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No hate or dr
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Tek
Telekinetic
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No hate or dr
Blind spit 30 min after check in
Check.. bring heat dawg.. les get it poppin..
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iight drop me da link when done fa sho
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..Fuck what you Thought..
You think you're up to the test? There's no way you're touchin' this vet
I come wit thunderous text, you need dashes, just-to-make-ya-punches-connect...
Tele's gettin overthrown, Use this broke MC to carve another head in my totem pole
You get ya boys to carry ya' dick, cuz we all know, you can't 'hold your own!'...
I'm a ragin' homophobe, beatin' this faggot wit potent blows, til' his soul implodes
This Poet is tryna make 'spectacles', when all his foes have been 0 - 0...
You talk about Thug Appeal? That's no deal, Answer this: What kind of a hoodlum
Forever gets on his knees 5 times a day, and their religion aint even muslim?...
Challengin' me into this battle, I'm keyin, and mah shit still blow minds
You get no feedback, so b ready to give opinions on all ya own lines...//
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Lyrical soldier please, Tek musta forgot to bring the ammunition
He come to battle naked like a bitch that's learned a new position
WIT is missin an lines are gay like fagots walkin on tight ropes
With ya punches fallin short like small retards with high hopes
Tek is gettin smoked like a Philly when Iverson didn't get the ball
Ya battles gettin NO ANSWER worse than a damn busy phone call*
You stalled like a broke elevator, elevation for you is one in a million
By the time you get to fealin this level I'd done own the fuckin buildin
I'm as clever as Moses, an Tek you know this parts your lyrical waters
Don't think I KANE you're ABLE now there's two biblical slaughters**
* Allen Iverson's nickname is the answer get it?-- no answer
** Kane killed Able in the bible for those who don't know
Uppin for votes...................................
aight... not a bad battle actually... but ima break it down:
punches - eh.. tek: he had some real good punches and tele, u had a few good ones in there, just none really stood out...
multis - tek: his multis were a bit better than tele's...
flow - tie: both were real good...
opener / closer - tek: tek took this with ease... opener AND closer were real good, and tele's opener was tight, i didnt understand ur closer even with an explanation...
well, not bad guys... peace...
vote - tek
ill edit my links into here when i go dig em up... peace
damnit... wouldnt let me edit... sorry for the free-post... but here are my battles... be sure to return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108207
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108113
Ok the last line- Moses parts a sea in the bible and Kane is used instead of can
"I Kane your Able" I put tek in the role of Able. An Kane killed able in the bible- I killed Tek in battle. That makes two biblical slaghters. Get it!
I see comlex shit isnt goin to work here.
If you dont get my shit why vote?
shit.. this battle was REAL close in my mind.. but I see it like this...
You both had nice flow, that's about a tie.. everything was about just as good as the other.. punches both sides were pretty nice. but my honest vote goes to tek on this one... I think he just edged ya out telekinetic.. I was really feelin his lines.
vote- tek
Return the favor, please.. battles gettin slept on real bad.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266
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I understood the line first time an i think most peeps will.. its not neccessarily them not understandin it.. they jus mite not think much of it.. anyhow..
let the votes continue..
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a close battle. both had good flow to them and both had good punches but i felt teks lines betta
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Thanx.. but do that again an ur likely to get banned.. its jus not cool.
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Yo, I can't poll vote in here yet.. sorry... but i'd appreciate some people checking out my battle and voting. Its been up way too long. (this isn't a free post- i voted a couple posts up)
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punch: tek
flow: tie
multi: tek
meta: tek
structure:tel
enjoy: tie
vote: tek
tek came with the stronger n less played punchs..just need to fix up ya structure n lose the bolds..tel has potential..keep at it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107590
please hit that up
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