***
but it really won this battle dawg......
venom- structure waz off.....punches weak....n flow waz ite
it- good shyt......punches on da mark.....nice flow n structure
vote: it
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