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KI:
u named yungkiss, but aint got no kiss, u just yung
ur lines done, wacker then if ur puberty ass sung
Weak opening line
lower then the fuken san francisco 49ers
my shit is high class, ur ass still in the minors
A little bit played but better usage of metaphors
1 of the worlds finest, i flow like dmx, rap like 2pac
stuck in this situation, then if u were on a plane while its bein hi-jacked
Wasnt feeling this one. Didnt rhyme or go together well.
while im on it, might as well sell a platinum dissin u yung boy
killin ur generation slow, yes now ur an enemy, lil play-toy
Wtf
quit bitchin, lets get shit rippin try this closure
ill leave ur bitch ass embarrassed, this site is ready for ur exposure
Forced but I'll take it as almost decent
Yung Kiss
Face-Facts, Killa could have Aids in a package, and not throw a sick-(w)rap
Like I stole your ‘book-bag’, in this battle I got your ‘Back-Packed’
That was coo, I think its a fairly good opener
My Lines trigger his ‘nervous system’, he’s ‘hush’ and the ‘Kids-timid’
He knows he’s like ‘toilet paper’ he won’t be around when this ‘shits-finished’
LoL Good
His names in red? But, Popping ‘zits’ is the only time he ‘wipes-out-heads’
And his Punches remind me of ‘mummies’ the way they ‘come up dead’
The first line was a good punch the second bar fell short
Awe look at Killa.. He thinks because he hit puberty, he’s a man now
This battle is like ‘thumb-wrestling’ I got this win, ‘hands-down’
No not feelin, it was kinda like "Filler material if you know what I mean
Like throwing up the “white flag” you lost-this-battle
He thinks he’s hard? But honestly killa, comes more soft-than-cattle
Wow AWFUL finishing line lol
Killa Instinct didnt come nearly as witty as Yung Kiss as far I can decipher. My suggestion to KI would be to put more emphasis on punchlines because thats where Yung got you. :thumbup:
aight cool 2-1 my way so far uppin!!! good battle yung
Vote - Killa
Reason:
Yungkiss just came either completely played...or didn't have nothing hard in his verse...he needs to drop his quotes and his long ass structure...it's a bit annoying to read....Killa had the consistency and better punches even though he didn't have many himself....at least he made some sort of effort to put in a good punch or two in...and he had a better more professional type structure...therefore...he wins...
Return the favor in one of these:
PostmorteM vs. Assazin (3-0)
PostmorteM vs. 0k (4-0)
That vote doesn't count its dick riding and your vote was lazy
ey 1 of the rules was no bitchin, hows he dikridin. he just explained his vote, and if its dikridin the mods will noe that. he explained y too so i dont see y it should..
Ok...fine
Killa Instinct's Overall Verse: 16/50Quote:
Originally Posted by Killa_Instinct
Yungkiss's Overall Verse: 13/50Quote:
Originally Posted by Yungkiss
Vote - Killa Instinct because he had a few better punches than Yungkiss's played ones or the ones that were just meh...
Now check the links in my above post
Uhh.. This battle sucked ass..
But whatever.. It was close..
..But still wack..
Killa Instinct
structure is good.. flow is decent.. u had some multis.. played wordplay.. like.. most of that has been used millions of times.. maybe a few decent punches, at best.. most of them were played again, or just wack.. no good personals..
YungKiss
structure is decent.. some of ur lines were stretched though.. flow is decent as well.. pretty nice multis.. wordplay was pretty played as well, but still decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. and barely connected at that.. the other ones, like ur closer and such, were just wack.. no good personals..
Overall
Killa had the better structure.. both had a decent flow.. both had played punches.. neither had personals.. Yungkiss had more multis, and better, though still played, wordplay.. so basing off of that.. Yungkiss gets my vote..
VOTE - YUNGKISS
Please return the favor on my battle..
..Its somewhere floatin around on the first page, entitled 'Daedal vs. Makaveli Trained'
Werd.
hurry the fuk up dont sleep on this.. my guy is banned to so fuk i only got the upps.. cumon ppl vote n leave links on this..
Well both of ya'll need to elevate rhyming isn't that hard and you didn't even do that all that well punches if what you gotta worry about and you were throwing slaps around. If it takes people time to realize what you said you said it whack keep the punches simple the rhymes complex. I'd give it to yung his rhymes were better and I've already heard what killa was speaking.
Killa_Instinct:
u named yungkiss, but aint got no kiss, u just yung
ur lines done, wacker then if ur puberty ass sung
^^Nah...
lower then the fuken san francisco 49ers
my shit is high class, ur ass still in the minors
^^Another nah...
1 of the worlds finest, i flow like dmx, rap like 2pac
stuck in this situation, then if u were on a plane while its bein hi-jacked
^^Nope
while im on it, might as well sell a platinum dissin u yung boy
killin ur generation slow, yes now ur an enemy, lil play-toy
^^Another nope...
quit bitchin, lets get shit rippin try this closure
ill leave ur bitch ass embarrassed, this site is ready for ur exposure
^^Weak finish
Yungkiss:
Face-Facts, Killa could have Aids in a package, and not throw a sick-(w)rap
Like I stole your ‘book-bag’, in this battle I got your ‘Back-Packed’
^^This was either weak, or worded real badly
My Lines trigger his ‘nervous system’, he’s ‘hush’ and the ‘Kids-timid’
He knows he’s like ‘toilet paper’ he won’t be around when this ‘shits-finished’
^^This didn't make sense man, cause the only time toilet paper IS around is when your 'shits finished'
His names in red? But, Popping ‘zits’ is the only time he ‘wipes-out-heads’
And his Punches remind me of ‘mummies’ the way they ‘come up dead’
^^This was ok, nothin too hard tho still...
Awe look at Killa.. He thinks because he hit puberty, he’s a man now
This battle is like ‘thumb-wrestling’ I got this win, ‘hands-down’
^^This was another concept you used wrong, cause you could use the same one but refering to 'arm wrestling' rather than 'thumb wrestling'
Like throwing up the “white flag” you lost-this-battle
He thinks he’s hard? But honestly killa, comes more soft-than-cattle
^^What the fuck..??
Yo yungkiss came with better concepts but used them really badly, tried to make shit look all complex but really half of the bars made no sense. Killa had a weak verse but I'm gonna go with him because his shit was actually comprehendable. Pce
Vote = Killa Instinct
I think that Yungkiss got this battle because i feel that Yungkiss came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Yungkiss got it they were used effectifely and were on point Killa u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Yungkiss good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Yungkiss and flow and structure i'll give to Yungkiss.
V/Yungkiss There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly
last upp. sum1 finish this n hurry, shit shoulda been done ages ago..
ey mad dog ur shit is the same vote on chittown riddla vs krispy except u rearranged the words.. u fuked up man, thats low