Thorn vs CAMROK

Camrok And Thorn, That Was Two Of The Gay'ist Lyrics I've Ever Read/i'll Leave Both Of Yall Niggas Leakin Red/cuz Ill Make Yall Hold Some Lead/in A Perminate Bed/ With Shots In Ya Head/ U Betta Understand, Because It Aint No Get Back/smooth But Crunchy Like A Kit-kat/ass Get Cracked/cuz Groupy Niggas Get Smacked/so While I Type This Shit Of The Top Of My Mind/u Look Thru Yo Notebook To Find Rhymes/come And Step To Me Cuz The Ground Around Me Is Made Of Land Mines. Faggit Muthafuckaz. Str8t Bangin. Loc. :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :thefinger (THORN & CAMROK)~~> :hump:

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wow... 1.) what the fuck are you doing??? and ... 2.) wow.... just leave.

Upppin this number (5)

VOTE this and DROP links.. damnit I will hit them.. this is taking too long

line from camrok:
Make u pout, wanna battle me.. can't stand up in a heavyweight bout
You ask how, as your lying down...
...you're just confused, I left ur head in the clouds
I leave your skill empty and finished, last drop in a cup or end of a joint
Thorn, here's some anoint-ment for the gash I make with my 'points'

line from thorn:
I'll make CAMROK look so bad......I just placed coal in his Stocking
Have you walking feelin rejected like blacks that wave For Cabs
I can see u gettin pissed............worse than PMS with No Pads

breakdown:
flow:cam
mutlies:tie
punchlines:cam
enjoy reading:cam
strcture:thorn
opener:thorn, was an okay opener
closer:camrok,was iight

overrall vote goes to camrok, had better flow, punhclines , and almost basically everything as i explained ^^^ there
please return the favor in this battle thank u

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119302

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Originally Posted by lyric

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CAMROK- You came stretched....sounded more like an OM than a battle...you had a few personals..pout where were the punches?!!!? You had like what...2? Nuthin stood out in ya verse...Shorten your lines a bit and try and put a punch in every line instead of using the first line as a set upa nd the second to punch...not a terrible verse..jus weak

Thorn- Well...you had punches...but they were mad played...and like 1 personal that was weak...A Control Alt Delete line? Come on....be more original and creative with ya verse...

That being said both can do better....This battle was close...But Ima have to side with CAMROK because he had the best punches even if he had 2

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Cams flow was alot better and he had betta punches and i enjoyed readin cams. cams hit his lines harda i thought.

Thorn had a few good punches but nothin special, you had a good opener and you set the verse out well. ya need more personals though and your flow was a bit weak.


v/ cam
ill drop the poll when i get 100 posts, only need a few more. please return the favour on my battles


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119611

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117453

if you dont vote on mine then i wont vote on yours again thanx