alright u know the rules
20 min time limit after last person check in.
-Technician-
Da_Killa_Kid
alright u know the rules
20 min time limit after last person check in.
ch-ch-ch-ch-ch checkin in..........................
10 lines.....
checkin in.................................
Im bout to open the book of bitch and write a new chapter
for a technician ya skillz is that of a broke rapper,
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
swung and missed when I stood there and gave you a free hit,
there's no arousal in ya punches like puss wit no clit,
i battle front lines, this bitch nigga plays hopscotch on streets,
but it's nap time bitch ya sleep increases ya defeat,
now i could give ya ass a warning or beat ya punk ass wit a bat,
or hand u back ya broke ass lyrics and tell ya fix that,
MUTHAFUCKA
good look yo
I rush this fuckin newb with witty lines that tower his verse
Rhymes only run clean and smooth when I shower ur words
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
I think your confused, you told me that you wanted the win
The drink u refused, allowed me to make your head do a spin
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Your left in dier straights and my guesture is always to jumplines
Wishin for sick with a fisherman's Stix, this a walk thru the river is thick
I deliver it quick hit ya liver wit bricks, there now I left you literlly sick
nice drop yo. u came wit some pretty hot shit.....
Im bout to open the book of bitch and write a new chapter
for a technician ya skillz is that of a broke rapper,
ya lyrics like porn for gays stuck on too much dick
my shit's used to eatin pussies got that cunning linguist shit,
swung and missed when I stood there and gave you a free hit,
there's no arousal in ya punches like puss wit no clit,
i battle front lines, this bitch nigga plays hopscotch on streets,
but it's nap time bitch ya sleep increases ya defeat,
now i could give ya ass a warning or beat ya punk ass wit a bat,
or hand u back ya broke ass lyrics and tell ya fix that,
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7/10 was ok nuttin speacial decent punches and personals
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I rush this fuckin newb with witty lines that tower his verse
Rhymes only run clean and smooth when I shower ur words
I try a little yes, but you beat yourself like in the middle of sex
Spit on ya quest, rip on his fasion cuz I see this kid in a dress
I think your confused, you told me that you wanted the win
The drink u refused, allowed me to make your head do a spin
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Your left in dier straights and my guesture is always to jumplines
Wishin for sick with a fisherman's Stix, this a walk thru the river is thick
I deliver it quick hit ya liver wit bricks, there now I left you literlly sick
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pretty good 8/10 better battle verse good punches and personals hit harder
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vote/technician for better overall Attempt and Battle Verse
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Aight battle.....
Tech.... aight punches.... aight multies at tha end...
good flow to it..... and wordplay was nice
Kid....Most of your punches were played...
wordplay was minimal... flow was aight...
but you didn't come hard enuff
so
V/ Tech
hit this up with an honest vote.... thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107743
Vote gone. Not explained. -Token
Last edited by Token; January 19th, 2004 at 11:28 AM
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
Come on ppl get these votes in. Get er Done.................................
This was Ok
punches - tech
personals - none really
flow - tie
creativity - tech
opener - didnt like either
closer - tech
OVERALL - tech......seen him come harder but he still edged this
Hit up the link in my sig
This is the third time I've seen you vote like this. You have been here WAY too long to do this. Stop immediately. Vote gone -Token
Last edited by Token; January 19th, 2004 at 11:29 AM
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
punches - Tech
personals - Neither
flow - Both
creativity - Tech
opener - Both
closer - Tech
Tech came harder with better punches, I didn't see any from Da_Kid at all.
My punchlines hit so hard they put the pressure on like crunchtime
Wasn't that good, but still probably the best line.
Vote - technician
Vote gone. EXPLAIN VOTES -Token
Last edited by Token; January 19th, 2004 at 11:30 AM
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
wise ways was a hate vote!............................................. ...................
LM's shit was a hate vote too. And he knows that shit. Cause we was beefin when I was in my other crew.
opener tech wasnt really feelin dkk
punches tech came alittle harder
personals none
closer tech neither were really good dkk's was corny
vote tech
pretty good battle
return the favor yte grl vs it
No unexplained votes. -Token
Last edited by Token; January 19th, 2004 at 11:34 AM
the kid took this by far....if yall would understand what he was sayin...he straight merked the other cat....
VOTE-KID
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