ayo pope you used ass and muthafucka too much forone, you had no structure shit was hard as hell to read crucial took you but yall keep droppin
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ayo pope you used ass and muthafucka too much forone, you had no structure shit was hard as hell to read crucial took you but yall keep droppin
Pope
-muthafucka this muthafucka that how about i bring a whole clip to ur back this aint no movie i'll jappslap yo ass criscros ya ass leave ur ass at the half court line like u aint no wat happin tan colored porshe yeah it kinda look like apple saushe
-dont really get this, no structure, no real punches
back to me firein on yo ass have ur shirt lookin like wet tomatoes block lookin like atfer tornados/ crucial this aint a game maintain ur frame ima keep my kool wen i bring dem shots to ur brain after this freestyle the game dun changed just like yo momma how she was givin me that change have yo ass eattin out a dumpster ur a nasty muthafuka wannabe gangsta u need to stop fruntin if u wanna roll wit us gangstas u betta b stuntin/sortin grams packin pakastanians wit glocks in both hands/send the task after yo ass im kinda like osama i blow things up just for the drama
structure is still messed up i cant even divide it properly and strucurally grade it. u have punches in this bit but theyre not worded properly and not that hard. the only thing i can really say is that u have a continuous flow
Crucial
Ill leave the Pope’s body more holy then the bible,
heavy start line. strait in wit tha punches
Beat me you got a better chance joinin the American idol,
not bad
We both new to this but we all know that you still cant spit,
Even if I stuck my hand up yo’ ass I wouldn’t feel yo shit,
this is aiight
The pope will get rocked like new shoes with different color laces,
My punches are the only reason you went to the dentist to get braces,
both lines were sic
You could be Mr. Wilson and I could be Denis the menace,
All your rhymes are brocken like records, change ya name to guenis,
I took the lead in this battle and even the pope is takin my orders,
I told him rap needed a change and this fag braught quarters,
nang ending, the quarters bit cracked me up
ya structure was good, flow was tite and u had sum good punches
vote- Crucial
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crucial was better, pope had no structure, i tried to divide it up but even divided it still has no structure, his flow was off, and he had barely a punch...
V/Crucial