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YOU GUYS WERE RUNNING TOGETHER....THE WHOLE RACE
THIS WAS A PRETTY GOOD ONE...
Sabotage- you came nice, with flawless structure.nice flow along with that. some of yourpunches hit, some were way off. your wordplay was ok. good creativit. you had ok consistency. Sab used multi's better... GOOD
Wright- Nice verse. the lines that daedal quoted were the nicestfrom you. you had nice structure, can be better dont space out the bars. though you had some downfalls.
BUT overall, SABOTAGE VERSE HAD TOUCHED ME MORE
VOTE---SABOTAGE
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vote- Sabotage
reason:
Sabotage- i really didnt think this was a close battle. I red urs, then i went to wright's, and i could just tell the difference in skill level. But u had a good structure. Wordplay was good, and flow was good, wordplay helped alot. Punches werent bad, u had some good ones, but then u had some aight ones. Some fillere here and there, but u gotta have some filler on suck a long battle. Ur vocab was nice, and personals were good.
Wright- U had some good punches as well. U had aight structure, stretched lined here and there, but its all good. Vocab was nice, same as sabotage. Personals, u had some straight personals. FLow was good, it was off alittle at points. Punches, werent that bad. I like ya 7th and 8th lines were my fav., but i just think sabotage took this in flow, and structure.
Vote- sabotage
yo sabotage wanna hit up one of my battles since i hit urs up thanks.
heres the link: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130465
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wow this battle got me confused as fuck...
10 lines people...10 lines!...any more lines...
i start seeing shit thats not there...so...
S takes struc...which in contrast takes flow...
WM17 had his shit everywhere...im not even,
trying to read a book my man...so...id say...
WM17 had decent shit...but fondaled filler with,
punchlines which fucked up overall diss value...
S had decent punches but they wasnt all that great
but he takes vocab which gave him a lot of points...
and i felt S took personals...eventhough they were bland
after reviewing this battle several times i felt WM17 won
but now it dawned on me that S edged a win out of his ass!
hit my battles up...
