^ thx for tha feed, up'
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^ thx for tha feed, up'
the rhymes were well writtin and good at the same time.......the topic was gay......."DEAR SANTA"....this was a lil' childish and really not my style of rap...well anywayz it was iight ..just work on ya topic choosing.....just keep improving
^ Just dosn't understand..
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flow was meh.. rhyme scheme was iight... you put pauses in unessesary places though..so work on that
Or ignored, Santa… do you hate the world?
Is it respect that you lack? Do you favor the girls?
And I ask myself… how can I expose you?
To the people, who hopin’ this year that you’ll pull through
^^my favorite lines there
i wasn't with the metaphor between santa & a bad dude too much..but nice drop
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=214331
^thx for the good words, up.
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