Lyric versus versatility

[Laureate]

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[versatility]

MEh...In LIke Jin....Qiik Keystyle

Ahem...
most people get Beatin or come close,but lyric juss gets clapped
Question his Manhood,so instead of FL,Lets take it to Bitchslapped
showed him the path to righteousness,..Faggot entered the vault
so i Killed, pushhed brains thru art paper,So he can picture his thoughts
Bitch is Distraught, Too Fat to get up and control his own Fate
cuz most kids Hold down the fort, while Lyrics juss pullin his Weight
dude is Obviously a misfit among elite, might as well leave it to Beaver
and he's delerious, thats why he's Droppin Hot, cuz he's gota high fever
called me out in Bitchslapped...so i accepted pronto...Fosheezy my neezy
cuz cats from Minnesota aint been on a hot streak since January's in Philly

Look at his callout in Bitch slapped...that explained 9th bar...not filler

[Laureate]

Kid is leavin himself open, my punches are connectin willingly
He drops shit and crap at the same time, to show his versatility
Fuckin bitch I leave you shook, boot you on a losing vacation
Make you pay the price when I school ya, like private education,
All your punches are played man, only herbs like your style
And we can all tell your washed up, so your jus in de-Nile
I’m rippin this faggot, and not the way this dude likes
My rhymes sting ya, wounds in-sult your weak types
Sonnin his whack ass, you’ll be the shaking one
Towin your ass…leave you shook from no Parking-son

[micfluent]

in my opininon this battle was really weak.........

first of all.......
lets start with...
versatility

MEh...In LIke Jin....Qiik Keystyle
^^^lol wtf^^^^y did u say that

i didnt really like the opener .....but it was the best part of your verse....

dude is Obviously a misfit among elite, might as well leave it to Beaver
and he's delerious, thats why he's Droppin Hot, cuz he's gota high fever
^^^didnt like that line......^^^^^

u said Fosheezy my neezy.....lol wtf

Look at his callout in Bitch slapped...that explained 9th bar...not filler
^^^.....there arent 9 bars........9 lines............^^

arite.........
on to
lyric

your opener seemed a little played to me....but it was the best part of your verse....
de-nile line was really played.....

i read this battle over like 5 times......

i still dont understand how some of your lines were punches......

the only props i can give to you guys is structure.........you structure and flow was tite......
but both of u need more inner rhyming and multis.........
up your vocab too.........versatility had better vocab though......

well my conclusion is that.......
the best line in the battle was.....
Kid is leavin himself open, my punches are connectin willingly
He drops shit and crap at the same time, to show his versatility

but i gotta give the battle to.....
versatility for better vocab..more hard hitting punches....

close battle.......

[Laureate]

its called wittyness man...dont get the lines, dont bother voting son...and and why are you voting based on things that dont matter in a text battle...like structure, vocab, and multis....herb

[micfluent]

i thought your opener was good....

but u gotta admit this is pretty played..
All your punches are played man, only herbs like your style
And we can all tell your washed up, so your jus in de-Nile

ive heard that so many times....

i basically gave it to him for creativiy you kno....?

you gotta admit man your punches didnt hit too hard....

this was the best line of the battle though

Kid is leavin himself open, my punches are connectin willingly
He drops shit and crap at the same time, to show his versatility

[micfluent]

it was a close call.........but i thought he came harder.....

[micfluent]

i duno i read it over again u mite of won i jus can tell when i voted i was thinking he won so ill jus stick with that........its too close to really call....

jus hope you get some more votes from other people......

[Laureate]

aight man...I'm not hating on your honesty..Im jus sayin..things like flow and structure and multis and vocab don't matter in text battles

[micfluent]

flow structure and multis and vocab do mater dawg.......at least on other sites.....im new to this site so i dont kno people view matters on this site........

i mean i kno punches are the most important thing.....

but flow structure multis and vocab definitely are some part of your voting .....at least on b-boys // rapcityz// 411hype............

[Laureate]

This is RB....that stuff doesnt matter...you'll learn that the more your on this site

[Siberian]

most people get Beatin or come close,but lyric juss gets clapped
Question his Manhood,so instead of FL,Lets take it to Bitchslapped
k
showed him the path to righteousness,..Faggot entered the vault
so i Killed, pushhed brains thru art paper,So he can picture his thoughts
this could have been worded alot better
Bitch is Distraught, Too Fat to get up and control his own Fate
cuz most kids Hold down the fort, while Lyrics juss pullin his Weight
played
dude is Obviously a misfit among elite, might as well leave it to Beaver
and he's delerious, thats why he's Droppin Hot, cuz he's gota high fever
not good punch
called me out in Bitchslapped...so i accepted pronto...Fosheezy my neezy
cuz cats from Minnesota aint been on a hot streak since January's in Philly
lol ...ahh ok




Kid is leavin himself open, my punches are connectin willingly
He drops shit and crap at the same time, to show his versatility
shit and crap are the same thing, good concept but shit and some other word would have been netter , or worded better or someting
Fuckin bitch I leave you shook, boot you on a losing vacation
Make you pay the price when I school ya, like private education,
meh
All your punches are played man, only herbs like your style
And we can all tell your washed up, so your jus in de-Nile
fine
I’m rippin this faggot, and not the way this dude likes
My rhymes sting ya, wounds in-sult your weak types
meh
Sonnin his whack ass, you’ll be the shaking one
Towin your ass…leave you shook from no Parking-son
k

this was a weak battle, no really hard or funny punches
but vers alot fo ur stuff was played and i dont like that

V/ Lyric

hit my batles
pz

[Mr. Key]

most people get Beatin or come close,but lyric juss gets clapped
Question his Manhood,so instead of FL,Lets take it to Bitchslapped
showed him the path to righteousness,..Faggot entered the vault
so i Killed, pushhed brains thru art paper,So he can picture his thoughts

vs

Kid is leavin himself open, my punches are connectin willingly
He drops shit and crap at the same time, to show his versatility
Fuckin bitch I leave you shook, boot you on a losing vacation
Make you pay the price when I school ya, like private education,
Sonnin his whack ass, you’ll be the shaking one
Towin your ass…leave you shook from no Parking-son

Vote Lyric for more wit and harder hittin punches, but ILL KILL YOU, if i see another another wordplay ive used in ur battles!, naw j/p. But Versatility came with some iiight stuff, ur 3rd bar wasnt effective since Lyric posted a pic and i happened to see it. Other then that u had a alright verse but lyric jus came harder and wittier.
VOTE: LYRIC

[jerz killer]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164292

showed him the path to righteousness,..Faggot entered the vault
so i Killed, pushhed brains thru art paper,So he can picture his thoughts

vs.

nothing

Versatility-came stronger with the punches,structure, and multies.Some of the punches were a little personal but your lines need more personals and more punches, no more fillers.Keep up the good work.

Lyrics-u need 2 work on your punches and personals.I only saw a few punches in your verses u need to elevate more. U had a few wordings but not enough to beat versatility.
V/versatility hit my link

[Laureate]

uppin numba 4. .