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GaZeeBo
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Yo this kid is a fucking joke, who's about to drown in this game/
Plus, You suck at flow,structure and multis....and you got an unpronouncable name!/
I’m flaming emcees, cause I got fire for spits that put a quick end to life with placid scripts/
I’m blaming textcee’s cause if you put your rhymes to lips they sound like retards on acid trips/
I'll play you like skits and you’re the only actor/
I’m the x-factor that’s got your head half circular like a protractor/
Takin everything i say easy, i aint a newb so stop your grinning/
Came here the day after new years...but obviously your resolution wasnt winning!/
Wipe that smirk right off this website, every bar should be considered sins/
Wonderin about his record? Check his profile...hasnt battled a guy yet with over 5 wins!/
yo gazeebo
How the hell you keep TALKIN SMACK
when its a LOCKED IN FACT
that your mouths had more meat in it that a fat persons SHOPPING RACK?
you'll just get SHOCKED AN SMACKED
and CHOPPED IN HALF for DROPPIN WACK
verses that contain less "punchlines" than "a armless man in a BOXING MATCH"
and lyrically you come weaker than CHINGY'S RAPS
your flows are just SIMPLY TRASH
a verse of your rhymes have more "stretched lines" than oprah WINFREY'S ASS
and your in xlg cuz you cant come on this SITE ALONE
your fuckin LIFES YA HOME
id rather get shot than listen to you on a MICROPHONE
ill just STRIKE YA BONES and attack the nerve cells in your LYSOSOMES
word on the street is you had the entire RB CYPHER BLOWN
just so niggas could say that the shit you SPIT WHERE HARD
your throats probably had more nuts in it than a SNICKER BAR
ripped
wow.. good battle uppin this for votes............................................. .................................................. ......................
ite this is it,
gaz-came nice man,nice punches that closer was i killa dawg,structure was abit off,but personals and wordplay was nice,
smilly boy-nice flow but structure was agen off and i dnt like the CAPs on ur punches leave it, also ur punches wernt that hot,
v-gazeebo nice..............pz
Huh? Vote gone.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 15th, 2004 at 06:08 PM
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man what a fake ass vote the only reason you voted for gazeebo was cuz he voted real quick in your battle if i win this battle 5 to 1 im a be mad ass fuck.. im a still count this as a ko win though.. again uppin for REAL votes
Yo this kid is a fucking joke, who's about to drown in this game/
Plus, You suck at flow,structure and multis....and you got an unpronouncable name!/
^^Not a good opener..
I’m flaming emcees, cause I got fire for spits that put a quick end to life with placid scripts/
I’m blaming textcee’s cause if you put your rhymes to lips they sound like retards on acid trips/
^^^weak punch
I'll play you like skits and you’re the only actor/
I’m the x-factor that’s got your head half circular like a protractor/
^^eh....could've worded it better...
Takin everything i say easy, i aint a newb so stop your grinning/
Came here the day after new years...but obviously your resolution wasnt winning!/
^^concept is there but your wording's off
Wipe that smirk right off this website, every bar should be considered sins/
Wonderin about his record? Check his profile...hasnt battled a guy yet with over 5 wins!/
^^^verrry verrrrry weak closer
Overall your verse was real weak, no quotables your punches weren't landin at all and your bars were real stretched which didn't help your verse any....keep elevatin.......
How the hell you keep TALKIN SMACK
when its a LOCKED IN FACT
that your mouths had more meat in it that a fat persons SHOPPING RACK?
^^Nice couplet....wordplay's nice
you'll just get SHOCKED AN SMACKED
and CHOPPED IN HALF for DROPPIN WACK
verses that contain less "punchlines" than "a armless man in a BOXING MATCH"
^^lol....lol
and lyrically you come weaker than CHINGY'S RAPS
your flows are just SIMPLY TRASH
a verse of your rhymes have more "stretched lines" than oprah WINFREY'S ASS
lmao.....funny punch...NICE
and your in xlg cuz you cant come on this SITE ALONE
your fuckin LIFES YA HOME
id rather get shot than listen to you on a MICROPHONE
^^played and weak......
ill just STRIKE YA BONES and attack the nerve cells in your LYSOSOMES
word on the street is you had the entire RB CYPHER BLOWN
^^could've worded it better.......
just so niggas could say that the shit you SPIT WHERE HARD
your throats probably had more nuts in it than a SNICKER BAR
^Played punch.....bad for your closer
Overall your verse was aight...you had the flow and you had some originality somewhat only thing is you fell off from the middle to the end of your verse..... and stop usin the caps i think cats can catch your punches without you havin to bold it out to the world........ Nice win...
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iight...
this was close... good flow from both... smilie takes the punches... gaz takes the structure... its pretty even...
[i]ip-dip-sky-blue[/b]... haha... only playin...
ima say smilie took this for the punches...
vote -
OUT
"Nice" vote... gone.
-Axe
Last edited by Axe; January 15th, 2004 at 06:09 PM
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Both came a bit weak...
Mostly mild punches from Gab and pretty played ones from Smiley...
Smiley's played moments:
"less "punchlines" than "a armless man in a BOXING MATCH"
(come on, ya don't think that's been thought of 500,000 times?)
"your flows are just SIMPLY TRASH"
(done for multi's sake only, and it's been done to death)
"more "stretched lines" than oprah WINFREY'S ASS"
(Anything Oprah is played, but that was still funny.)
Gab's weak punches:
"scripts/acid trips" Very eh...
"actor/protractor", Come on!
Memorables:
Gab:
"Yo this kid is a fucking joke, who's about to drown in this game/
Plus, You suck at flow,structure and multis....and you got an unpronouncable name!"
Good personal, too stretched, but this was tight.
"Takin everything I say easy, I aint a newb so stop your grinning/
Came here the day after new years...but obviously your resolution wasnt winning!"
Another good personal and timely...
Smiley:
"your mouths had more meat in it that a fat persons SHOPPING RACK"
A bit forced, but still ok...
"just so niggas could say that the shit you SPIT WHERE HARD
your throats probably had more nuts in it than a SNICKER BAR"
Pretty played, but flipped real nice, cool.
See, this is close...
But overall, I think Gazeebo had the better memorables and wasn't as played.
Now, be mad about it, report it to IR...
Whatever...
That's a fair vote.
Peace
good shyt.....very one sided battle...my vote goes to
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Vote=Gazeebo
smiley, this isn't audio, you gotta extend your punches a bit. Put some multis into it or something. I don't mean make them stretched as hell, but your verse sounded a lot like an audio verse, plus the punches were kinda played. Like the oprah winfrey's ass one, it was kinda funny/decent, but you'd be surprised at how many people use it. Very played. And no need for all that capitalization, we get your punches/wordplay.
gazeebo, you've elevated a bit since your last few battles.....some decent punches here. You came a bit played too, but the closer was a decent personal jab. Fix up your structure and work on your punches. Use multis also.
I think gazeebo got this just because he came less played and actually hit from some personal angles. So he gets my vote. Good luck.
Go Red Wings
how in the hell is this even close.. anyways uppin for more votes
Vote= Gazeebo = Me= Just Kidding!!!
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punches=
flow= smile really close tho
personals= Gazeebo
Structure= none
funny= smile
Creativity= tie
complexitiy= tie
prewritten= gazeebo your quotes are curved unlike these """""
multies=
overall=
Gazeebo= Yo I felt ya personals. i liked the protrator line, shit was nice. but you need to shorten your lines, i hate long lines, so thats what brought you down. nice verse though...juss didnt come as hard as ...
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