Yo...rules...
10 Lines
House rules
You spit first
Waitin on you dawg...
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Yo...rules...
10 Lines
House rules
You spit first
Waitin on you dawg...
ightt ill have it posted in about 20-25 min's ightt...............................
yo im gunna give you a simple sample of wut im workin wit// your lyrics are thinthey snappin like tooth picks// we all know limited loves to sueth dicks,my lyrics are sick and glichless like i said yours are weak like all these bitches.......
YOU got a demo and its a CD ROM you think u tight cuz your on rapbattels.COM
its sad u just a fag in a womens dress
bet next month u be buyin them pills to enhance your breast//
why take the chance of stepin to me ull just get rolled on like every MC??
I'm that lyricly gifted/my words will hit u and make u feel like your whoel fuckin world just shifted//SO what u plan to do?/or where you plan to go?/fuck all this ramblin let hear u flow?...........
Yo...listen up...
Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting
I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting
You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids?
You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did
You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper...
Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper
You the sort...who walks around with empty Colt bottles...
You knew I spit ill...so ya wore your protective goggles
Your herbness...you have just succesesfully proved...
Yous a hardhitter...but ya couldnt swing hard....
...even if you was Babe Ruth...
Nice battle...
ightt mann let get these votes in..............*1*
Ight...
Structure- both need work but Lmtd wtf was that shit...
punches-tie, lmtd were cleaner at times all tho More humor was delivered by hardhitter
flow-hardhitter had a cleaner flow, lmtd was ight but at times he went off track
wordplay-Hard hitter asocitated fluently thru out the rhyme more creativity, giving him the upper hand to the battle...his verse was more of a battle verse then Lmtd's was
v/ hardhitter
no beef
i wasn't feeling either verse. both i felt were played in creativity. flow was better in hard hitters verse. punches were better in LE's. both need uppin, but i felt that the end line in LE's got this one. it was a nice play on his name, and i kinda thought it was funny.
vote=LE
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ightt uppin for votes.............................#2
A'ight thx...uppin1...................................... ..................................................
ite h hitter was played also had wak flow and structure was abit of man,
l edition had wak structure but his punches hit harder also,
his flow was beta (bit streched inm places tho).............
plz hit this na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...70#post1108270 thx.............pz
get these votes in and let me know i will return the favor...............1
..One of the weakest battles of all time...I don't even want to break this one down..HH came a little better..punches more clever(not by much),both had terrible structure,flow was okat(it sucked compared to others),but overall HH was little bit better..vote HH
thanx penskills i will be sure to return the favor..............*1*
punches le:Yo...your wackness, is the only thing thats hardhitting
I leave you chokin'...cause I leave your neck twisting
metas le: You've faced the wrong guy...LE Vs. the lil' Kid Raper...
Ima serve you...ace you...like you was a term paper
personals le: You claim you hit hard...wat do you hit...fuckin' lil' kids?
You will never be a hitman...you'll fail...like ya daddy did
flow: i guess i gotta say hard hitter
overall i gotta go with le for a overall better verse
peep the links in my sig honestly please
A'ight thx...uppin2...................................... .......
A'ight thx...uppin2...................................... ............................................
come on get these votes i need a win,vote on this and i will return the favor pleazzz thanx..............~*1*~
both verses were sub whack...um....LE took this with the lack of multis by both,but i guess he had 'hard' hitting punches....
Vote-LE if i could poll i would
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108295
Return the favour
A'ight thx....uppin3..................................... .................................................. ....
votes uppin again.............................wil return the fav.............*1*
Uppin4...I will return the favor too............................................... ..................
hardhitter wat was dat shit....ur structure was fucked up and ur punches were played limited edition takes this 1 clearly..........i was likin his first 4 lines especially the daddy line as it raised a laugh...........no need 2 explain n e more cos limited edition came a lot harder and punches were doper....
hey lets get these votes in some one is gotta win soon this has been sleept on for a whiel come on noW.....i will return the favor..............*1*
uppin once again .................................................. ......votes....................................... .*1*
yo uppin thes muh fuckin votes............pleaz...............1
What the fuck was that bullshit, is it hardhitter you call ya self, niggih you couldnt get off a puch line fah ya own fuckin health. LE got that yo he beatcho ass wit them aight punches.
fuck u fagg battle me no hate vote bitch as clown ..................upin
get these votes in come on////////////////////////////////
UppinFinal...I will hit your up...plz come on....get them votes in.......................................