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yo sup kobra....im not really a topical head but im willin to learn if bounce is willing to teach....if so much aprreciated

yo ima battle someone tonight (dunno hu lol) but if i vote on urs will yo rtf later ???
peace

Rofl....Ok , I Have alot of Personals, ur done ;)

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My mate at school is signed up on here. Never comes on. He's a great lyricist. I'l tell him to drop a verse.

ya man of course vote mine up rtf lata on-

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Originally Posted by shotty man

this niggas incomin he got his new-genz enemys runnin,
sprintin the hundred-ten niggas hurdlin bullets that im gunnin,
they try to call me selfish - but real niggaz know im kind,
im like a brain in a voicebox coz i dont hold back from speakin mind,
word to mouth and mouth back to word,
i take the lyrics you spit and sharpen them on my sword,
i leave you back where you started - coz your verse got floored,
and yet im still sprayin out with a smile on my face, lord!
fuck man i just dropped a whole verse and i didnt need a beat,
its like im ritin my lyrics life down a one way street....

yo that verse was tight rythmacalities and yo dnt worry bout it im sure 24/7 realises it wernt personal what you said in the liljay battle
well don nig

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what did he say n liljayys battle

kobra. if u like my topical battle in sig. then i'll help teach u

yo what is goin on everybody is fuckin leave tha crew whats goin on

wen you started rippin him wen actually he had a tight verse he called you a dic rider
but he sed he didnt mean it and it wernt personal
and yo i no you sed no more no weights but yo hand him over to me and ill get him about 5 wins and ill get him to a flyweight level in under a week ???
and if not blame me okay ?
peace

yo "g" that battles been closed but yo i got your bak in ur next batt man
peace

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Originally Posted by shotty man

wen you started rippin him wen actually he had a tight verse he called you a dic rider
but he sed he didnt mean it and it wernt personal
and yo i no you sed no more no weights but yo hand him over to me and ill get him about 5 wins and ill get him to a flyweight level in under a week ???
and if not blame me okay ?
peace

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iight if u get him bout 5winz and to a fly weight then ill let him n
but he cant get crew votez

i have more than 600 posts don't i get my rank advanced?

im aight in topics but bad in poetry so i need to learn that and im wilin to be in LLL and i tried to sign up but noone gets at me if im in or not i poted like 4 times already and nothin yet
so wadup crew just chillin and check out my new OM this shows alot of my topic creativity
and kali have u had a chance to work on that sigg or not let me know aight 1

all I voted rtf

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Originally Posted by LivingLegend

Damn Kali You Have A Way With Words Jus Waitin On Bounce To Get Back At Me Wit My Request For Elevation In Topicals And Poetry Ya Kno

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LMAO, THANX HOMIE....
But Ya Know I gotta Say It Homie Ya Feel Me...

Me Also I PM'd BOUNCE Personally For Elevatn In Topicals, I Know I can Drop Hott Ones, Just Waitin On Him To Respond To Me,
We All Need To Start Grindin,
Im Workn On All Different Shit, so hopeFully It Works Out........

And LivingLegend I Hope Then CleverKeys Is Workn For Ya Homie.

But Ill Be Back In A Minute Homies............. :thumbup:

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Originally Posted by YoungHusla

hit up Emcee Apocalypse as he heads the audio group....

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Too-SHAY!!!

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Originally Posted by True_Thug

yo kal. i agree with wat ya say. very true. good explanation. so lets get out there crew and merk sum ass and get known. good luck to u all.

and hey check this topical. leave sum serious feedback. i'm fucken serious this one battle... is really deep. i cant even explain it. u'll neva forget it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=187879

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word homies, lets grind, come on....WE NEED TO BE RECOGNIZED.....
be versatile in everything you do

if your not a poet head--------FUCK IT TRY IT
if your not a cypher hed-------fuck it try it

if you know what i MEAN, GO DO THA DAMN THING :thumbup:

MuRk-A-wHoRe-Or-AnD-a-ThOuSaNd-MoRe

Wat up

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Originally Posted by KALIKOZE911

this thread is not goin to be made any where else.........

our priorities right now are to go out, and murk every one we could,

do everything, from topicals, to open mics, poetry.....
anything that has to do w/ RB, and rhyming......

we are not goin to get noticed b/c we have a high crew thread post/ reply...
YEA IT DOES HELP W/ ACTIVITY, BUT THEY WANNA SEE, ILL SHIT, NEW STYLES, SO WE GOTTA GIVE IT TO'EM

we need to stop postn in here

WE NEED TO do the requirements it takes to get a forum...... much less the respect we need,,,,,,,,

EVERYONE NEEDS TO START POSTN BETTER FEEDBACK ON EVERYTHING....

IVE BEEN CHECKN IRS AND WHAT NOT, AND THERE ARE A FEW PEOPLE IN THIS CREW THAT IS ABOUT TO GET BANNED FROM RB, B/C OF EITHER BEING RETARDED, NOT GOOD FEEDBACK, JUST BULLSHIT TO GET NOTICED BY A MOD/ADMIN IN THE WRONG WAY......
ONCE THAT HAPPENS, YOU AINT IN THE CREW ANYMORE.....
JUST WATCH YOUR BACKS, IM NOT SAYN ANYONE DIRECTLY. YALL KNOW WHO YALL ARE, JUST DO THE DAMN THING HOW ITS TO BE DONE,

AND WE WILL MOVE ALONG FAST, AND GET NOTICED W/ ThE RESPECT WE DESERVE.....

ALOT OF YALL NOT UNDERSTANDING, THAT ALOTTA THESE ADMINS AND MODS AND OTHERS THAT ARE POINTING US OUT AND CALLING US GARBAGE, NOT BECAUSE WE ARE, BECAUSE THEY SEE WE HAVE A REAL GOOD THING GOIN AND SOME WANNA BREAK THAT............
SO LET EVERYONE SAY WHAT THEY WANT,
BUT ONCE WE START DOMINATING HOMIES, ITS A WRAP, AND THEY KNOW IT....
ME I DONT HATE ON NO MODS/ ADMINS OR W/E, I KNOW SHIT BE GETTIN YA TIGHT....
BUT THATS WHAT WE HERE FOR..... TO RETALIATE W/ WORDS OF WISDOM/ THROUGH OUR MINDS SPITTN SICC ANIMOSTY.............
ITS NOT TO BREAK YALL EGO OR PERCEPTION OF YA STYLE OR YA CREW, OR HOW HARD SHIT IS,
THE SHIT TALK IS TO ONLY MAKE YOU COME WITH SOMETHING BETTER, MAKE YOU GRIND ON YA SHIT.....
I HONESTLY DONT AGREE W/ HALF THE SHITS THAT BEEN GOIN ON BUT, I CANT CHANGE THE WAY IT WORKS, JUST ROLL W/ IT UNTIL ITS OUR TURN TO REIGN, AND DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT.................

BUT JUST KEEP THIS IN MIND....................

WE WILL ONLY GET NOTICED BY HOW MUCH WE PUT OURSELVES OUT THERE, AND NOT SO MUCH IN A NEGATIVE WAY.......

ELITE DOESNT HAPPEN OVERNIGHT. BUT MURKN DUDES TO GET TO THAT POINT ONLY TAKES MINUTES.....
SO HOLLA BACK @ ME ON YALL FEED AGAINST THIS....... I DONT SAY ANYTHING TO GET NOONE MAD, I JUST STATE WHAT I SEE, AND SAY IT HOW I FEEL................

HOLLA BACK 1

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Originally Posted by shotty man

yo man theres some tight rappers in this crew man
yo y have my crew got beef with your ..i aint got no beef with any of you yet the rest of em do ?????
peace niggaz

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AY HOMIE: ON SOME REAL SHIT,

I AInt Got No Beef With You Or Any Of Your Crew...

But Right Now, Its Not A Site Where We Are Friends And Chit-Chat...

We Wanna Rhyme, And Take A Forum, Or W/e, Battle Whomever...
And Its Just That Your A Crew, And SomeWhere Along The Line Your Crew Has Been <~(TaRgEtEd)~>, We Want To Gain Respect On RB, And WhoEver We Gotta Go After To Get It, So Be It, So Its Nothin Personal Homie,
Its Just The Way The Rap World WorkZ... So Youll Hear More From Us Soon Homie... Get- Ya Shit Ready, Cuz We Comn.....pz Homie :thumbup: 1

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Originally Posted by ANGEL DUST

who wantz to battle

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bye-fag

apotheosis waz crackin homies u guys are gettin betta its shows keep it up wlel just sayin HI

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Originally Posted by shotty man

yo ima tell the done deal members not to hate on yall no more cus i talked to loads of ur members and there cool
peace

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THASSWUSSUP HOMIE..

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Originally Posted by LivingLegend

Shotty Man stay wit ya crew and elevate'em ya crew needs a Leader and somebody to follow'em cuz if we take people from ya crew..........look here's an example iight somebody tells you to come join us iight then you leave ya crew and join our crew iight now when somebody tells you to leave us and join them that shows disloyalty dont you think Make ya crew prosper and ya'll do find and the reason i was beefin wit ya crew was cuz Pusha C kept talkin shit and then bitchin out so i mad ya crew a Target

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VERY AgreeablE....... :thumbup:

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Originally Posted by lyrically_insane

Word.

dope rec Shotty Man...and Listen to LivingLegend...he has "old man wisdom"

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word homie, thass koo

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Originally Posted by Bounce

In response to Living legend''s request:

Start off by dropping a 16 bar topical on this topic:

twinkie masacare

Do not post it until I proof it, I am sure we will have areas to touch on...

Be as descriptive as possible, use something other than a conventioanl aa ab rhyme scheme. I suggest a solid use of metaphor, since this is a short drop. The shorter the drop, the more impact every thing has to have. You goal is to pack volumes into each line, not syllable wise, but metaphoricaaly. try to keep your meter consistant, and include sporadic splashes of assonance by strategic use of alliteration. If these terms are foreign to you, spend some time researching them a bit. Try to approach the concept with the most creative angle you can come with. In a tournament this component is critical, if you want to a force on the topical scene on RB or the net in general, you have to work on this. Pay close attention to your word choice, diction is fundmental in a proper peice of prose, keep your writters voice strong by matering these components. Complexity comes with time and practice, a complex rhyme scheme is not the easiest thing to pull off, but once you a at the level, it only adds to your aresenal. This is an art, treat it like one and you can never go wrong... Get at me if you need direction or help on this excercise...

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I Am Definitely Goin To Work On This Bounce.................

If i DO Have Any Issues Ill Holla @ You On The SUbjuect But Thanks So Far, In Your Approach Towards Helping Us Out In Becoming More On RB.... :thumbup:

yea man thats kewl ..............................

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Originally Posted by shotty man

oh yea btw what did yall think of that lil 2 min freestlye i spit ?
peace homies

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that shit wa nice homie........... liked it alot

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Originally Posted by Kobra

Aaight crew what up?

Thanks for the encouragement Bounce it's well appriciated. Could you help me with my topical and poetry?

I got a poetry published in a book once when I was 13 but it's shit. If you can that would be well appriciated. I also want to elavate in text cuz I wanna join the LLL 'n' I think that some other heads should in this crew. Rep it to the fullest. Show how elite we can be. I aint stopping till I become a Legend n people remember me!

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yea homie, im wit'cha.............. :thumbup:

kali vote on my battle wit krit he finally spit!!!!!!! be honest!!!

Nuthin much Pocket.....Can you go drop a vote on me vs. Proffess i killed him, ill RTF as well

no swayin u can't say u merked me ur punches sucked cept like one ur personal attempts were gay and weak!!!

Word...

...they may have deleted our thread, but I made a new one, and whored a few people while at it.

lol lemme in kingly

hit this kali me and joka in the same crew hit this man!!!!! I need one vote but be honesT!!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184864

You have got to be kidding right...

...you try out for every crew there is, and they all tell you no, numerous amounts of times before you realize your wack...thats why you are in blade oracles.

no I was jokin man and I ain't whack I just don't try i ain't a rapper I am a football player so whatever!!!

No you are very wack. and you suck at football too. stop positng in here, youre making us look bad.

u wish I sucked at football I made CIF first team all league my sophmore year and Imma play at USC next year after I fraduate so fuck off.