10 Lines
No Crew Hate D/R Votes
No biting
No feeding.
Etc..
You Spit first
Lets do this, good luck. :shocked:
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10 Lines
No Crew Hate D/R Votes
No biting
No feeding.
Etc..
You Spit first
Lets do this, good luck. :shocked:
checkin in i got dinner soon so...i'll do what i can....
welcome to tonights contest i drop hotness in bright colors to light up this kids projects..
my skill projects leaves this sig askin for help... guess your sig didn't honor my bomb threats..
AJ alias who alias what and i gotta spit first so you can rehearse and match line for line my blindspit verse..
thats absurd i smell herb don't get perturbed cause i can take a verb and use in different context blurred..
your vision must be tough to see without pupils son no followers to honor your scruples son..
A and J left standing 4 A-lone and J-acked constant attack can't get this monkey off a my back..
i've been sent on a mission by god to listen to rappers and you suck but'll i'l give u a break thats my holy intermission..
its all about intuition these kids constantly wishin they knew who they was dissin point missin..
front lines ain't nothing but a PC code on a website site..u started it tight so you a vet right..
i extradite those not puttin up extra fight aj's left like the dumb kid at the spellin b holdin the MIC
Rated-Under You?..More Laughs from this Illeterate Jokin Lyricist...
See you cud clear Smoka outta IJL..but you'd stil be left Spittin Mist
With lyrics ya don't bite ya nibble..I'll merk ya ass for shits an giggles
This aint no riddle..a broke comedian cracks ya jokers with scribbles
Ya more like Over-Hated w/ ya fake ass Record strivin for Attention
Unders name's on everbodies Lips..still his name did'nt get Mentioned
Ya could look at Av for ya rhymes..so ya shit could be bit two times
This battles jus a breeze..& I blow thru UnderRated like Wind Chimes
Ya rhymes couldent go strait to me head..even if you got em alined
This battles over and the purpose of your name...just got re-defined
hmmmmmmmm tough battle yo tough battle but I gotta choose a winna........my vote goes to TheUnderRated.The reason for this is because he had good vocab
(Im not sayin u didnt AJ) and because he had good personals.
Good job both of u it was a tough decision..........u were good AJ
VOTE- TheUnderRated
"Good vocab" ah... just like you had a "good vote". Gone.
-Axe
No hate or anything, but could you please use the system we are supposed to use for voting on battles? Keep your vote the same, just break it down better, so ya don't get in trouble.:)
Welp Like unknown said tough battle, but my opinion is AJ took this one wit punches, flow, and structure.......Underated was juss as good like I said it's HARD and it's my OPINION.........................But both are there no evlevating really needed, juss more punches and funnier shit....... Vote:AJ, no hate please drop a honest vote on this battle everybody, please return the favour, underated and AJ.....
^All that... and you actually said nothing. Gone.
-Axe
aight kool thanx for the feedback uppin this for votes.....
good battle
under rated came tight, familiar also, hmmm
good word flow and structure
AJ just came a lot tighter better punches, good flow, vocab and finisher
good battle but AJ just barely
Shut your face you. Vote gone.
-Axe
yo dis wuz a hott battle props to both mc's, both of yall stacked up pretty much the same in all aspects.............so on pure enjoyment and visual things i saw i would give this to TheUnderRated...........no hate just so close didnt have much to separate to pick
vote= TheUnderRated
2nd bad vote I've seen from you... gone.
-Axe
Visual? Did you see his structure? But hey its your vote dude.
1st Uppin for votes.
As soon as you explain you vote, damn, why dno't you people seem to get that?
2nd Uppin For Some Votes Please...
aight ima have to go wit underrated on this one because of betetr pucnhes personals and vocab
his punches hit harder were more consistant and his verse was overally better
even though ur structure was fucked up .....i still think u took this battle
hit my battles up in the sig cuz i took the time for this
You failed to mention AJ's verse... even to say, "you suckededed." Vote gone.
-Axe
Wat u talkin `bout????????????? I explained my vote
AJ alias who alias what and i gotta spit first so you can rehearse and match line for line my blindspit verse..
thats absurd i smell herb don't get perturbed cause i can take a verb and use in different context blurred..
alot of multied nothing'ness......
Honestly....Under treid way to hard here.....His punches were off'key and he really outdid the multi's to the point where his verse was delivering a message but total kaos...
AJ simply delivered an consistant flo filled wit witty personal's wordplay and punches all mixed together....not much of a competition here.....Under tried to hard....
vote AJ
drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107857
under...i'll say it again....shorten ur shit up....I'm tellin ya
Very close battle. Underated's lines were too long. Shit looks horrible, to stretched. Underated had more hard hitting punches, and a couple multis(not much but more than AJ). AJ's was easy to read, and visualy easier to digest. Close one but punches win battles and i think underated barely edged this one out.Close battle though, fellas.Keep doin' the damn thang.
v/ The Under Rated
Peep my battle when you guys get a chance...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=107351&page=2
kool thanx for the feedback guys......still uppin this for votes...
uppin x3................................................ .either klasdkljfjkasjkfjsajkldfjklasdjklfjklasdfjklaskjl; dfjklsadjkflsdajklf
Damn... Alot of overruled votes got dismissed here....
Structure-AJ
Flow-pretty close
Punches-AJ
Originality-TheUnderRated
Creativity-AJ
Humor-AJ
This was pretty much a one sided battle
AJ came pretty dope.... very good verse
ALot of dope punches......................
The UnderRated... Ya flow was choppy
Your structure was screwed to hell
Punches were decent.. but need work
Vote-AJ
He simply came harder
This was a pretty good battle here...
Under: you had some good flow in there, it flowed pretty good...had some good punches....but your structure wasnt that good, even though you made up for it with the multies but still should try to shorten that down a bit.
AJ: you also had some good flow.....you had the better punches i thought....had some good personals in there that were pretty good i thought....aslo you had the better structure which helped the flow.
But overall this was a good battle, but i think AJ took it with the better punches. Props To Both.
I was in the middle of cleaning this thread last night, but I had to leave, so battle reopened @ 3-1.
Under- Ive seen better from you before I dont know what happend here. Your verse was filled with multis but no real clever punches were in there. It flowed pretty well, but it was like the punches you did throw in were not really aimed directly at him. It needed better personals too.
AJ- Your verse had some pretty clever punches in it with some nice personals too. It also seemed to flow pretty well. You stayed stong threw out the whole verse too an ended with a nice personal. Pretty good verse
OVERALL- AJ his personals an punches were more creative an were aimed on the spot.
Good battle guys
Return the favor an drop a fair vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106449
Thanks
man if you don't get the punches thats fine but i had tons of personals.....uppin this xxxxx44444 <---not an attempt to sway....one
^^Kid you had 2 personals, I had plenty more, don't sway again or I will get another mod in here.
3rd Uppin for Some Votes.
Vote - Underated.
This Battle Was Really One Sided..Underated Had The Edge In About Everything..Better Punchlines, Better Flow, And More Creativity..His Punchlines Connected Against AJ Harder Then AJ..AJ's Stuff Wasn't That Good..It Had A Pretty Good Flow And All..But The Punchlines Were Not As Hard Hitting..So Underated Just Came Out More...
Return The Favor..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108336
^^Can someone say...Herb...those are the types of votes that are removed.
4th Uppin For Good Votes.
Ehhh......Both Verses Were Kinda Weak....AJ Had Played Lines (Wind Chimes) And Some Soft Hitting Punches And UnderRated Had A Good Punch Every Three Or So Lines....And Some Of AJ's Personals Made Absolutely No Sense...Only Line Worth Mentioning...
^Funny And A Good PunchQuote:
Originally Posted by The UnderRated
my skill projects leaves this sig askin for help... guess your sig didn't honor my bomb threats..
Opener - Under
Closer - AJ
Punches - Tie (AJ Threw Weak And Under Threw A Good One Here And There)
Personals - Under (Made Sense And Were Harder)
Structure - AJ (Without A Doubt)
Vocab - Under
Flow - AJ
Vote - Under, For Having Better Punches When There Was One...No Hate To AJ But You Had Punches But Alot Of Your Shit Was Either Played Or Just Made No Sense..
Hmm...Aight battle..
Under.. ya bars were alil stretched homie... work on making them alot shorter
You had lots of multies in that shit.. so even tho ya bars was stretched.. they flow'd
Ya punches were original.. had a couple creative personals...Over aight verse
AJ..Lots of played shit... most of ya punches was played concepts(joker/comedian)
You had tha flow and structure... but under canceled those out with his wordplay
so
V/ Under
Oh well, if I lose to some certain d/r votes then it's cool, I got the style people like and believe me my lines werent played.
5th Uppin
Originality - Both.. nothin played
Punches - Both.. different style but both successful
Personals - AJ.. had more..
Flow - Underrated
Structure - Both.. easy to follow
Multis - Underrated
Meta4s - Underrated
Opener - AJ.. v.witty
Closer - AJ.. jus edged this one
VoTe = Underrated
This was helluvva close call.. both came strong with their respective styles.. felt Underrated's multis made for an ill flow an some real fresh meta4s thrown in made this an easy read.. AJ opened an closed sikk as fukk but felt a bit too much filler at points.. dont get me wrong.. verse was deep.. jus enjoyed readin Underrated's more.
Well battled fellas..
Drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post1111724
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...38#post1111738
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