.:FreemaN:. Vs KiLlEr EmCeE

RULES

10 lines...
no hate/crew & so on... votes
checkin and spit 1hour MAXIMUM after checkin
if u break rules... and youve checked in... automatic win for other dude...

good luck...

im abit busy now... will key up soon....

inabit

shit...

forgot to checkin............................

checkin in.......................................

yo killer... check in man..................

good luck!

chek innnnnn*************
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iight...

im done...

check in ffs..........................

im not droppin till you do..............................

listen...

about to rip this... herb, can tell that ur shittin bricks
dirty lil faggot... boy, a newb thats scared of conflicts
blatant newb rapper... the only way you can make yourself feel good
is chattin about... how you have a reputation for murderin in the 'hood'
pointless shit... u cant be real, like a ghost in a dream
your accociated... with the word 'fool' more than the 'A-Team'
with basic rhymes... you even managed to scrape a win
and just got merked... only a newb yet your already as 'has been'
shameful... like a ostrich, ur gona bury ur head in the sand
degrading... how you get ripped so easily, you should be banned

notice how the beginning of each line {in bold}...
spells out its own sentence... got really bored, so a thought id do that...

hurry up wiv ya verse man....

good luck........................

ite ite....

Now all da headz com n watch dis emcee bout 2 get run- ova
dis bitch but baby powder 2 hiz face tellin peeps he a hova
u comin here iz like a whitee steppin 2 Qnzbridge-cant survive
he jump outta hiz wagon n' he bleedin- got hit wit a knive
Yo freeman, u aint eva gonna b free...bitch, u still mah slave!
prepare 4 ya death- i already got men werkin' on ya grave
you do martial artz??den try 2 break da punches im spittin'
U aint capable of shyt bitch...all ur shyt iz bittin n' re-written
It's not ova until da fat lady singz-but ur mom juss sang....
dam son,u look at ya momz clit?...shytz bigga dan da big bang!

(for yall dat dunno wa dat big bang iz...u stupid...or if u wanna noe....clik: http://www.umich.edu/~gs265/bigbang.htm)

o srry bout dat.....i waz sorta bizy///////uppin(1)
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yo Freeman u got my vote cause u have structure, punchlines and ur flow was ill!!

Killer Emciee u werent bad at all either but u need 2 elevate still dawg!!

a good battle, both of u were good but free gets my vote

iight thanks for the vote...

lets get some more in here..........................

uppin #1

thanks

killer had a nice spit for a newb but it wasnt as hard as freemans
he came wit more structure n flow
close battle
vote=freeman

Killa had better punches to me.... Freeman yo idea was tight homie, but it lacked the punches, and in my eyes, punches win battles... lOl

can ya'll please put an honest vote down on my battle??? good lookin out... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106154

iight... uppin this shit for the second time...

lets close this off... 2-0 txt... 1-0 poll...

lets poll our votes people...

thanks

Find battle, Freeman, don't bold like that, it's kind of a gimmick that takes away from the content of your verse. But anyhow, you took this, simple matter of punches and complexity. Other cat needs to elevate his vocab and punching ability, Freeman gets my vote.

iight man thanks... was really bored... jus thought id do it... lol...

what is up with the new skin on this site?... a dont like it... messes up all the verses and so on... makes them go down onto the next line... and basically eliminates any flow that was there?!

a reckon they should put the old one bk on...

uppin #3

Haha, understood. Oh, and Freeman. Check bitch slapped! haha

ite nice drops,

free-nice structure, wity shit dwn da side.lol.nice flow and ite punches,

killa-came nice with structure and punches but wsnt up 2 free.

gd battle,

vote-free..............pz

Originality - Freeman.. other dude was jus frontin
Punches - Freeman.. were actually directed at his opponent
Personals - Neither
Flow - Both
Struture - Not sure if i liked that bold sentence but shit was origianl at least

VoTe = Freeman

Peep these or be bugged:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106773

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...75#post1088475

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Freeman wins with a pretty inventive and creative format.

Plus there was some nice punching going on as well.

That "fool/A-team" line killed this for you.

Killer was mostly simple, elementary disses.
It flowed a bit choppy and there was no wordplay whatsoever.

For better metas and better punches.

Freeman

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