heres the link for my battle........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121065
vote and ill poll mine :)
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heres the link for my battle........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121065
vote and ill poll mine :)
i'ma burn dis 2 (jammin'jobus & da classic
ya both talk crap
it was like u 2 were licking my dogs sack
n eating its shit from de asscrack
now jammin'jobus
ya cant rap cuz ya dont know how ta kuss
even wen ya got god ta truss
ya fuckin mental, go back ta yo mental bus
n wen ya take a shit remember ta flush
especially wen yo shit is all mushed
ya dont know what ta do in dis situation
but i still say congratulation
dawg i have 1 question, y do u like bananas up yo ass wen yo in a bending posision
yo dawg yo a friut
yo lucky dats all i got ta say bout ya, and remember dat my name is J-CUTE
yo check it
now i'ma talk bout da classic
he likes ta suck my dogs dick
doesnt dat make yall sick
ya little prick
probably dont know how ta lick
fuckin wen i see u i'ma fuckin shuve a stick..up yo ass and if tis too big.. i'll still make ti fit n teach ya how ta spit
cut yo head open n make u do da split
ya both dont know how ta rhyme
out dare doing faggit crimes
squeeze ya both like yo a fuckin slime
yo guys probably live in a box togetha n asking peeps for dimes
i'm new ta dis website place
n i've been batteling 4 a couple of days
n still get more votes dan u 2 cuz ya both discrase
peeps hate ya both so much day wanna choke u with dare shoe lace
gotta go bitches
n yo jammin'jobus check if any people have any bananas in dare fridges
PEACE!!!!
vote-jobus
reason:
jobus- ur verse was just better all around. U had good structure, good wordplay, aight vocab, aight metas, personals were straight, and punches were aight. U had a good enough plow to beat this dude, but its straight u got the win.
Da Classic- u need to elevate mayne. I was reading ya verse and i like it kinda at first, but then i noticed u keep ryhming the same words, so that through me off. Ya verse was weak, u had weak personals, weak punches, weak vocab, aight structure, and aight flow. Elevate mayne, no hate, just elevate.
vote- Jubus
hey guys how bout hit ma battle up, since i took the time to hit this one up, aight, peace, heres da link, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122857
Can you please kill yourself???Quote:
Originally Posted by J-CUTE
or can a moderator kindly ban this guy for not being able to read the rules
anyways your really shitty
fuck can an admin delete the post above
wrong account.....
I wasn't really feeling this battle....
Da Classic was just plain wack. He used the word rhyme three times to, well, rhyme with plus he even used it three times in one line! You need some real practice before you go challenging people like Jobus. You need some help with your flow a little bit and a witty punch would be nice. Actually, just work at an actual punch.....
Jobus, I wasn't feeling this one either. I've seen you come much harder than this and quite frankly, I think you didn't feel like wasting a verse. With all that said, I still think you were better than Da Classic. You actually threw punches and you had a pretty solid flow. You had very little wit behind your punches, but that was a lot more than I can say for your opponent.....
Vote - Jobus
Da_Classic, aka Da_Herb..i'm sorry to say, but that was a poor verse. None of your lines had any punches..none of them..you had an attempted personal, but like I said, it didn't punch. Structure was whack, ditch the caps 'n /s. Add some punches to your verse man.
Jammin' came pretty shoddy too, but obviously he realized that wasting a good verse would be stupid. Mostly bad punches, couple didn't punch, but reguardless, he wins because he had any punches at all.
/v Jammin'