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no crew votes
no hate votes
no dick ride votes
you spit first
checking in
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16 lines
no crew votes
no hate votes
no dick ride votes
you spit first
checking in
im not spittin first... sick of biters and no shows..............
I'm neither of those dawg............But its all good even though I said it in the rules...I will spit sometime later today..its 1:59 am here...so yeah...
lol... iight man... you know that youve gotta be careful tho... too many biters and no shows around these days...
well im at college now man... and its 10.09 am... so a will get home bout 6... so ima spit sometime tonight... we will say the deadline is tonight yea... jus spit anytime tonight...
im busy... your probably busy... so we will jus spit tonight...
inabit dawg
listen...
im not droppin first... so if that ent ok... then close this...
laterz
OUT
Dawg, It's okay! lol take a breather.....It just now turned 11:30 and i'm just waking up..let me get the ol' noodle going then i will spit first....
Ayo check it...
you can protest, bitch and moan, I'll stay wreckin with text/
I'm like goldberg in this game but i'm already asking who's next/
cats dont know my name yet, But what the hell were you thinking?/
Battlin me? a loss is followin behind like your ass was connected wit a slinky/
kid... you could kiss the biggest vets ass and Spit thier shit/*
I'll abuse you and have ya cryin worse then a bitch wit a chick flick/
you see, the only way your sick is when the producer shouts "ACTION!/
you belive you won? you just got PUNK'd like my name was ashton/
come with your best because the KiLLa leaves ya served with words/
Common bro, Act cool.. cause We all know you hang wit' nerds and herbs/
check it..I got your equation like i'm battling with mathmatics/
this mans in a panic..suckin more dick then a inhaler to a asthmatic/
the question is..Are you really gay? or just tryin to make friends/
only time your a winner is when you battle wack emcees and take wins/
even though i dont need it, i will give ya a closer out of respect/
your magic mirrors been broken, theres no further time to reflect/
*saying how he can kiss the vets ass, have them shit in his mouth so he can spit thier shit...
.............KILT.............
listen...
im about to rip this bitch ass newb, like a piece of fucking paper
these lyrics are so heated im turnin him into water vapour
a had to make your ass go first cuz a knew that you would bite
your not tight, your about as bright as a shady grey light
but who really knows... you could be on the verge of a decent verse
even if this dickhead manages it... he'll still come out the worst
without any regard... on the spot, im gona merk this retard
spit flames till he charred... battered, broken and scarred
your wordplay is weak... just like your dick its withered and limp
so we all know that you lie... when you claim to be a pimp
rippin you apart so easily... just like a bulldog off the lead
you already lost up there... so admit defeat and concede
time to be wiped out... erased till there is no trace to follow
your head is like the inside of a dead tree, its just empty and hollow
you cant punch anyone... cuz all you do is slap
between your check-in and retirement...
...im jus fillin the gap
uppin this #1
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ite i peeped this earlier b4 free spit and i thaught,
killas verse was ite but had streched bars and no real hard punches,
your wordplay was non xsistent but wasnt a bad verse,
then,
free,nice man youve elavated alot nice structure and complexcity, also a few hard punches in there aswell, best line had to be the closer that hit like whoa man nice drop try-out for instant..................................pz
Thought Freeman took it..wuts yarec..freeman
but the newb wasnt half bad..u had sum coo punhces an wut not but sum shit was gay..didnt feel ya whole verse not bad tho
freeman had a bette structure an wut not..plus he had harder httin punches
both were aite..
V-Free Man
Hit this link Up cuz i voted on ya shit honestly..Plz...pc.
Click it..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106125
this battle was straight....Killa what's ya name...you came with some aight concepts but your punches didn't hit....you need to reword them and get out of the simplistic set you're in.......up your complexity a bit.....
Freeman came with a stronger verse......punches coulda been harder but they were enough to snag you a win here......best punch of your entire verse was your closer... nice win....vote Freeman
please return the fav...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106083
iight... 3-0 to me in text... 2-0 poll...
uppin this #2..................................
thanks for votin y'all........................
damn freeman took this battle with better multies and a more advanced wordplay
vote freeman.. killa mc you came kind of weak in this battle
hey hit this battle up with a vote then ill poll vote in this battle
heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107140
[I]My view on this is:
punches - freeman
personals - freeman
flow - tie
creativity - freeman
opener - freeman
closer - freeman
OVERALL - freeman......good closer
iight... thanks for the votes...
4-0 text... 3-0 poll...
lets finish this before a go to sleep...
uppin #3......................................
yo dont have enough post yet but ofcourse freeman took dis shyt.....close battle but freeman better punches at the end..........
yo my boy freeman, representin the UK. ur flow is dope, the rhymes were kickin, u got this hands down.
vote-freeman
iight... lets close this please...
6-0 text... 3-0 poll...
uppin #4...........................................
pretty close battle
good verse by both
but imma go wit free cuz of hiz punches n flow
ur punches were hard n rite ate m
micz waz good 2....but ur punches werent hit az hard as freemanz
p0unches: free
flow: free
structure:......??? prolly free cuz of micz linez stretched out
humour: tie
opener: tie
cozer:free
vote: freeman
hit dis battle up.....thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106644
iight...
my last uppin... #5...
lets get this closed please...
thanks to those who polled... someone forgot to poll... but no mata... its being dealt with...
OUT
Both could elevate.....
punches goes to free.. they hit more direct.. a lil better personals
Mics... got tha streched bars... and free got flow cuz of it
both had played concepts
so
v/Free
First of all nice battle
Killa- You had some pretty decent punches in there an some aight meta's. Nice drop for you to be new. Its just alot of your punches didnt really hit that hard.
Free- Your verse was good too. Had some really nice punches in there. A few werent that hard but the ones you did have made up for it. Good creativity on the closer too. That killed it
OVERLALL-Free with a harder hitting verse
Return the favor an vote in my battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542
Thanks