haha.. your feed wasnt too long tho..
never mind
upz
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haha.. your feed wasnt too long tho..
never mind
upz
yo that was just the greates topic ever. most people ask thereself that an don't really know how to talk to all the different types of people but you nailed it right on the money. this has great vocab an flow. it was a long read but it was worth it. peace out
thanx blud
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1 up 4 da day
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I like the flow and the structure of it. The vocab was pretty good but....
I am sick of reading about life and death, soldier and hustler and bringing kids into this earth to be slain to guns *takes deep breath*
This compared to your other topic I just gave feedback for isn't half as good.
Write about somethin worth writing about (and be ORIGINAL) with your flow and your vocab and the world (well rap battles :P ) is your oyster.
caant please all the people all the time.. i was just asking
upz
uppin ova da bull
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Amazin... good topic & really deep piece...
Vocab was great...
I was really feelin the beginnin & the endin...
Dont really know what else to say... was just a great OM...
It would be much appreciated if you could drop a quick vote in this battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=268331
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