Outcome Vs Krakka T

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Checkin In Ill Spit First......................
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Yo Look At This Herb Who Thinks Hes Tight Like 50 Cents/
He Thinks He Can Rap But This Guy Aint Really Makin Sense//
Haha This Is Week This Shit Isnt Even Intense,u A Reject/
Ur Gettin Merked So Bad U Should Just Hang Your Self Or Snap Ya Neck//
I Thought It Would Be Over In A Couple Days But Now I Think It''ll Only Take A Couple Secs/(seconds)
I Got A Losin Record But Man Its Like This Guys A 5 Year Old Kid Battlelin A Vet//
U Say You Name Is This Guy Name Outcome/
But Ur Lines Are Wack I Think You Need To Get Outsome//
Just Say It''my Name Is Outcome Im A Newb But Im Still Wack Son''/
By The Time This Battles Over Its 5 Votes To None//

Done:

Hurry Up Spit Dude.................checkin Then Spit Peace

Checkin in, sorry for tha lateness, but i was off asleep

T,I like you already, you admit your a Krakka that shows intigrity/
Sucking at rap wont turn you black son saddly thats reality/
Become my first casualty to pull a matrix revealin there own mortality/
I wonderd why you had a hole n ya head then it clicked, homosexuality/
Kraks so under my influence even his computers ready to follow me/
He's a local crack head, with no dick, feenin so much hes actin bitch/
Fuck your whole net existence,switch sites, before i admit you have syphlis/
thats the only way youll be ill and doctors can cure that sickness/

my vote goes to Outcome.reason:coz Krakka T waz jst to simple.sorry bud
vote:outcome

Krakka -this verse needed more punches -just wasn't feelin' it.

Yo Look At This Herb Who Thinks Hes Tight Like 50 Cents/
He Thinks He Can Rap But This Guy Aint Really Makin Sense//
^not a strong opener, no punch: 3/10

Haha This Is Week This Shit Isnt Even Intense,u A Reject/
Ur Gettin Merked So Bad U Should Just Hang Your Self Or Snap Ya Neck//
^mostly filler, no punches: 4/10

I Thought It Would Be Over In A Couple Days But Now I Think It''ll Only Take A Couple Secs/(seconds)
I Got A Losin Record But Man Its Like This Guys A 5 Year Old Kid Battlelin A Vet//
^structure and flow was WAY off here: 3/10

U Say You Name Is This Guy Name Outcome/
But Ur Lines Are Wack I Think You Need To Get Outsome//
Outsome? no, doesn't even make sense, but attempted a personal: 3/10

Just Say It''my Name Is Outcome Im A Newb But Im Still Wack Son''/
By The Time This Battles Over Its 5 Votes To None//
^wrong, and no punches in tha closer -nothing about this bar or verse was hard, and you had almost no punches/ snaps or personals: 3/10

Outcome:

T,I like you already, you admit your a Krakka that shows intigrity/
Sucking at rap wont turn you black son saddly thats reality/
^ok opener: 5/10

Become my first casualty to pull a matrix revealin there own mortality/
I wonderd why you had a hole n ya head then it clicked, homosexuality/
^ok, decent: 6/10

Kraks so under my influence even his computers ready to follow me/
He's a local crack head, with no dick, feenin so much hes actin bitch/
^lol, hice wordplay: 6/10

Fuck your whole net existence,switch sites, before i admit you have syphlis/
thats the only way youll be ill and doctors can cure that sickness/
^lil played, but still funny, decent close. Coulda been a stronger verse, but: 6/10

Krakka: 16/50 32% (not)ill: Read up on some good battles, elevate your flows wit' wordplay and punches.

Outcome: 23/40 57.5% ill -still need some work, but not TOO bad a verse. (only 8 lines too, so it was a lil short)

Vote: Outcome

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103166
Return the favor and hit this wit' an honest vote.

Outcome came with more complexity..
Hence vocabulairy & overall writing skill.
Still doesnt make a verse good though, Both elevate.
Work on punches & creativity..apply wit & comedy..
Krakka was far to simplistic..Hardly enjoyable,
To be quite honest.. & work on your structure..
Its all over the place, but overall Outcome takes it,
With a overall better battles verse (& punches..)

vote Outcome

He Gets Dqed Tho Because The Rule Was He Has To Spit 10 Lines
So He Either Gets Dqed Or The Battle Should Be Closed
He Did Not Follow The Rules

Mods He Should Be Dq Ed
He Did Not Follow The Rules..........

Can Some One Close This
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Some One Close This Battle Rules Are Rules No Matter What......

Damn quit your fucking bitching, honestly.. Ive got a slow computer, and if your bitching about me spiting one bar less here.

wiky wow wicky wow
can we call this dick a bitch now....

Get over it for now shit this battle aint all mighty and important, and STOP FREEPOSTING dick...

Outcome had a better flow even though it was a little simple. The punches were even but krakka's close was better. Now Krakka's wasn't too much more intense but he got a little more personal wit his lines. NO hate but Krakka got this one. Barely though.

Vote_KRAKKA T
open Battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107807

Originality - Outcome.. Krakka smacked of 'played'
Punches - Outcome.. more personal so harder hittin
Personals - Outcome.. more of a direct verse.. Krakka was a bit general
Flow - Both
Multis - Neither
Opener - Outcome.. only coz Krakkas was worse
Closer - see above ^

VoTe = Outcome

Took all the necessary catergories.. more battle worthy i.e. personal

Drop a vote here plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107052

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aiight Outcome got this one for more creativity and better structure plus he had alright punches, elevate some, ull be alright...... krakka man u gotta work on ur structure its all over the place, no hate jsut helpin u out, and work on ur lines make them more complex....

vote Outcome

can yall drop an honest vote at my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...79#post1092479

I Guess The Mods Aint Gone Close This Shit But I Guess We Should Justt Finish The Battle Even Tho This Kid Only Spit 8 Lines When Theres A Max 10 Line Rule
But Fuckit Lets Get The Votes

Lmao man you fucking bitch a grip!!!!!!! No joke.... Now i feel bad, i mean shit my first battle back to RB and i godda this....

Haha Whatever Guy Shutup
Uppin For Some Votes...........

nice battle

my vote goes to out come
out coem you had better punches and wordplay in your verse

krakka your verse was a lil played, but what i mean is it was to basi, you had no hard hitting punches wich you could of used towards out come and no personals that would of maybe highlighted your verse

to:
outcome: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108441

alright the polls say its 4-1. Upping for votes

Yo, I'm about 10 posts short to poll so can't help you there... but Outcome definitely had this battle.. better flow, structure, creativity, punches.. everything was better. No hate Krakka, but I'v seen you do alot better.

Vote-Outcome

Return favor. Anyone please hit up my battle with honest votes, its almost done. Sleepin real bad though.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&page=2&pp=15

yo dis was close battle and i was feelin both ur shyt and da flow was consitstant..but imma vote for krakka t cuz of his closer besides dat close battle
vote=krakka t
any1 hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108745

LoL alright at least we have determined that your crew has your back

thats 7-2 my way, upping this battle for another polled vote unless a mods gunna peep this and credit the win.

No He Voted Before I Was In The Crew So It Dont Matter Peace Uppin

One sided battle....
Outcome actually had some punches.. not that great but punches
Krakka had words that sort of rhymed
Outcome's verse was more complex.. better wordplay
And better flow

so

V/ OutCome