RASCAL 'vs Big Tissle *round 2*

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14linez max........
house rulez....
due Tuesday Midnight *GMT*......
I spit 1st,......

[נєм]

checkity check in i surpose.........

[Big Tissle]

check in flow when you readycuzo..................

[נєм]

shit fucked it up... it should be......

this kid wasn't lookin to fite

yo you one of my homeboys ite?

,
yes man i think you have real potential.. you could win this, yea rite./
wrong move leavin your location.. " aplace where nothing exists",
well thats good.. bcus when i've murked you bitch you wont be missed,
heres a tip in both battles iused quotes.. becareful they get you dissed./
bitch your so annoyin.. follow me like shit on my tread,
killed you of you aint missed.. well its a shame that your dead,
but dont blame me.. all of my punches to your head./
the best line you had was.. "check in flow when you ready cuzo./
thats why i sonned you twice.. and your votes totted up to Zero

Line 4 & 7 are linked with him not being missed........

[Big Tissle]

you think those rhymes are going to get you to the top...
shit it looks like you got them off a ceral box.
yeah my rhymes are good what you gonna do...
ima have zero votes youll have -2.
in a place where nothing exist its good im the only resident...
cause when i kill you no can look for the evidence.
(its a shame that your dead.) is that your best punch?
ive heard better on a episode of the brady bunch.
and if think you still gonna come on top...
im like the ceral ill make snap,crackle,and pop.
you know i better start quittin...
cause even if i lose youll still keep bitchin.

[Big Tissle]

uppin for votes.

No swaying.
-Axe

[CAMROK]

blehh... are u trying to up your wins column? round 2*

Tissle- ur structure is off, need to get that fixed... and that also messes up your flow a whole lot.. u need to reword ur lines better so it all flows and also reword to make ur punches alot better, and hard hitting cause they weren't. you had some ok ideas and concepts I guess.... but u didn't express anything well

rascal- comn.. up your game.. this shouldn't be a round 2, your structure is fine and flow is fine.. your punches were fairly decent, alot better then his.. alot of them were pretty wack though.. needs more originality I think, but overall you had clearly enough to take this battle.. u could probably reword things better as well

vote- rascal

[נєм]

uppin this ya'll.. leave a link ill return the favour.........

[Big Tissle]

uppin for votes...................................

[Reeco]

shit fucked it up... it should be......

this kid wasn't lookin to fite,
yes man i think you have real potential.. you could win this, yea rite./
like the use of quote. made me laugh
wrong move leavin your location.. " aplace where nothing exists",
well thats good.. bcus when i've murked you bitch you wont be missed,
heres a tip in both battles iused quotes.. becareful they get you dissed./
weak
bitch your so annoyin.. follow me like shit on my tread,
killed you of you aint missed.. well its a shame that your dead,
but dont blame me.. all of my punches to your head./
ok
the best line you had was.. "check in flow when you ready cuzo./
thats why i sonned you twice.. and your votes totted up to Zero
lol, good finish

big tissle =

you think those rhymes are going to get you to the top...
shit it looks like you got them off a ceral box.
na, weak
yeah my rhymes are good what you gonna do...
ima have zero votes youll have -2.
this was ok
in a place where nothing exist its good im the only resident...
cause when i kill you no can look for the evidence.
ok
(its a shame that your dead.) is that your best punch?
ive heard better on a episode of the brady bunch.
ummm ok i guess
and if think you still gonna come on top...
im like the ceral ill make snap,crackle,and pop.
wack
you know i better start quittin...
cause even if i lose youll still keep bitchin.
ummm na

rascal = ok spit, but i've seen etter form you!!! flow and structure were good and punches hit wen they needed to. liked the first 3 lines. keep it up homie!!

big = ummmm ok. flow was good and also structure you had some ok likes but aslo some wack ones!! personal were ok!!

vote = my vote goes to rascal as he came with better punches and a witier verse!!! pz

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uppin this ya'll.. leave a link ill return the favour..
iwill return the favour honestly...

[Big Tissle]

anybody want to do my sig?????????????????????????

[Jammin' Jobus]

this kid wasn't lookin to fite
Quote:
Originally Posted by Big Tissle
yo you one of my homeboys ite?

,
yes man i think you have real potential.. you could win this, yea rite./
Umm this was an ok opener...a bit played but decent
wrong move leavin your location.. " aplace where nothing exists",
well thats good.. bcus when i've murked you bitch you wont be missed,
heres a tip in both battles iused quotes.. becareful they get you dissed./
well i guese this is one of those 3 line rhyming schemes....still its ok....ehhhh...ok punch i guesse....ok personal
bitch your so annoyin.. follow me like shit on my tread,
killed you of you aint missed.. well its a shame that your dead,
but dont blame me.. all of my punches to your head./
Still eh......not bad but not that good...
the best line you had was.. "check in flow when you ready cuzo./
thats why i sonned you twice.. and your votes totted up to Zero
o this was way better than your other lines best line of your verse

I wasnt flowing with your verse madly but again
it wasnt that bad but far from your best
keep elevating...ok punches i guesse....ok personals
didnt really see any wordplay or multis but whatever





you think those rhymes are going to get you to the top...
shit it looks like you got them off a ceral box.
warning didnt rhyme didnt even really have a good punch
yeah my rhymes are good what you gonna do...
ima have zero votes youll have -2.
ummm ok cept the leght of the lines....the punch was ok but...not great
in a place where nothing exist its good im the only resident...
cause when i kill you no can look for the evidence.
this is ok....a little more complexity than the rest of your battle but still not really a punch
(its a shame that your dead.) is that your best punch?
ive heard better on a episode of the brady bunch.
wackity wack wack wack is because you rapped about the brady bunch
and if think you still gonna come on top...
im like the ceral ill make snap,crackle,and pop.
still ok but not really a punch...
you know i better start quittin...
cause even if i lose youll still keep bitchin.
didnt rhyme ...umm a guesse its sort of a punch kinda

I was diffinetly not feeling your verse...didnt really see any punchs wordplay...or multis....keep elevating...didnt really flow either




anyway this battle was a little sub-par.....not very good but because rascal had a few decent punchs....ill have to give this to him

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uppin3 come on people dont sleep on this....
if you drop a link ill peep it for ya'll....

[Jug Uh Knot]

Vote= Rascal

Rascal= You Came Ok, Your Verse Was Almost Strechted, But You Had Played Concepts, Your Punches Were Soft But Flowed Decent. Fix Ya Structure, You Should Know That By Now Your Wordplay Was Decent, Vocab Was Bad..You Can Elevate..Overall 6/10

Big Tissle= You Came Weak, Your Verse Was Short But Missing The Sweet, Your Punches Were Bad And Your Flow Was Ok..Your Structure Was Scattered, Fix That, And Your Wordplay Was Ok, You Had No Vocab, Peep Rb.com Center, You'l Elevate Overall 3/10

Vote Rascal

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