"Never Let You Down"

appreciate it nick.

This was some good shit man..i was feeling it all the way through....complexity and vocab was nice and flow was excellent throughout...topic was intersting..i liked it....very enjoyable to read..rhymes were good...nice multies....and overall this was very good..good job..keep it up..peace~

that was nice piece allah, great flow and the inners were basically topnotch, good take on your topic and the overall structure of the shit was pretty dope - overall dope shit, ending was tight as well... hit up the first in my sig

that was a pretty good drop... the topic was good, vocab and flow was nice... coulda used a lil work on the structure... multis and rhymes were on point and you explained the story pretty well... although u did put alot of work into this as i can see i did notice u were lacking some imagry and emotion so try to work on that...

-sorry for short feed im in a hurry-

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Originally Posted by *~Big Nash~*

intense. shit was well thought up, and VERY well executed at that. surprised that it's getting slept on frankly. it's not the best i've seen but deffinatly above average. dunno if you actually put thought and time into this, or just typed and thought on the spot. but it was good either way. these are the kind of pieces i enjoy reading. your internals/multies are great. storyline was killer..
Hit the "In Memory" OM from me ..it'll prolly be in my sig by the time you read this. peace, thanks for the read.

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...36#post4405136

cry or whoever else dropped links, I'll get at them when I wake up. going to sleep now. good looks though.

good flow and good structure

goodlooks philly, thats young philly ?

I hit the links up.

what up guys, more feed?

shit this was dope as fuck rhyming couldn't be better concept and topic i loved sad, intense, emotional, deep you really packed a lot in here flow was consistent very very good so was the word play i saw some good vocab in here liked the words you choose in my eyes you kept gettin stronger in this as the verse went on towards the end it came out great stay up lookin foward to hearin more from you

thats whats up. thanks man. by the way you blood? lol.. I love asking that, dont know why. hahaa.

good looks though pyro

^ Lol at you asking if he was blood. Dont encourage these newer kids, Allah!

This was pretty cool, I preffered your 'We Need To Take Control' or whatever piece more, but this wasnt bad. I think the fact Ive read it at six other sites now maybe slightly dampened the impact for me, but hey - Thats what you get for boarding at so many other sites! Lol. Stick around, and keep dropping here ..


- B.M

good looks baron.

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Originally Posted by Pakaveli

This was quite good and yeh this had a frustrated/intense feel/look to it. The first four lines made me think about the movie spiderman lol....don't ask me why, just did....however reading the rest quickly changed the feel....from cheap to sadistic...very well done there, more audish stuff here i reckon. Ending was good...overall a good piece but i believe it can be better, can't compare to your previous works as i haven't read em

Check this out, "The Hidden Diaries: Sinful Greeds", comments will be preciated

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Well heres a link as neithr i can find my old one
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=290637

^Im'a get at that in a few.