Sir Loin vs. woot

[woot]

10 Lines.

30 Minute Check.

1 Hour Drop.

No Swaying.

[woot]

check. my verse will be up soon.

[Sir Loin]

In this...

[Sir Loin]

Aight look...

I'll bang the fifth, leave ya veins in twist...brains amiss
red stain ya fits, keep shootin till lead strains your ribs
I'm walkin this earth with many unbelievable actions
& usin this 10 min key to murder ya like an evil blacksmith
flip it like a dolphin, rap so sick the mic needs flu shots
I'm makin Woot look stupid now, like flat bitches in tube tops
My bars will abuse ya, somebody please talk to this loser
Cuz woots no-comp, like my room was b4 I bought a Computer
Now I switch pace with spits laced and extremele sick sprays
these 10 lines just left Woot 'abondoned rubbish'...a 'ripped waste'!

[woot]

Sir Loin:

ya lines sway more eyes than palm trees in deep wind.
Loin spoils from core to limb. its sunday, and ya still the weak end. (weekend)
ya index fingers key softly, sounding the best youve heard.
my target title, is the first & only time i'll address you Sir.
hes 4-2. reduce by two and hes 50 percent at text.
why are you helping guests? when your just an apprentice at best.
hell probaly drop a verse on how hell kill me, or lynch my neck.
ya signature is more embarassing than ya rec, hints Not vet.
read slowly, or leave collecting ya dome from dubri.
either ya have mad guts for steak. or ya didnt know it was ME.

[Sir Loin]

Uppin this ish...

[Killa_Instinct]

aight

LOIN
I'll bang the fifth, leave ya veins in twist...brains amiss
red stain ya fits, keep shootin till lead strains your ribs
(no, dont act hard, just tease him not threaten)

I'm walkin this earth with many unbelievable actions
& usin this 10 min key to murder ya like an evil blacksmith
(not bad, but neva rhymed)

flip it like a dolphin, rap so sick the mic needs flu shots
I'm makin Woot look stupid now, like flat bitches in tube tops
(lol, funny but sorta weak)

My bars will abuse ya, somebody please talk to this loser
Cuz woots no-comp, like my room was b4 I bought a Computer
(wtf,, no)

Now I switch pace with spits laced and extremele sick sprays
these 10 lines just left Woot 'abondoned rubbish'...a 'ripped waste'!
(self glory,, spare me)

ur verse was average, needed work on ur punches and metas.. i think if u used more wordplay and metas instead of self glorification u woulda done nicely.. u mite have underestimated this newb..

WOOT
ya lines sway more eyes than palm trees in deep wind.
Loin spoils from core to limb. its sunday, and ya still the weak end. (weekend)
(nice, good open)

ya index fingers key softly, sounding the best youve heard.
my target title, is the first & only time i'll address you Sir.
(no)

hes 4-2. reduce by two and hes 50 percent at text.
why are you helping guests? when your just an apprentice at best.
(meh.. wasnt much of a punch)

hell probaly drop a verse on how hell kill me, or lynch my neck.
ya signature is more embarassing than ya rec, hints Not vet.
(nah)

read slowly, or leave collecting ya dome from dubri.
either ya have mad guts for steak. or ya didnt know it was ME.
(hmm. pretty weak)

this was another average verse, but had more punches and few metas. ur structure was basic like loin and no wordplay used much there.. both need an extension of vocab in their verses.
overall pretty average battle here, i give this to woot cause of more punches, metas and not much use of self glory.. both came out to rap but maybe loin underestimated woot, i dont noe but woot got this 1 in my opinion, good luck to both..
hit this up plz wit an honest vote.. thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155960

[Sir Loin]

Uppin this ish...

#2...

[TheHandsOfGod]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155525
return the favor allright...........ok..cough cough

Sir
I'll bang the fifth, leave ya veins in twist...brains amiss
red stain ya fits, keep shootin till lead strains your ribs
-good flow n multis thas it..
I'm walkin this earth with many unbelievable actions
& usin this 10 min key to murder ya like an evil blacksmith
-no
flip it like a dolphin, rap so sick the mic needs flu shots
I'm makin Woot look stupid now, like flat bitches in tube tops
-atempts to punch..but no..lol..could have been better
My bars will abuse ya, somebody please talk to this loser
Cuz woots no-comp, like my room was b4 I bought a Computer
-coo coo..this was decient
Now I switch pace with spits laced and extremele sick sprays
these 10 lines just left Woot 'abondoned rubbish'...a 'ripped waste'!
-good finisher...

k now Woot
ya lines sway more eyes than palm trees in deep wind.
Loin spoils from core to limb. its sunday, and ya still the weak end. (weekend)
-no
ya index fingers key softly, sounding the best youve heard.
my target title, is the first & only time i'll address you Sir.
-this is decient...bad setup thugh
hes 4-2. reduce by two and hes 50 percent at text.
why are you helping guests? when your just an apprentice at best.
-no
hell probaly drop a verse on how hell kill me, or lynch my neck.
ya signature is more embarassing than ya rec, hints Not vet.
-decient set up..weak punch
read slowly, or leave collecting ya dome from dubri.
either ya have mad guts for steak. or ya didnt know it was ME.
-no this was weak

Woot wins this battle..better punches....in all..and he came with some ok wordplay n decient multis....good battle kids

[TheHandsOfGod]

shit..my bad...^it wont leme edit...i mean Sir wins....i got mixed up..cuz i read woots verse last..sorry...change that...Sir Loin wins this battle..from better punches ..n multis n wordplay..thanks

[woot]

uppin, i need votes. close this cmon.

[Sir Loin]

Uppin this ish...

#3...

[u n r e a L]

v/ woot. return the link

this shit was pretty close, but woot had this because he had the better punches/concepts. his verse was also overall better. sir loin came out okay, expected more from him and his verse seem forced, but my vote goes to woot.

hit the link in sigs guys

[Sir Loin]

Uppin this ish...

#4...

[Jimi]

I'll bang the fifth, leave ya veins in twist...brains amiss
red stain ya fits, keep shootin till lead strains your ribs
NOT BAD FOR AN OPENER.
I'm walkin this earth with many unbelievable actions
& usin this 10 min key to murder ya like an evil blacksmith
NAH THAT SEEMS LIKE IT WAS RUSHED INTO A BAR. NEXT TIME TAKE YOUR TIME AND LET IT FLOW
flip it like a dolphin, rap so sick the mic needs flu shots
I'm makin Woot look stupid now, like flat bitches in tube tops
NOT A DIRECT PUNCH, BUT IF YOU HAD MORE TIME YOU COULD HAVE MADE IT ALOT BETTER.
My bars will abuse ya, somebody please talk to this loser
Cuz woots no-comp, like my room was b4 I bought a Computer
FUNNY, BUT STILL NOTHIN HARD HITTING IN THERE.
Now I switch pace with spits laced and extremele sick sprays
these 10 lines just left Woot 'abondoned rubbish'...a 'ripped waste'!
WASNT FEELIN THIS. Over all 4/10 seems rushed. You had a good opener, your best bar. Just went down from there. Dont rush next time, just let it flow.


ya lines sway more eyes than palm trees in deep wind.
Loin spoils from core to limb. its sunday, and ya still the weak end. (weekend)
OK...
ya index fingers key softly, sounding the best youve heard.
my target title, is the first & only time i'll address you Sir.
GOOD PUNCH, LOL
hes 4-2. reduce by two and hes 50 percent at text.
why are you helping guests? when your just an apprentice at best.
DEEP...NICE BAR...
hell probaly drop a verse on how hell kill me, or lynch my neck.
ya signature is more embarassing than ya rec, hints Not vet.
I GET WHAT YOUR TRYING TO PUT, BUT BE MORE SPECIFIC OR IT LOOKS PRE-WRITTEN. AND IT WAS A LITTLE STRETCHED BUT I SEE WHAT YOUR GOING AT.
read slowly, or leave collecting ya dome from dubri.
either ya have mad guts for steak. or ya didnt know it was ME.
DIDNT GET IT. MAYBE IM DUMB. You had enough to take sir loin on this though. overall 7/10 pretty nice with the apprentice line. Keep it up congrats on the win.

vote/ woot