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Dictionary - First off, remove the quotes, they're so newbish. Anyway, I felt that your flow was off at some points. It was okay in some, but the thirsty line didn't go with anything and some things were just very stretched and hard to follow. I felt the way you went about the topic was complex at times, but really had nothing interesting about it and was kind of basic. Work on making your writing more entertaining by using more emotion.
Midise - I don't feel you developed the topic as well as you could have, but you were more descriptive in your verse than Dictionary was. I felt your flow and vocabulary for the most part was good, though there were a few lines I felt seemed a bit forced. The line about his neglect keeping evil stay true was probably my favorite. Not a great piece, but a decent one and good enough.
Vote - Midise
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As i set the topic i reckon i should set up te first vote.....both verses were aight, though i reckon midise was technically more sound, his presentation was good however the structure was average.
Dictionary was aight, his style was good but i don't think he did the topic full justice. The structure once again average.
I \/ Midise, only due to the fact that i found his verse more enjoyable to read and he did if not full then better justice to the topic than Dictionary.
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^^ are u seriously that fuckin' dumb?
u copyied a vote, that had quoted "as i set the topic" and there was only 1 person who did. 'n it wasnt u.. dumbfuck, i should get u banned, just cuz ur trying to get a "rtf" vote. fuck off, noob.
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This was a well matched battle.
Dic : you had a nice idea, but I think you could've pulled it off better.You also had good concepts, but like the above statement, they weren't pulled off well. You did have decent Imagery, and your rhyme scheme and your flow was actaully pretty good...Im not really digging the " " after a lot of words...that's just my opinon though
6/10
Midise:
I like how you kept it short and sweet...You had a great choice of vocabulary, and your imagery was pretty nice...The rhyme scheme was pretty good, and it flowed nicely...Like the other dude, you had a nice concept, it just seemed as if you had trouble putting it together...overall, this was a pretty nice drop.
7.5/10
v// midise. no hate. nice battle...
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Midise was better point blank & simple, he had better everything wording, flow, vocab everything
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midise poetry was deep so in my opinion he got this one.....good battle on both sides............................................. ..............1
v/midise
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midise just seemed like he's been doin this much longer than dictionary. his wording, imagery, use of literary devices, vocabulary, structure, everything was just much better. dictionary didnt seem to have as much creativity as midise as the approach he took on the topic was very bland. i dunno exactly how to explain it nor do i feel like it but yea...
v/ midise
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I \/ Midise, only due to the fact that i found his verse more enjoyable to read and he did if not full then better justice to the topic than Dictionary.
