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Ill: You had a good way of starting, wasn't feeling your structure, stop using all the "//"
your flow wasn't as good as canna's was, you tied with personals, but u were definitely more creative.
Canna:Good structure and flow overall, but i your verse didn't do anything for me except for "victories goin down the drain, shoulda thought of 'bein-a-plummer!', and that's still kinda played, i also wasn't feeling your starter or closers. So let's add this up. Good personals.
Flow-Can
Structure-Can
Personals-Tie
Starter-Ill
Creativity-Ill
Punches-Ill
Closer-Ill
i pleed for you to vote on all three of my battles, the first 2 have been going on for 2 months, and the second has been going on for a week, but do your best to vote on all of them, you made a deal that you'd vote, so at least vote on 2 of them
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lol where the hell have u ever heard a line even close to that? lol .. it's aiight tho, 2-2 tie . fam ..
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can took this with more creative punchlines it was a close battle throughout but i felt like can came harder with mulites, personals and disses that hit ill hard
ill just came straight up weak you could use alot of improvement
drop a vote in this battle can http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...47#post1262547
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upping .................................................. ........
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This was pretty good, but...
ill: I liked your verse, but you coulda come harder. However, I liked what you had to say, had me ROFL and all. But it was kinda basic, and your personals were kinda off. By the way, I don't think he's a newbie at all... just FYI. Anyway, keep elevatin'.
Cannabarz˛: You didn't have as much humor as him, but you had crazy metas and good multies, which served also as punches. Work on making your punches more personal, a common difficulty here cause nobody reveals anything in their profiles. Anyway, good battle. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Cannabarz˛
*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*
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whats that one word im lookin for...........
OH YEA!
motherfuckin uppin :thumbup:
:laugh: ...please?
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this is a close one if i may say so myself.
ill- came pretty good. nice punches here and there. you're best ones were your first two bars. you kinda lost it towards the end. i'd say your closer was the weakest. maybe if you worded it better you coulda had it. your structure could've been fixed and your flow was good.
cannabarz- came pretty nice. every line was a punch. nice consistency there. the structure was near flawless as well as the flow. really good in those aspects. he had a better personal but this battle was pretty even. but...
vote- cannabarz...came more consistent, his lines connected, ill. kinda lost it after the middle. props to both.
peace
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^ thanks for votes ppl..dont sleep here plzzzzz
Uppin-3
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Good drops by both of you but .Ill. had this.. barely i didnt think by the looks of it ill would have won but when i broke down the verses i think he really did win. his punches were freakin alsome but the hit hard.. as well as his personals too.. cann dis good also but i could tell he didnt come as hard as ill on this one.. really i think that ill almost took every category.. exept structure. but they were closely matched..
v/ill
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ILLS VERSE WAS OFF THE HOOK, THERE WAS ONLY 1 LINE I DIDNT LIKE WHICH WAS THE 1ST 1
GOOD USE OF MULTIES, CLEVER PUNCHES ESPECIALLY LINES 3,4,5,6
VERY ORIGINAL STUFF
CANA--B'S VERSE SOUNDED LIKE IT WAS JUST THROWN TOGETHER AND DIDNT FLOW WELL AND HIS PUCHES WERE TOO BASIC,......... UR NOT CRAP BUT ILL IS A LOT BETTER TRY AND USE PERSONALS NEXT TIME
PEEP THESE
vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940
vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
vs impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219
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^ ouch sounded lik a d/r... cuz i saw this even through out really but...
canabarz- you had some what the complextiy and came with nice structure and nice flow. i was feeling your lines n they seemed more elevated wit complexity as a sum what rising heavyweight.
.ILL.- your verse i admit was aight and had some creativity that stood out oand sum nice punches and wordplay with personals. work on yea structure
but my b\vote goes to -Ill for this one
good battle, olla at this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120283
