sikspita vs timeless

I will vote on this battle if you vote on the battles here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119117
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118816

I will return a honest vote if you give me one
peace

Time - nice punches, flow, structure, and vocab was nice, good drop, u came hard and i feel it got u the win id say 17/20

Sik - ur verse was a lil newbish, no punches, flow was descent, but really had no personals, so thats why im going with Time on this one no hate dawg.. 13/20

vote Timeless

can yall return the fav. ill poll when i reach 100
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...60#post1212160

Punches: Time, pretty weak punches but much better than sick's
Wordplay: Time, although played as fuck, wrap is wordplay
Multis: Neither, both had only 1 syllables
Personals: Neither, no personals
Opener: Tie, both were weak
Closer: Tie, both finished weak

Vote - Timeless

Very weak battle, I've seen a lot better from timeless, and sikspitta is just overall weak. You need to actually make punches sikspitta, and timeless, your punches were off a fuck. Try harder or something.

Ya pore's spread and let the sweat give away ya fuckin emmotional status
^^^ Rhymed nicely, good vocab, is all I can say

uppin.............................................

very weak battle thought that timeless could have done much better with his opener and his finisher, he could of tried to ass better punchlines , and add multies.

silk spit ya verse was all weak u didnt have punchlines at least time less put puchlines,
u didnt have good mutlies 1 syllable mutlies that weak,

line from timeless:

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Sickspitta’s like a voiceless mcees when spittin, he’s only shootin blanks
A tougher fact, anal sex with army boys, is the only time u going up a rank
Lol ya a fake ass white boy, your from Columbus, u must be the only ones
I spit ace, and flow like the runs, so I’m putting an end to your case, like sex with guns
You should just stand back ,and leave the battling to men, or you’ll get hurt

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PRETTY WEAK

line from slikspit:

Quote:

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should be my apprentice, my helper, my golf caddy
man id to embarassed to even say im ur daddy
look at his battle record then look at mine
but ur gonna lose this one, ur all out of 'time'

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VERY VERY WEAK

Punches: Time, pretty weak(but okay)
Wordplay: Time
Multis: Neither,
Personals: Neither, no personals
Opener: Tie, both werent good
Closer: Tie, both thought could have been better

vote- timeless
please return the favor in one of my battles please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119199

can u return the favor in this battle thread please :) thank u ^^^

aight this was a weak battle, sik that was a weak verse with no punches at all, you need to put more personals in it and get better wordplay.

time- some punches in the rhyme, some good lines, but you played a few. you need more personals in, you didnt get any in.

v/ time

ok drop an honest vote on mine plz

uppin.....................................come on 1 more vote!!!

time less can u vote on this battle please so i can get it closed out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118714

uppin............................................. ...

come on 1 more vote needed!!! be cool and vote. please. this is gettin major slept on!!!!

Well Timeless killed the kid.

sikspita- that was a typical newbish verse, nothing at all in it. But if you stick around you will get better. Dont talk about yourself, and think outside the box. Try get some multis in there and yeh :) ELEVATE

Timeless- ah not bad. Some shit was nice. Good opener and Closer. Your lines were a bit strached taking away from the connection of the punches. But you showed plenty to win this by a landslide.

V\Timeless