up#2.............................................. .lets get some votes in here
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up#2.............................................. .lets get some votes in here
damnt up#3.........................................
lol chewy tore both you. this was tight, TNL w/ slaughter SF in a crew battle.
Chewy did Slaughter.. and Since this shit is So long, You won't get a Big Breakdown from me, Yo. But Chewy Came better with everything, Punches.. Wordplay, And Flow. Makaveli had a Lot of Attempts, But not a lot of punches.. that connected. The other guy, Sylentz, Wasn't feeling anything, was just mainly Whack shit that You hear everyday and is called Played.
I suggest that Makaveli, you work on your punches and Wordplay a little more, Sylentz, work on everything.. no offence, It's just that it's needed.
Chew.. good verse..
V/ Chew
Ok:
It's is very obvious Chewy got this one,,,if
you read his lines , it has flow structure
and most important punches. Nice word
usage as well. some nice set ups in the
beginning,.....Sylentz here is some advice
you see the structure Chewy used? you
should follow that method. Your end was
better then your beginning. You need to
be more consistant , and the strong PUNCH
plus personals witie , funny lines , help...
V/Chewb for harder mor consistant punches..
I forget to put Mak verse
in here and I forget to poll
.....
Now that I have READ Mak's verse
one thing Mak stay away from Deep
throat and Fag lines...some heads
like myself hate to read those type
of lines it's just nasty...Your concepts
and punches aren't complex enough.
Your beginning showed some signs
of a stable decent ok drop but after
that you fell off. Stay elevating you
will get there....
My vote still goes to Chewy...
yep, half-ass verse by me, upppppin
Hit this up..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1988549
V/ Complete Slaughter.
Its pretty obvious who won this battle.
Makeveli and Sylentz had these lines.
Beware that tha mind's unstable, comin at me? u must b insane
Kids' lame, they couldnt take Control of a fukin Video Game
Feedin off these dude's rhymes? fuk no, i'd need a tube of tooth paste
Guess u heard i Eat emcees whole..but shyt, im allergic 2 Fruit Cakes
Those were your best lines, between both of you, and even those sucked. Step it up and get better. Read mor ebattles and get better concepts thats not played.
Chewy had a good verse. These lines were good.
Start receding, your loss cant be avoided so stop all the talking ho
Cause sylentz is bliss…..so were glad this herb doesn’t do audio
This is done and Maks been lyrically regressing since his re-naming
Cause he was Micnificent…......now he jus admits hes in Training
Neither of u fags will ever be famous, don’t mean to kill ur plans
But needin relief from hot weathers’ the only way ur sealing fans
You both suck man, and heres a curve, that’ll make this game tough
Ill pitch u this loss……….In hopes that ur styles will change-up
These made me laugh. The verse, both of them, were pretty decent. Good job doing this alone. You have alot of potential. Keep it going.
V/Chewbakka.
Link up top.
sylentz and mak came off okay they attempted at throwin punches which were alright,their verses was okay not crappy just not even hard hitters
chew came with the damn heat by his damn self his verse crushed both verses line after line punch after punch that line about mak bein in training hot...chew had this in the first couple of bars more consistent structure nice...yay
v-chew
Wow..Chewy murdered
Makaveli...your shit was mad played..lotsa filler and stratements...
Lines were a bit long.....work on your concepts and your delivery...
Word choice makes all the difference..try to add some wit too
Chewy...you win this cause your punches were harder and much
more consistent...an overall decent verse...its hard to stay consistent
in a long verse like yours, but you did a pretty good job of it
Vote=Chewy
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