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Go reply back to mine you focker - :^)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182988

Focker? How dare you?!?!

Was a good piece man, I replied.

if people would start reading work for what it is first and stop trying to pick it apart before they start reading things would probably be a lot better...i couldn't see anything wrong (or at least majorly) with the structure...the peice worked well and flowed...i liked and agreed with a lot of what you said in it and think you got the point across eloquently...my favorite line from the whole peice was this...No-one will accept the fact that babies shouldn't have babies, no 14 year old is a lady ...to me it is a true representation of the way society is in this day and age...not that i'm tryin to sound old or anything but i like the way it reads and works...which is closely followed by this next line...Every corner we turn is a sin in itself, ordering people to seek help isn't gonna help them help themselves ...well done and keep up the hard work...tweak around with your pieces until they feel right to you... :thumbup: keep elevatin!!!

Thanks a lot Eva :thumbup: