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Pretty dope piece. The concept is original and many can relate to it. The rhymescheme made it flow perfectly and the metaphors and poetry of it was dope. I liked the imagery, it was very well put and the ending was hot.. "much, much later" as in probably having to repeat the grade or something. This piece is very nice and i think i will nominate it.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=204382
^feed-back please. it's called "Periodic Table"
hmm yall together really did good nice stucture good flow but the thing that caught me was the emotional statements and the complexity with the vocabulary. the imageyr was also very good. this piece was very good i was feeling it as an all around good piece keep dropping like this jek. rtf my links are in the sig.
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Jamie is rusty y0! SUP NIGGA?!
any way, this was a nice read first stanza was Jek right?
i liked it, both styles complimented eich other, vocab/concept & sheme were nice to read, and easy to catch.. nice one gents.
it was alrite, cant believe im sayin this (cuz i dont like the cunt) but bruklors verse was actually pretty good, imagery was there boutr u being a hopless alchy. jekyll ure verse wunt bad but there was sumthin bout it i wasnt feelin,maybe the structure found it hard to get into it if u kno wat i mean.
this was ill....very creative....i liked tha imagery used by both artists...jekylls rhyme scheme was off...but it had a poetic kinda feel to it,i loved tha vocab utilized by both...jekylls wordplay and complexity were astounding......this piece was very dope....propz to both jekyll and bruklor....keep droppin tha hottness.~1~
Ed I'll hit up that link in the morning bro.
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Really diggen this... I have never seen this topic before, and you both did an excellent job describing the situations. Not many flaws in the flow... just Bruk's verse ended weakly..the humor at the end just dident seal it off..and to both of you, maybe you could have brought some of the questions of the test into this OM, maybe relate them to yur own life nay mean?..but great job..
Keep Elevatin'
rtf for my OM, please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=204708
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thanks for hitting it up jek :^ )
this piece is good it has nice structure and colorful vocab.
this piece is great work keep it up
its very impressive
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