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Bounce this song was dopeness on another level. i heard u were dope but then i read yo shit and it made dope seem like a newb work. u are past dopeness. u the absolute king right now as far as im concerned. your imagery was incredible. i was feelin every single part of this song Bounce. damn bruh ima study yo work so that i can get half as good as u.
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Originally Posted by J-Crimez
No, I'm far from being that good. Thanks for the compliments though, they are appreciated. This is nto the verse to judge my skil on though, this was just a rushed verse with no real direction. Look me up in OM HoF or legendz or follow my WOP tournie or SS league drops for a better display.
If you need any help or tips on your writing I'm always willing to help those that tkae this art and the site serious. This verse has not been recorded yet, but I'm hoping to record this thing before summer hits full swing.
ok im always willing for sum advice. if u want a display of mah skills check out mh OM called A letter from a soldier. the link is in mah sig
thanks
When I Saw The Title Of This Drop I Thought Oh No, Not Again, But When You Said It Werent Ya Average Weed Drop U Sure As Hell Werent Shitting, This Peice Was Ill, From The First Line To The Last Line, Grade A Lyrics Thoughout, Which Made Sure You Didnt Get Bored Reading It, I Thought The Vocab Was Dope, No Pun Intended, But Seriously, The Image You Kept Thruout Was Also Grade A+..hellish Peice....8-10
Thanks, but dude, we are going tohave to change your name man, there is only one emerge on this site and you do not seem to be him. So, expect a name change in the very near future...
I didn't really like it... I just kind of found it boring even though it held alot of detail and such. I mean, when you titled it "Not Another Weed Song" and start with
"The hand blown glass craftsmanship glistened under
...the midnight back drop"
I really got excited about reading the piece because it seemed like it may just be a super tripped out phycadelic experience, and had it been written in the detail you were already using that would have just blown my mind. Even the anticipation of that got my hyped to keep on reading with this. But in the end it almost altered the image that I have of you in my head. Usually I get this super studious, intellectual image in my mind when I read your pieces, and this just put you on the level of an everyday budhead and that kind sucked for me. The detail made that happen even more because it's not like you left out any detail of a typical stoner so its left with no room for interpretation. I dont know, this just really wasnt my kind of piece. I definately respect it for what its worth though. The flow was very nice and it read through brilliantly.... Also the detial was immaculant. Like I said it was just a personal thing that came off as kind "meh" for me. *Shrug*
^ Dude you have the wrong idea about me, if you knew me you would trip. I'm as street hardened as they come. I'm not the super intellectual studious all around good kid. I am as gangster as it gets off the net, sure I grew up and left that all behind, but people can't help but cross the street if they see me walking down the sidewalk
I am a product of the ghetto and I am the first person in my family to ever finish high school let alone have any college education. My degrees came after a long time being a true fuck up, and I mean fuck up. I didn' turn my life around until I buried dozens of my friends and was feed up with the path my ife was on. When I found out I was going tobe a father, I turned everything around and was very lfortunate to have been blessed with the opprotunity to do so.
So I understand your disappointment if you thought of me as that type you described. I am far from that, dude I'm sorry to disappoint, but I'm not anythign like you imagined. I have to put on a facade every day in my career, but I have learned to be a chamelion like that just to survive in the busness world. ThaT SI THE REASON i'M SO LOW PRO ON HERE AND EVEN WITH MY BAND, i HAVE TO REMAIN ANNONAMOUS TO KEEP MY PAST FROM CATHING UP WITH MY PRESENT.
peep my bio on my bands website, our lead singer wrote it, but he nails it well. I can;t even have picutre of myself on there in case someone sees them. It just doesn't go in my line of work.
I don't promote or glorify my past, but it is who am...
www.porquesimusic.com
Speechless lol...you can make ne subject regardless of the topic complex beyond the average mind. This piece was however very different from your piece, you could sense the humour in ur lines..which made it refreshing from your (however great)..very informational n serious ya feel...so when i read the title i thought this was gonna be some gov't play ont he title..yet it rlly was not ur average weed song..and it had me laughin all the way through...i mean some of the wordplay n such..was just crazy, it was like a fairytale book for the middle aged weed smoker..lol it was a fun piece, and i dont agree with the people who said u may have fell off in this piece..i think it was great because it wasnt ur average style...i mean you proved you can take a style and completely kill it with complex writing skills...with humour! It was funny dude....and u proved that u can ruin sick styles lol
Please if you could hit up one or both of my LINKS in my sig.
thank you
Ya, I don't know... Aside from the image thing though, the aproach itself just wasn't the technical and super creative direction you usaually take which just kind of bummed me out. But, now knowing what you said, maybe this is just kind of throw back to your past with your current day self (structure) worked in. *Shrug* Like I said, I can definately respect it for achieving all the elements of a good Om flawlessly, it just wasnt what I was looking for.
I feel you man, thanks for taking the time to read though...
up..
This is tite as hell. I like the flow and they way it isnt all overdramatic like everything is nowdays. The detail was really deep. Good shit. 8.5/10
can u leave feed on this? I wanna see wuta OG thinks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=286537
thanks all
Be cool if you could return the favor: L.A. Reed Bought my Soul
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287417
Thanks man.