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10 lines
house rules
due 30 minutes after check...
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500 to vote
lol @ you not wanting to post on your real name... check
i put my real name in the poll... i just didn't have enough credits to make the battle... check...
oh word... sometimes people battle me under their alias cuz they know they're going to lose and don't want to ruin their record so i thought you were doin' that...good luck
I got this bitch scared, your afraid of me I swear
Your all bent out of shape...
... but you still look like a square
I checked ya avy this hour, seems ya feelin' empowered
But that same rubber duck is how ya get entertained in the shower
I've peeped ya verses, I'm nice so I'll leave ya some feed
That all filler aside...
... there's NOTHING left to read
This clown is no ace, for LLL ya made a case
Ya verses look stable, they got shit ALL OVER the place!
I'm dope n' my wordplay has been known to eat dudes
I got an ILLTECHNIQUE...
... he's just a faggot newbie that beat you
ok dude... this is hot music... my punches stay tuned..
so i proceed to use mild violens(violence) when i play you..
fake fool... i'd whore this clown but i think he'd like it..
and he knows he's gonna lose... so now he thinks he's phsycic..
you bite shit like a fly... then go around talkin it..
so quit buggin me... before i fuckin' off you kid..
don't wanna end this quick... but it depends on the clips mood..
sure your from maryland... but you aint pac-n-shit dude..
broke bitch... you write ya rhymes on food stamps son..
just twist his name up... you will see what trutrashduz..
tupac is from maryland... don't vote if your stupid...
ok dude... this is hot music... my punches stay tuned..
so i proceed to use mild violens(violence) when i play you..
fake fool... i'd whore this clown but i think he'd like it..
and he knows he's gonna lose... so now he thinks he's phsycic
vs
nothin
not enough to post.. but here:
I got this bitch scared, your afraid of me I swear
Your all bent out of shape...
... but you still look like a square
played.
I checked ya avy this hour, seems ya feelin' empowered
But that same rubber duck is how ya get entertained in the shower
corny.
I've peeped ya verses, I'm nice so I'll leave ya some feed
That all filler aside...
... there's NOTHING left to read
ouch.
This clown is no ace, for LLL ya made a case
Ya verses look stable, they got shit ALL OVER the place!
LOL.
I'm dope n' my wordplay has been known to eat dudes
I got an ILLTECHNIQUE...
... he's just a faggot newbie that beat you
wordup.
some played lines, for the most part.. dope verse for FL.. haha.
vs.
ok dude... this is hot music... my punches stay tuned..
so i proceed to use mild violens(violence) when i play you..
if u have to put it in paranthesis, its forced.
fake fool... i'd whore this clown but i think he'd like it..
and he knows he's gonna lose... so now he thinks he's phsycic..
uh, no.
you bite shit like a fly... then go around talkin it..
so quit buggin me... before i fuckin' off you kid..
nope.
don't wanna end this quick... but it depends on the clips mood..
sure your from maryland... but you aint pac-n-shit dude..
well, if u pronounce it like, TuPAC it makes no sence. If u pronounce it like PACK.. it still makes no sence.
broke bitch... you write ya rhymes on food stamps son..
just twist his name up... you will see what trutrashduz..
wtf?
ur setups are horrible, make no sence. ur wordplay doesnt go together either.
v/ - DTH, easy.
wow, nice battke nice battle, vote DTH, sorry clisk, you've elevated alot, but i v- DTH just for being more settled into punches and creativity.
I've peeped ya verses, I'm nice so I'll leave ya some feed
That all filler aside...
... there's NOTHING left to read
This clown is no ace, for LLL ya made a case
Ya verses look stable, they got shit ALL OVER the place!
I'm dope n' my wordplay has been known to eat dudes
I got an ILLTECHNIQUE...
... he's just a faggot newbie that beat you
vs
don't wanna end this quick... but it depends on the clips mood..
sure your from maryland... but you aint pac-n-shit dude..
Vote: DTH
<<The real Renegade
...lol@ midise... i specificly said... if your stupid... don't vote... from now on if you don't have enough posts to vote then don't comment... period
Clisk- ya verse was aight...ya had excellent flow and structure....
rhymes were pretty nice..punches and personals could have been much better but i think they were just descent here..overall ya verse was aight
DTH- ya strucutre was off...flow was aight...rhymes were good..and your punches and personals were pretty nice overall.....overall ya verse was good enough to get my vote..
v/dth for a better verse by a hair....clisk just elevate on ya punches a little bit...
Clisk, Midise is in LLL... aka, the only person to vote on this so far with real skills. Just thought I'd point that out, lol
Uppin #2 - and to answer you below, clearly Midise understood your lines, he just thought they were either forced or garbage
Last edited by DaTrusHurtz; May 8th, 2006 at 08:14 PM
hmm... lemme get this strait... the people who arent in LLL got my punches and the metaphors... midise didn't... that makes him the smart one? ... interesting...
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