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Just so u kno....I made it 300 posts,
Im sure u don't care about that.......
watever works........................
check...47,50!
mdizz
Mdizz...chek'd in whatever work's^^...well in your case edit
This cat's pathetic...He aint his avi..But he'll leave red-headed
Yea carson said it, ya wanna battle me? what the fuck u on?...
I mean U changed ur name yeh....but ur still leavin down 1-n-Gone..
What did u think?...dawg I'm rollin harder than 4 wheels labelled brinks
Shoulda made this Pinks...cus basicly ur jus a whore in instinkz
He's R&B's best treat....but he never' the giver, yo check his feat
Please...I gotta tell this kid to stand cus he can't take a seat..
I didnt even check the state...but mdizz it jus occured to me...
U didn't want a battle me u wanted a date...I forget u rep'd new jerzey
this kids trash...X2? ima make myself loud n clear
his spits worse then Tara Reid,'way Carson-Jet outa here
tha end is near..a loss for u is no uncommon feat
so il exploit this fool like carrot top pushin for AT&T
ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy
ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people..remember carsonjet...2k_4?!
if hes up for more..il own u for a line or 2..
but il tell u dude.that^^^ was made clear from line one-
-or two
vote (1)
carsonjetx2
Mdizz...chek'd in whatever work's^^...well in your case edit
This cat's pathetic...He aint his avi..But he'll leave red-headed
5/10
Yea carson said it, ya wanna battle me? what the fuck u on?...
I mean U changed ur name yeh....but ur still leavin down 1-n-Gone..
5/10
What did u think?...dawg I'm rollin harder than 4 wheels labelled brinks
Shoulda made this Pinks...cus basicly ur jus a whore in instinkz
7/10
He's R&B's best treat....but he never' the giver, yo check his feat
Please...I gotta tell this kid to stand cus he can't take a seat..
6/10
I didnt even check the state...but mdizz it jus occured to me...
U didn't want a battle me u wanted a date...I forget u rep'd new jerzey
5/10
overall 28/50
mdizz
this kids trash...X2? ima make myself loud n clear
his spits worse then Tara Reid,'way Carson-Jet outa here
5/10
tha end is near..a loss for u is no uncommon feat
so il exploit this fool like carrot top pushin for AT&T
5/10
ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy
4/10
ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people..remember carsonjet...2k_4?!
6/10
if hes up for more..il own u for a line or 2..
but il tell u dude.that^^^ was made clear from line one-
-or two
5/10
overall 25/50
my vote CarsonjetX2
Close Battle....Carson Had Some Ok Punches But None Hit Hard In My Opinion...mdizz Had One Quotable Which Is The Only Thing That Gave Him The Win...
Funny, LoL...Nice Punch..But Of Course The Guy Above Me Gave This The Worst Rating Of mdizz's Verse....Quote:
Originally Posted by mdizz
ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy
Punches - Tie
Personals - mdizz (Harder)
Structure - mdizz
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Carson
Multis - Carson
Vote - mdizz, For Having Better Punches And A Harder Hitting Verse...
Will You Two Check These With An Honest Vote:
FuE-xIoN vs. Kaos Theory (Wits End Can Vote)
FuE-xIoN vs. -Technician-
What The Fuck Is This Silly Shit...300 Posts?? When Did This Start...I Will Get If Fixed
Yeh...have some one edit your vote in...
your not a newby.....the 300 posts is to keep the herbs away...
ur not...have axe-feeb-or token fix...
thanks for votes uppin
.....................uppin..................votes. ...........
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Dunno if i can poll but i'll drop the vote anyway..
Originality - Both.. nothin played here
Punches - Carson.. each one was personal an witty.. no filler
Personals - Carson.. all but one line was directed strait at opponent
Flow - Both.. easy to follow
Structure - Both.. ^ see above
Multis - Neither.. thas coo.. jus a different approach
Opener - Carson.. crackin.. funny, witty, etc
Closer - mdizz.. saved the best til last
VoTe = Carson
Felt he had less filler an as usual each line was a personal punch..
Drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1111738
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ok'ish battle,, carson won the punches but had the weaker structure..... mdizz had decent structure but i only spotted one punch which was actually the best in the battle,, the rest of his shit was pathetic though....... so carson takes it with a much better allround verse,,,,, the only things mdizz takes is the best single punch and slightly better structure,, carson takes better punches,, more creative (original) with a few good personals, and thats what wins battles,, by the way the punch from mdizz i was reffering to is :
ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people.. remember carson jet 2k_4?!
^quite good
anyway VOTE CARSON,,
and can you guys hit up a battle from my sig with an honest vote?? thanx
^^pathetic? eat a dick u son of a bitch..fuck outa here
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i'm gonna have to say that carson came way more personally and effectivly in this battle...the worplay used was a little higher than m dizz's and the overall punches were satisfactory enough to take this battles....
Mdizz you had better punches but your personals were not hitting as hard as you thought they might have and you played off his name in the same way like twice..so whatever good battle to both MC's check this out...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108864
Very close battle here...
MDizz clearly ripped Carson on personals...
Good work.
And Carson clearly ripped MDizz with wordplay...
Cool, cool.
I'll give the slight edge to Carson, and the win...
Cuz he pulled one personal on the avy that made me laugh...
The one about "little feet"...
Funny shit.
So close, but someone hadda lose.
Peace