Ja'e Roc(0-4) Vs Neek(0-0)

[Neek]

Yeah yeah rb rules
no dicking,hating,crew,swaying,biting,recyling
due 20 minutes after tha check in
ummm 12 lines max rb minimum is 10

Good luck

[Ja'e Roc]

checkin in ....................................... hey yo bell hop oi, daddy is in da house..........................................

[Neek]

Check

[Ja'e Roc]

just off interest if u cant hack it, or back it
talkin bout ur flow n tennis racket, u need to pack,
put that wack ass style on pause, n get the fuck up outta dodge,
cause u aint hittin, wig splittin, yous a priest no shittin
let me confess, i be the best, bout to lay u to rest
walk u to the lord an explain, y u got slain, from kids cracks u need to refrain
lifes runnin down the drain, headin for a world of pain
one lesson, to hip hop i'm a blessin, got you stressin,
verbally im disecting, an misdirectin, i think u need lots of protection
from ur offerin plate, is ur bait, the only way u mate, is on a cell date
ur new house is of corrections, got ur lil ass full of erections, cheeks stretchin
to understand my flowin reflections, peeps this child rapein's bio section

[Neek]

ok...

Neeks brief-and-careless, to make you leave-embarrased, jae who ya bring-to-pair-with?Cause where im from 'roc' means-generic!/
Neeks-amp'd-and-killing-them,like a neanderthalian, when i speak-rap-intelligent,to where it takes six reads for feedback-to-settle-in../
I'll keep it nice-and-forward-yo, you're slightly-formal-posts,have been 'kindly-horrible', shoulda knew better than fighting-oral-ho(Oral-mouth-spitting /
catch-the-scribe?probably not, i mean i'll eat-ya-lines,neeks-refined,to 'atleast-his-time'/
I'll spar-him-to-a-finish,pardon-cruel-intentions,im carvein-two-intestines, wont be much change neeks been starving-for-a-minute/
I'm pertinent-with-steller-scripts,certain-for-rebelliousness, wordsmith-of-hell-is-in,neeks servin-embellishments!/

blah had to hurry..hella hungry

Neek
2004

[Neek]

lmfao@tennis racket and priest....rofl good way to crack on them but its a joke just so u kids dont flip..UPPIN

[Neek]

UPPIN #2 dont know the uppin rules im gonna peep them now tho

[Neek]

Uppin #3.....400 fuckin people online but no votes....ridiculous

[Neek]

Yeah neeks uppin it for the 4TH time....smh

[Neek]

5th Up Lets Go U Fucks Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote

[Ja'e Roc]

uppin # 1
let's get some votes peeps, n drop ur link an i'll return an honest vote 1 ......
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[Harlem's Finest]

Ummm... pretty close battle...

I think both went for the multies style, altho it didn't work well for either..
Both hardly punched the opponent, more self-glorification at times..
Jae.. weaker vocab, slightly more disses aimed, but the words used didn't connect well.. leaving kinda individual punches if you get me.. they shoulda been intertwined constantly rather than jumping from subject to subject in one bar..
Flow/structure was okay I guess tho..
Neek.. this-multie-approach was real wack.. messed the flow up throughout..
Again, not many punches thrown, but they were good enough when they were dropped.. creative..
Basically.. I'd call it even, but really only for the vocab used, slightly better wordplay maybe..

Vote - Neek

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108097

[Neek]

Heh...k.........................................We need more 1-0 me

[Jay-Nova]

Yo Neek Straight Merked This Cat......yo Neek Pm Me.....i Wanna Talk To U Homie.....1.......

Vote- Neek.....ill Be Back To Poll Later.....i Only Need 2 More...1

[Limited Edition]

Breakdown...

Punches- Neek
Flow- Both
Creativity- Neek
Opener- Niether
Closer- Neek
Enjoyment- Both

Overall-Neek

Fuckin' close as hell...but Neek got this with mad multis, linked with his punches...Jae Roc did good too, but Neek got this with a better verse...no hate...sorry can't poll vote...