Mel-Man Vs. Blak Woods

10-15 lines
No krew
No hate
No Dickridaz....


Drop 15 min afta checkin....




check in......................

I'm doind two battles right now also, this one and another one, so bare with me aight, but i'll still drop, more than likely on time.

Are you going to drop or what I'm waitin man. Lets go. I'm tryin to battle you and er thang, you aint scared are you, then drop.

ma fuckka i said 15 min... you gone drop or what.............................................. .................................................. .....................................

Niggih just drop, you first remember. Nah hurr up. DAmn mutha fucka and drop. before I decide to malign you

ayo, i said 15 min not this drop first shit....
it was in da rules... i ain't know herb that got to read someone elses shit to get insperation... anyway her it is.......


ayo, this cat Mel must be fakin his skill,
catch a seisuer cause this nigga will leave you shakin fa real,
what da deal wit these herbs punk bitches now-a-days,
challingin psycopath killers tha merk'em with murderous ways,
woods displays ya brains, you get hung from da wit,
tha rhymes comes from ya body like waste, cause they bullshit,
ya punches hit like feathers blowin smooth in da breeze,
you thinkin ya own shit wack while you punchin ya keys,
this nigga right here come wit trajik delimas,
one thing i love ta do iz murk these begginaz,
you a mid-west crip, what you baingin in little rock,
you thinkin you kurdin ma fuckkaz, afta dis that shit'l stop,
As you readin this thinkin "how could he do it?",
"I knew I shouldn't have tested blak, oh fuck I blew it!",
fuck yo little rhymes, bitch you was a waste of time, and afta you drop ya shit I know I'm a be fine.....

one

now who's da bitch.. where is your drop....


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This bitch is so wack, I need somebody to smack em' for me/
Its like a fuckin rhaspody/
The dude is like a snack to me/
The only difference is you filled wit garbage/
You stank, when you spit make me wanna release my cartridge/
Dead inta ya cartiladge/
Dude you wack, and that is that/
You better off wearin fake jewelry or rockin a fitted hat//
What the fuck is you think, besides you think you can rap/
Bitch ass, come to the site, and battle, but he get clapped/
Fuckin wit me, that ass'll get mapped/
I'm a fuckin soldier nigga, I'll slit yo throat/
Holla back atcha boy, and mabe I'll get provoked/
Cause wack niggiz like make me laugh, and I start to choke/
But fuck that, You aint a emcee/
You better off gettin up outta here, and sayin ya ABC's/
You big ass baby, I'll rock yo ass ta sleep/
When eva you tryta creep/
I'll lyrically, put that ass 6 feet deep.

looks like he no showed u... not sure he could've won though. here's what he posted again me...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105363

damn. know what i said doens't make ne sense and makes me look retarded. oh well. i will, in fact, take back my last post.

ayo,

if you like this battle then [url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=104887vote[url] on this one too

bacl to what was actually said though (now that i've read it...), not that my vote counts for shit, but if it did i'd vote blak woods. his stuff flowed better, the punch lines were better, and had a better ryhming scheme. mel-man could've used better ounchlines, and more personal comments. the other way round though is hard, cos Mel-Man's name don't really mean nehting. which is kinda annoying. i'd have to say blak woods wins this though,

[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=104887]vote[url]


that's what it's supposed to look like... anyhow uppin (2)

Make sho yall read the damn lyrics first, and then post ya votes.
Get at me mayne. See who this here battle belogs to

u couldn't by ne chance vote on this post could u blak woods? seems like nobody wants to vote for dumbass newbie battles....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104887

heres how i see it

blak woods got this for sure

mel man came with shit and blak woods came hard and presented a hott verse

blak wins for better personals punches and flow

my vote-woods

hit these up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105343

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105342

i took the time to vote on this so please return the favor

upps......................

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yo vote on dis yall

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i unno this battle was whack.....weak lines from both.....blak's more complex.....better structure...more dissing.....little bit of wordplay.....little bit of punches.....Mel lacked most catagories......
vote - blak

punches i guees blak his were better none of mel mans were really good
opener blak mels was corny
closer tie neither wre really good
vote blak both need to elevate
both need to work on evening their lines especially mel
more personals for both
keep postin

Here's how I saw this one.

Flow=Blak, his flow was much better, it was an easier read and just flowed better over all. Mel, you need to work on your flow a bit, it was kind of messed up.

Punches=Blak, his punches hit harder and were more creative. Mel, you mostly did gangster rap stuff which doesn't really win battles, you have to be creative in a battle not just talk about killing the other guy.

Personals=Blak, his personals were better, I didn't see any real good personals from either, but Blak's were better over all. You should both work on personals some, just because good personals can win you a battle.

Vocab=Tie, you both had some okay vocab in there. You both could still elevate in this area but over all it was pretty good.

Over all=Blak, you had a pretty nice verse, you had good punches, personals, vocab, and flow, you can still get better in all of those areas but for the most part it was pretty good, I'd say you should work on your flow the most, it was a bit off.
Mel, You seemed to focus on gangster rap type of stuff, you need to work on throwing punches, and personals that will make people think it's funny, you know witty type of stuff, and you should work on your flow, it was kind of off, your vocab was probably your best area.

Vote=Blak

Hey, vote on my battles, I took time on your battle just return the favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625

flow -i`ll say that woods got the flow down more consistant
he had much better rhymescene,came original in a sense of mind
melman had lines rhyming like clapping and mapping which is half assed
punchesboth had ok punches but i felt that woods had his lil more directed
they were a little more creative and shit like that noah mean
melmans were a lil choppy but he had the right mind frame but didnt deliver
personals i`d say this catagorie was basicly tie but woods wordplay was better when mixing in wit personals
structure goes to woods,wasnt the best struc but had more filler than melman
vote/woods




hit up 1 of my battles woods in return the favor please,thanks man

Mel-man
you were easily out done no good punches bad flow.......ect
ya need to elevate dawg
blak woods well done i really liked your shit it was good as keep it up
sounded good
nice flow
good personals
vote goes to blak woods
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VOTE ON THIS ITS GETTING SLEPT ON
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113549

Blak Got this shit..
Homie came wit better disses..and what the isa Mutha Fucka that's Blaq Gun say DUDE..LoL..any way..
Vote Blak..
he had betta Disses and Vocab plus it was Funnier..the Other kid had to simple of a Verse...mel...your ryme scheme wasnt very stong...Blak had a Better flow to it when readin the shit..



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