Forever on My Lips

thanks man, she loved it.

this was interesting for some reason. it seemed as if the category this was put into was described as if,
it were in a different analog. you know what im sayin?
for instance, the perspective in this peice was about a girl, ok well,
it was like the whole concept was a real big twist, you know? sorda like fitting in with something else.
you know what im sayin?
anyways,
i thought this was very creative mixed with a little bit of originality. and that equals up to be,
a decent peice.
overall, nice read and very nice work Ace.
keep writing and doing what you do.
be strong and stay stong.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154671

Return.....Thanx.

thanks man, it makes sense, but then it doesnt. lol.

This was ill. One of my favorie pieces from you. The scheme was nice and your wording is always good. I enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154709

graci'ius.