My Only Hunger...

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Originally Posted by Born To Kill

Man...

Why's this been here for two days...

And you ain't let me know ya dropped some shit YOU KNOW I'd like?

I'm feeling all net-betrayed and shit...

Anyway...

Great piece...alotta these cats are trying to judge and critique, but I don't feel the need to.
This hits, at least THIS cat, on a whole other level...

I don't even notice the rhyme scheme so much, or the vocab...

When this topic (my topic) is done this well...

I just thoroughly enjoy the journey into a sick puppy's mind.

Nice shit.

Real nice.

Except now I'm all wanting to rape and kill a bitch. Someone close by.
Someone secretarial.

Nice work, man.

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Well, as was the case last time (Canvas of a madman), I was thinking about YOU while I devised this in my head. I didn't really see this as an epic drop so I didn't want to alert the circle of gore. It's more of an opening into a series of sickness I'm going to post here in the near future. I have been offered a spot on a rather dark mixtape project, so I'm getting my juices flowing so to speak.

Hey now about the sexatarial indulgence, just don't do anything I wouldn't do. Glad you liked it man, and yeah most of the kids in here are looking for your typical text schemes as far as flow goes. This is intended fofr audio so it's written for my delivery type. which you should be familar with now. Trust me it sounds dark as hell when is spit it. I figure I'll go into greater detail and build up of the charecters in the verses to follow. Something dark, yet seductive at the same time with a sublte hint of my complexity splahed about.

Again, thanks man, I knew you would find this sooner or later...

up...

up2

this was preety good ..........had good imagary straight structure and it seemed like you tryed to put emotion in it and it wasn't too long or too short so I give this pieace a 7.8/10 keep writing
can you l=plz leave feed on my OM

thanks for the replies guys.

nice words here dawg

i liked the whole criminal concept.....
flow, rhymes were kinda simple, and it lacked some multies....
but overral...this was an eye-catcher dawg...KEEP IT COMMING

this was nice i like the concept flow
ur rhymes were simple
no or few multies
its ight man

this was a cool drop man it was a really gd drop and ad a good poinys. keep workin on producing more dope shit

I like this piece. Excellent vocab, near perfect flow, maybe could use some better multies. But definately an "A" piece. *holds up a 9/10* Keep up the good work homie...You might wanna consider puttin' this on audio...Just a suggestion...STAY UPPIN'

Nice drop, it kept me readin and that good....
Overall good flow keep elevatein and ima do tha same.....

7.7/10

Thanks all, and yes, this is an audio. Everything I write is to be recorded at some point...

great peice
imaginary was great
now i wanna do a piece wit imaginary and shit
well the vocab was good in this shit
i like how it wasnt like some of the OM's slow starts
and then you loose interest, this was nice i actually wanted to keep reading more
coulda used more multis and shit but it was still a hot peice
overall=B


Please Leave Feed On This
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=260324

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Originally Posted by Bounce

you have to look in legendz, the archived tounaments like WOP2 and even the old Sacrid scriptures a few seasons ago. I can link you if you ask here.

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That season of SS = best season in SS history.

But yes, like everyone else says, this peice was amazingly great. You're wording was flawless, really indepth lines. You had superb vocab like always, you had me reading some lines over just to make sure I grasped the full concept, thats how complex you really dropped. This was another pure drop like always, and I loved it.. like always. Thanks for the great read.

pretty kewl yo... a bit incomplete or undeveloped as a complete joint.. could of maybe been extended.. or been a collab with somebody else who's good.. nice layout and imagery still, vocab was nicee..funny a lot of people must be thinking dark inner thoughts.. i have something of similar tones in construction.. and ive seen others recently.. with all that dark amagery going on...had plenty of explicities to mae it a cold reading...

nice

I don't wanna add injury
to insult
but you carry with rhymes like that
u a fade like ur skin tone